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Wandering Warrior: Jury - Chapter 4

🕑 Added 2023-08-23 22:16:01 +0000 UTC

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Lena M. Lucente

Well, not that I'm against cursing at a moment like that, however maybe a different curse word would be more appropriate.

Great chapter! As for the cursing, I gotta say it's fine. The main character wasn't portrayed overly serious in the first book, and it doesn't seem out of character or place in this case. Perhaps I'd choose another expression, as shouting "mother******* b****" is quite lengthy, but this is a matter of personal preference.


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