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OP Max Mage - Chapter 4
🕑 Added 2025-12-07 17:52:39 +0000 UTCYears before the oven broke, the book arrived with a grain shipment.
Max almost missed it. He was in his early twenties, running the bakery alone. His mother had been gone a few years now. He was still learning how to manage suppliers, stretch the budget, and wake up at four in the morning without someone else there to make sure he did.
The grain came in burlap sacks from a farm two days east. Fifty pounds each, stacked in the back of a cart, smelling like dust and summer. Max checked the count, signed the receipt, and started hauling the sacks into the storeroom.
The book was wedged between two sacks near the bottom of the stack. Leather cover, warped and stained. The pages were swollen with old water damage, some of them stuck together, others so faded the text was barely visible.
He almost threw it away.
But he was curious. And the bakery was quiet in the afternoons, especially during the slow season when customers were scarce and the hours stretched long. He'd been eating dinner alone for three years now. Reading gave him something to do with the silence.
He set the book aside. Finished stacking the grain. Made dinner, ate it standing at the counter the way he always did, washed the dishes, fed the sourdough starter. Then he sat down with a candle and opened the book.
The language was strange.
Not completely foreign. Some of the letters looked familiar, like they might be an older form of the common script. But the words themselves were wrong. Too long, too many consonants clustered together, sounds that didn't exist in any language Max knew.
He should have closed it. Should have tossed it in the fire or sold it to a curiosity shop for a few copper bits. That would have been the sensible thing.
Instead, he started trying to read it.
The first page was mostly illegible. Water had blurred the ink into grey smears. But a few words stood out, repeated often enough that Max figured they must be important.
One word looked like "light." Or maybe "glow." Something with that shape.
Another might have been "barrier." Or "wall." Or "shield." Hard to tell with half the letters missing.
A third word appeared dozens of times throughout the book. Max couldn't even guess at its meaning. It looked like "veth" or "vith" or maybe "vetha." He decided it probably meant "magic" or "power" or something general like that.
He tried pronouncing the words. The sounds felt awkward in his mouth, like chewing on gravel. Nothing happened. No lights, no barriers, no magical effects of any kind.
Of course not. He was a baker, not a mage. He'd never had any training. He didn't even know if he had magical talent. Some people didn't. Some people could study for years and never produce so much as a spark. The Academy in Valdris Prime took students for a decade before they graduated, and even then half of them washed out. Max had heard stories about Academy training: the precise gestures, the exact incantations, the forms that had to be perfect or the spell wouldn't work. Years of drilling the same motions until they became instinct.
He didn't have years. He didn't have teachers. He had a water-damaged book in a language he couldn't read and a bakery that needed him up at four in the morning.
But he kept trying anyway. Something about the book fascinated him. The shapes of the letters. The rhythm of the words, even if he couldn't understand them. It felt like a puzzle, and Max had always liked puzzles. His father used to bring home little wooden toys, boxes with hidden compartments, rings that seemed fused together but could be separated if you knew the trick. Max had spent hours with those toys. The book felt the same way.
That first night, he stayed up until midnight. Learned nothing useful. Went to bed frustrated but not discouraged.
The next morning, he baked bread and thought about the book.
Something about the way the words were arranged. They weren't random. There was a structure, a logic, even if he couldn't parse it. The same clusters of letters appeared in similar positions. The diagrams seemed to correspond to specific passages.
That afternoon, he tried again.
This time he focused on the diagrams. The book had illustrations, crude ones, showing hands in various positions. Fingers spread. Fingers curled. Palm up, palm down. Lines connecting the hands to circles, to spirals, to shapes that might have been meant to represent something abstract.
He tried copying the hand positions while saying the words.
Nothing.
He tried holding his hands differently, adjusting the positions to what felt natural instead of what the diagrams showed. Some of the positions were uncomfortable, fingers bent at angles that seemed wrong. The Academy probably taught the proper way to hold your hands. Max didn't know the proper way. He only knew what didn't make his fingers cramp.
Even with those changes, nothing happened.
He tried closing his eyes and imagining light, the way the morning sun looked coming through the bakery window, warm and golden and soft. Not thinking about the words or the positions. Just the light itself.
Then he saw a spark.
Just a flicker. A tiny point of brightness in the darkness behind his eyelids. Gone before he could focus on it.
But it had been real.
Max opened his eyes. His heart was racing.
He tried again. Closed his eyes and thought about light. Not the words in the book, not the hand positions. Just light. The quality of it. The warmth. The way it made colors appear.
The spark came back. Brighter this time and lasted longer. He could feel it somehow, like a warm spot in his mind.
He opened his eyes, and the spark vanished. But he'd done it. He'd made something happen.
That night, he didn't sleep at all.
Over the following weeks, Max developed a system.
The book was his guide, but only loosely. Half the pages were unreadable. The language was beyond him. The diagrams seemed to contradict each other, or maybe they were showing different techniques that he couldn't distinguish without context.
So he improvised.
When a section of text was illegible, he guessed what it might say based on context. If a passage seemed to be about light, and some words were missing, he filled them in with what felt right. Words that sounded like they should mean "brightness" or "warmth" or "glow."
When a diagram didn't make sense, he adjusted it until it felt natural. The book showed fingers spread in a specific pattern, but that pattern made his hand cramp. So he modified it. Found a comfortable position that he could hold without thinking about it.
When a word was too damaged to read, he made up a sound that seemed to fit. Not randomly. He listened to the rhythm of the surrounding words, the way they flowed together, and invented something that matched.
The light came first. A small glow, not much brighter than a candle. He could summon it by thinking about brightness, hold it for a few minutes, and let it fade when he stopped concentrating. Useful for early morning bakes when he didn't want to waste oil.
Probably a weak version of whatever the spell was supposed to be. A candle's worth of light when a proper mage could summon a bonfire. But it worked, and that was enough.
Then he was able to summon warmth. He could heat his hands on cold mornings, keep the proofing dough at the right temperature without constantly monitoring the fire. A gentle warmth that spread from his palms, lasting as long as he needed it.
Then a sort of push. He discovered this one by accident. He was reaching for a bowl across the worktable, too tired to get up, and the bowl slid toward him. Just a few inches. But he hadn't touched it.
He spent a week experimenting with the push. Learning how to direct it. How to control the strength. By the end, he could move ingredients from across the room, slide heavy sacks without lifting them, and nudge the oven door closed when his hands were full of dough.
Small things, practical things. Parlor tricks, really, compared to what real mages could do. He'd seen a traveling magician once, years ago, who could lift a cart off the ground and hold it there for a full minute. Max could barely slide a bowl across a table.
But the spells came easily. That was the strange part. He'd expected magic to be hard, to require the years of training the Academy demanded. Instead, once he figured out the basic principle, the rest just followed. He thought about light, and light appeared. He thought about warmth, and his hands grew warm. He thought about pushing, and things moved.
No incantations, no gestures, just intention.
He assumed this meant his magic was weak, unstructured. The magical equivalent of a child's scribbling compared to a master's calligraphy. Real spells required real technique. What he was doing was just... wishing, almost. Wanting something and having it happen.
It worked well enough for baking. That was all that mattered.
A few months after the push, a mage came through Thornhaven.
She was young, maybe Max's age, wearing the grey robes of an Academy journeyman. Traveling to complete her certification, she said. She stopped at the bakery because she'd heard Max made good bread.
He did. He sold her a loaf of sourdough, still warm from the oven.
She paid, then paused at the door. Turned back to look at him.
"You have talent," she said.
Max blinked. "Sorry?"
"Magical talent. I can feel it." She tilted her head, studying him. "Have you ever been tested?"
"No. I just run a bakery."
"You should go to the Academy. With your potential, they'd probably waive the fees." She was still staring at him, her expression odd. "It's faint, but it's there. Buried deep. Like a coal that's never been lit."
"I'm not interested in being a mage," he said. "But thank you."
She shrugged. "Your choice. But talent like that shouldn't go to waste."
She left. Max stood behind his counter, thinking about coals and buried potential, and decided she'd probably been wrong. He'd taught himself a few tricks, sure, but if he had real talent, real potential, his spells would be stronger. He wouldn't be limited to candle-glows and sliding bowls.
Faint, she'd said. Whatever she'd sensed, it wasn't much.
He went back to kneading dough and didn't think about it again.
Years passed.
The bakery stabilized. Max developed a routine. Wake at four. Mix the dough and let it rise. Shape loaves, bake, sell, clean, sleep, and repeat.
His little spells became part of the routine. Light in the early mornings. Warmth for proofing. A gentle clean when flour got everywhere. A push to move heavy sacks when his back was sore.
The spells got easier over time. That made sense. Practice improved everything. He barely had to think about light anymore; it just appeared when he needed it, lasted exactly as long as he wanted, and faded when he was done. The same with warmth, with the push, with the cleaning spell he'd developed to get flour out of his clothes.
He never tested the limits. Never tried to make the light brighter or the push stronger. Why would he? The spells did what he needed them to do. Making bread didn't require fireballs.
One night, a few years after the journeyman mage's visit, something happened.
He was baking late, trying to fill a large order for a merchant's wedding. Dozens of loaves, all due by morning. He was tired, stressed, and working faster than he should have been.
He bumped the table. A bowl of proofed dough, hours of work, tipped toward the edge.
He reached for it. Too slow. The bowl was already falling.
But it stopped.
It hung in the air, tilted at an angle, dough bulging against the rim, frozen mid-fall.
Max stared at it. He reached out carefully, righted it, and then set it back on the table.
He'd caught it. Without touching it. He'd wanted it to stop falling, and it had stopped. Not slowed, not redirected, but stopped, completely, hanging motionless in defiance of everything that should have pulled it down.
He told himself it was the push spell. Just a reflex, faster than he'd expected.
But the push spell moved things. It didn't freeze them in the air.
He finished the order, delivered the loaves, and got paid.
He didn't think about the frozen bowl again, or tried not to. But sometimes, late at night, he remembered the journeyman mage. Her odd expression. The way she'd stared at him like she was trying to read something written too small to see.
Faint, she'd said. Like a coal that's never been lit.
Maybe she'd been looking at the wrong thing. Maybe what she'd sensed wasn't the coal itself, but the heat it was giving off. A coal buried under so much ash that only a trace of warmth reached the surface.
Or maybe Max was overthinking it, and he'd just gotten lucky with the bowl.
He decided it was luck. Easier that way.
Somewhere along the way, his hair stopped growing back. He'd always kept it short because flour would stick to it. He didn't notice at first, just kept shaving out of habit. When he finally realized the stubble wasn't coming in anymore, he went to a healer, who examined his scalp and found nothing wrong.
"Stress, maybe," the healer said. "Running a business alone. It takes a toll."
Max accepted this. It made sense. He was stressed. Hair fell out sometimes. He knew other men his age who were losing theirs.
He did wonder, occasionally, if the magic had something to do with it. He'd read stories about mages who overtaxed themselves, burned out their bodies trying to channel more power than they could handle. But those were mages casting real spells, serious magic. Not bakers making light to see by in the early morning.
He also noticed that his robe never seemed to wear out. He'd bought it years ago from a traveling merchant, a simple brown garment with good pockets for carrying ingredients. It should have fallen apart by now, with all the flour, water, heat, and constant washing. But the fabric stayed strong, the color stayed true, the seams held firm.
He'd used a cleaning spell on it for years. That was probably why. The spell kept the flour from building up, kept the fabric from degrading. Just a side effect of regular maintenance.
Good pockets, anyway. That was the important thing.
The book sat on a shelf in his bedroom, gathering dust. He hadn't opened it in years. He'd learned what he could from it, filled in the gaps, and developed his own techniques. Whatever the text had originally said, whatever proper techniques it had tried to teach, Max had made his own versions. They worked. That was enough.
Sometimes he thought about finding a real teacher. Going to the Academy in Valdris Prime to ask if they could explain what he was doing and maybe show him the proper forms.
But the Academy was expensive, far away, and he had a bakery to run. Customers who depended on him. A routine that couldn't be interrupted.
So he kept doing what he was doing. Kept guessing at the gaps and making up his own rules.
Years later, the oven cracked. He signed up as an adventurer to pay for repairs. He touched a crystal and thought about light, the same way he'd thought about light a thousand times before in the early darkness of the bakery.
The crystal exploded.
Equipment malfunction, the examiner said. Max walked out with forty silver crowns and a Copper-rank registration and a vague sense that something wasn't quite right, that maybe he should ask someone what had happened.
But he had an oven to buy. And bread to make.
Questions could wait.
Comments
cadis
this is vastly better than the other one.
Heroville111
Love the idea, caint wait till next one
