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AMP Chapter 60 Early Release

🕑 Added 2025-10-10 17:55:43 +0000 UTC

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Mizu Tori

Thanks! I'll fix those when I'm able. When it comes to Danger Sense, maybe there will be some hints, but the official first additional quirk Izuku gets has already been planned out. It will be earlier than canon, but it won't be here

chronostorm

Noticed a couple other instances of correction needed (including page number from the file for ease of navigation): page 23, first line needs closing quotation marks after “…than it already was, man! ^”^ Second one is page 26 - it ought to be “bear” instead of “bare”. The former is to signify a kind of burden, the latter is to expose (think “I can’t bear to lose you!” and “All secrets will be laid bare”, if that helps). Actual review: holy mother of CHRIST this was an amazing lead up to the finale of this arc! If there’s going to be a great time for Danger Sense to kick in, this might be it! Early? Absolutely. Still of great use against an assassin? Unquestionably, and arguably of greater benefit in this fight than even Nagant in canon… I’m excited, and there’s not enough popcorn to tide me over!

Cha0sniper

Also, the fight had me at the (metaphorical) edge of my seat the whole time lol. Great work, and damn you for that cliffhanger xD

Cha0sniper

Fixes: saw a couple of cases of the wrong they're/their/there contraction being used; “If the League does show up, leave Shigaraki to me. A conversation between him and I has been long overdue." This should be Him and Me, not Him and I. In case an explanation is required, if you convert the sentence from plural to singular, you'd use Me not I. That's the rule of thumb for me vs I.