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Chapter 18

🕑 Added 2021-03-24 18:45:01 +0000 UTC

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Same thought

RottenTangerine

My guess is that Matt's two mentors are Light and Shadow (i think that was their names?)

C_Mantis

it should be, and i changed it tyty. or if you need a skill for a Talent to function

Sesharan

Should “The only times where people on The Path are allowed skills are for healer Talents, or if you need a Talent to function.” say “if you need a skill to function?”

C_Mantis

I really dont know if thats were its going to go. I said that as a comment to all the stories that DO do that. Matt even said something along those lines.

Galavantes

Really enjoying the story so far! I actually can't tell if we're being trolled or not with the whole Aster romance thing. But please...please don't. I'd really like to keep being able to read this.

C_Mantis

Thanks. some people on RR and dropping the story because its to lucky. which is a shame because this was always the plan. I try and make sure Matt as to earn his rewards. except the [CPA]

Brad

Absolutely loving that the plot required Main Character good luck actually has reasoning behind it. MC lucks into being found by two teir 6s at a piece of shit inn? Meh, cliche. MC is the beneficiary of an empire-wide initiative to make sure people with detrimental talents but immense work ethic don't fall through the cracks? Pure serotonin.

C_Mantis

Yeah i worried about when to introduce it but any sooner felt to forced. Glad its going over well.

Sesharan

The stress seems to be piling up... I like that we’re getting to see this. There are reasons why people don’t delve rifts constantly beyond just rift stability or not having enough mana, and it’s great to see Matt actually experiencing why one ought to take their mental health into account when deciding how often to delve. Speaking of things I liked, I also really loved the revelation that detrimental Talents are marked for observation. It makes a lot of sense in the setting, and does a great job of justifying that half of Matt’s initial good fortune. Not that it particularly needed justifying, this being a power-fantasy story and all, but having [Cracked Phantom Armor] be his only piece of true luck goes a long way toward making it feel like he’s really earned what he’s gained.

C_Mantis

He did bring one. just one tho.

Obran

What I don't understand is why did he bring a camping pillow when he has a dimensional bag?

Stephen Pearson

Nope, she seems to be from the same faction.

Stephen Pearson

Thanks for the chapter:-)

Sanairb

I'm confused I thought she was from another faction. Why would she reference talking to the emperor? Unless her faction also has an emperor?

C_Mantis

haha. That took me a second to figure out. Glad you enjoyed it.

Vegetables

!retpach eht rof sknahT

Monadologist

s/palettes/palates

C_Mantis

lots of little food cubes.

Starfall20

Damn that trick rift was horrible. How much food did Matt bring with him?

Patrick Schuldt

Thanks for the chapter!


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