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Chapter 22

🕑 Added 2021-04-01 22:52:32 +0000 UTC

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C_Mantis

Yeah she cant see into his head and is making assumptions. And I agree with Matt going over board. His toy was broken and he beat up the other guy. sure he can be healed but hes out for weeks now.

Blaublue

The whole thing about informing the Emperor/Tier 40+s because a Tier 10 was a little overbearing seemed.. excessive to say the least. And Liz actually believing there is a chance Matt would react the same way, or feel the same, after a Tier10 pressured him a little as someone who had his little sister raped and killed and laughed in his face when he seeked help, is disturbing. Matt did go overboard imo, they both did - but Matt did put someone in the hospital because they broke something of his, and Matt prevented him from surrendering

J S

Thanks for the chapter. Really long, which is nice.

Onathan

Especially since according to what was revealed much earlier in the story he is almost required to end up as Astor's partner.

I fucking knew it the concept would be endless... From the fight with the Orc.. People doubted me.. and here we are.... Literally this means nothing but hey... I win inside.

Josef Blumers

The Phoenix is another type of endless as well

King Lokajad

I really hope they stay friends, just to completely subvert the classic trope of opposite genders in a party falling in love.

ZaA

I almost think that Endless could just remain endless. It's like how Infinity has differing sizes when based off of time frames or other metrics. It might remain Endless.. just more Endless lol. Might start with Endless mana or something and then evolve with new skills. Regeneration, teleportation distance, skill duration, etc. It might start as Endless (Mana) and go from there. I'm curious what the plans are for it though, cause if it can't just be the same but more, then I've got no clue.

Austin Mueller

Was just thinking, if his concept is “endless” where do you go from that? Technically would timeless be the next step? Endless implies without end whereas timeless implies without end and without beginning?

Aaron

Thanks for the chapter!

Austin Mueller

I need moreeeee. Will pay $10 a month for 6 chapters in advance 🤣

тђє v๏เ๔

Very nice chapter. Enjoyed the PoV change. 😁

Austin Cagle

He is basically turning into Guts.

ZaA

That's definitely a possibility. The other is that it is a personality trait type of concept. Both of those incidents involved him steeling his resolve and doing something bold. On a personal note, I think I'd prefer a personality concept over an armor one. I'd hate to see Matt turn into a simple tank for Liz. Especially when he has potential for being a huge damage dealer further down the line with his mana pool

Alexander Graber-Tilton

This chapter brought something interesting to mind. Matt is using a longsword, which can mean different things (one handed vs bastard sword). I looked back at chapter 1, where it mentions one-handed + shield as an alternative, so I assume that Matt is using a bastard sword. From my limited experience with HEMA, both with a longsword and greatsword, the forms transfer extremely well. The problems with a greatsword come down to size (carry + enclosed spaces), the extra weight making things more unwieldy with strength limitations, and the metallurgy technology for the weapon itself. Matt bypasses most of those issues, making a switch to a greatsword realistic for a weapon upgrade. The strength issue is solved by his full body cultivation, as well as the new skill, even making it realistic to pull off some one-handed longsword moves with a greatsword. The metallurgy isn't a problem given the setting. This helps a little with his range problems, and If Matt works towards spiked gauntlets through CPA, then that serves as an effective close range backup in the case of enclosed quarters. Note: I thought the longsword was a little odd when I started reading the story, as it was used as a sidearm weapon during war, to be used as a backup to a primary weapon like a polearm or greatsword.

Jordan

So Matt does have some sort of Armour concept going, since when he fought the Guilder all he could use was his phantom Armour. It should make for some really interesting developments in the future.

C_Mantis

Well meet them soonish. :)

Sesharan

“the rings her brother and his husband had” Thank you. Seriously.

Marcus Jean-Louis

I think that don't think she comparing just that she also talked about how the nobles poor management led to the death of matt's parents and how he is repressing that on top of the bullying he just got.

Joseph

The crappy insult and low grade empty bullying that Matt took is not even remotely in the same league as someone whose sister was raped and murdered and had it covered up by corrupt authorities. Honestly comparing the two makes me think less of Liz.

Kaze

Man I ship the hell out of these two. What a great duo of protagonists.

Tom Pulk

What about the bet will Matt ever get his tier 5 stones?

ALEXEI

Im sure the emperor remembers him with who his sponsors are. And he probly got a notice with his powers when he awakened at 3. still curious why he diddnt get a hold of Matt then. I'm assuming his sponsors are responsible.

Thaco4

I'm loving your story!!! I want there to be more NOW!!! Lol keep up the good work

TheFool

Amazing chapter

C_Mantis

he is working towards that soon tm

Simon

It would work out if most people don't get 'good' Tier 5 weapons.

Seth Thyme

Ikr

Obran

Does Matt have any control over the shape of his Cracked Phantom Armor? I mean could he have changed the shape of the armor around his fist into a spike?

Obran

Umm... If Matt wants to get back at the Tier 9 or 10, cant he just say to Simon the next time he asks for a mana refill “Sorry, but I can’t. I had a bad experience with your guild and it has soured our relationship.”

Starfall20

When Matt finds out who she is he is going to make so many princess jokes. And really calling the Emperor "Uncle Manny"? I wonder if he still remembers Matt? And if he is going to be the first person to give Matt the Shovel Speech? Beyond that, Liz's thought process on Matt is adorable. She is going to have so much fun teasing out endless from him, especially now that he has a strength shard. I wonder where he will go with this concept? After all we are starting with endless, where do we go from there? His Name is definitely going to be the Immortal by the time he is done.

Tauwetter

This chapter makes me feel fuzzy :) I found a small consistency error though: "Most who had good Tier 5 weapons used them until Tier 7, when skills could drop, and allowed for delvers to start filling out their weaknesses." Contradicts chapter 11: "After Tier 5, most get a new weapon every rank."

Josef Blumers

That whiff had only been confirmed in the duel with the guilder.

Josef Blumers

It made him endless. The world went blurry for a moment,...

Aidan Geverdt

Oh I loved hearing about Liz and I’m glad to hear that she’s not actually a scheming evil person on the inside. I like her and Matt together so I’m hoping the bond with Aster stays sisterly haha

Yashakami

Nice! This was such a good chapter! It was really cool to see inside Liz's head.

Ali Mohamed

Thanks for the chapter. This still isn't enough to quench my thirst for more chappies, but I'll accept it for now.

seth dauer

Endless was the concept he is working on. Shortly after the thought everything went fuzzy for a moment. Exactly what Liz later says happens to not fully formed concepts. Definitely a concept based on his Mana regen rather than armor.

Charles handgis

Good chapter, I liked the backstory and insight into Liz’s thoughts. I’m looking forward to what Matt’s concept will be. First thing that comes to mind is something armor related, but personally I would think something related to his eventual unlimited mana would be cool. Unending or infinite or something.

Valinora

D'awwwwwwww I love it. Absolutely fantastic end there.

Svensonsen

I want more


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