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Chapter 30

🕑 Added 2021-04-23 20:00:04 +0000 UTC

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C_Mantis

kids gonna be dumb...

ALEXEI

hopefully that whole hand not respoding thing doesnt come back to bite him. it kinda annoyed me he diddnt tell anyone about that.

ALEXEI

if you think killing a monster is the same as killing a sentient thinking being im not sure what to tell you. thats bording on worrying. thats like saying someone who hunted all his life would have no issues shooting someone in the head.

C_Mantis

I go into it a bit more in 31. but its both its like a puzzle piece. he can force it but the closer he gets the better the fit. but also the fact that he could find the perfect thing but it could be so complex he cant create the image like at all. then he needs to chose either wait and work on it or settle of a lesser image he can make now.

Aaron Weingrad

I read foreshadowing that this group was farming for worse people. The guild running this planet seems like it has some corruption in it. That level 10 guy who harassed Matt at the competition etc. I’m looking forward to some push and pushback with that if I am right. Mantis - why shouldn’t Matt be trying out different images to find one that fits? If he guessed correctly would it feel correct right from the beginning or is the depth of the imagery the important piece? A bit more explanation. As to why pursuing the “wrong” image is the proper route might help that section.

travis pancake

That was an interesting chapter. I really enjoyed the relationship development

striderfighter

They skulled > skulked

Termac

Hmm.

Daniel Smith

Even in real life some of us handle it exactly the way he described, therapy doesn't work for everyone

Dragebar

not every fight has to be this way, else we get desensitized to REALLY meaningful battles.... i mean slaughter

The Tallest Tree

Really glad that they talked through the trauma. So many stories just brush this off, you didn't, thanks for writing about it.

Stephen Pearson

Thanks for the chapter:-)

PrimordialJay

I was kind of hoping for an epic battle where they barely make it out alive even though it was hinted at that this is how it would turn out.

Lictor Magnus

It makes sense that the killing wouldn't affect them too much. They've killed so many creatures at this point that a few humans wouldn't mean much.

PlasmaticPi

Definitely just minions of a bbeg. Probably face retribution next chapter.

Michael

The infinitely expanding universe is endless. Just saying. Can't wait to see what his image is though! Also, what sad idiots they didn't even have a numbers advantage.


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