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Old Chapter 32/ interlude

🕑 Added 2021-04-28 20:16:15 +0000 UTC

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HenryMorgan

I enjoyed this chapter, Vlad is a bit OP though. Probably the best that this isn't canon.

Simon B.

Hmmm, I also think that this chapter was a little weird... To start Vlad was way too powerful for a Tier 5 rift, it should not be possible. It goes against the logic of the story until now. A really powerful and conscious peak Tier 5 monster that give them some advice before letting himself die would have been more interesting.

Aclys

I enjoyed it as well, seemed very much like a "holodeck scenario" from the likes of star-trek, with the 'actor' of the created world/rift deciding to make themselves more real than was properly intended. I mean the rifts already produce magical items and skill shards and so on that proceed to exist independently of the rift once the adventurers leave and the monsters themselves are able to escape during a rift break so there's nothing inherently wrong with any of this... Only oddity is I guess the bit on the nose reference to the games.. But why not? The rifts should take inspiration for their scenarios from Somewhere, having one of them be something us readers can recognize just helps clue us in to this aspect. I for one don't mind this being cannon and while our MC's got their memories tampered with.. its not like that cant break in the future should they run into Vlad.

King Lokajad

Damn it's no longer canon??? I actually really enjoyed it sigh oh well I guess.

Joe

Honestly I thought this was where you were going with the story eventually with him constantly questioning the rifts and why they are the way they are. Like the dragon and what not

Alex Matheny

I actually liked it as is. It shows more of the origin of the fuckery of rifts, as well as learning something unique about the Empire and it gives the kids yet another Big Bad in thier corner. Be easy enough to un wipe the mind wipe with the AIs also

BookDragonling

It was definitely a shift in what I expected to be reading. I expected something to be wrong with the rift but to start tossing people in from other dimensions/universes just felt a bit much. I didn't hate it originally but I am happier now with it being a non-canon interlude.

Charles handgis

I actually enjoyed this and hope we see more of vlad.

RottenTangerine

Interesting chapter. Not sure how I feel about Vlad but it was very well written!

Im the smallest peach

This chapter was a miss for me. Whatever is in the works for Vlad I hope there will be at least some sort of balance with his power.

Chymor

Personally I thought that the boss wanting to talk was a let down from all the build up. Especially with the memory wipe at the end. I hope you take it somewhere where this foreshadowing actually become more interesting than the alternative of just showing us what they actually remember with some hints that something else also happened... and a later reveal.

Cody

It felt out of place to me as well

Ratoo

Not a fan of any arc that ends in mind wipes. Wasn't a big fan of this, but a mind wipe makes it come across as pointless or even more crucial down the line.

william wallace

Honestly did not enjoy this. Well written certainly. But takes the story in a direction I’m not sure I would enjoy following. I’ve had high hopes for this story and will stick with it for a bit. But this feels like it should have been a humorous non cannon crossover chapter between arcs or a alternative version of the world sort of thing.

PrimordialJay

Maybe the experimental AI will hold on to the memories

Monus

Definitely powerful, but what are gods to him? Like gods could just be the original of his line. I think T40 is too high. I am pretty sure that you can actually destroy planets at that Tier. Maybe 10?15?

Lictor Magnus

Well at least they have a super OP vampire owe them favors. I've to to imagine even at tier 1 he's got to have like tier 40 power if he could kill gods already.

Svensonsen

First. Thx for the chapter. I hope this won't have negative effects in the future 🤣


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