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Chapter 52

🕑 Added 2021-06-18 20:00:05 +0000 UTC

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s476

I think it is meant to be, but i think it could be described a bit more, concerning the abruptness

Jonas

Thanks for the great chapter

I don't know if i'm the only one, but that entire sequence of them finding the two golems at the anvil to them being blocked by the massive golem with the bar stock seemed super abrupt to me. It's like one moment they are collecting the required item, and suddenly BAM! there's an enemy blocking their way.

BlodWedd

Mall fully agreed with Malcolm. who is mall?

J S

Thanks for the chapter.

Bobtur

"Thanks for the chapter ! Suggestions : "Matt fiddled with a spare shield. He was only enchanting it with simple runes, but he hadn’ had much practice." > hadn' > hadn't "But if he just went with the mana and spirit method, the runes would be weaker, and he would only be able to fit one rune reliably." > "If he just went with the mana and spirit method instead, the runes would be weaker, and he would be able to fit only one rune reliably." ? "These weren’t meant to replace their own weapons forever, so Matt decided to do a single rune in only the item’s spirit." > in only > on ? "Whatever way my Talent is taking us, it’s either avoiding something, or this is the only way in.” > Whatever > Wherever.

C_Mantis

The next chapter they will explain it to Camilla.

seth dauer

It was a bit unclear what was happening. I would suggest throwing in the word overload or have matt explain to Malcom that the enchantments can only channel so much mana before they burn out

Pawaidan

Also this is my first first ever O.o

Pawaidan

Sooo good 10 out of 10


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