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Chapter 58

🕑 Added 2021-07-09 20:00:04 +0000 UTC

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ALEXEI

Kinda feel like aster may end up with camilla

Aaron Weingrad

I like when the story has some struggle to it. The beginning of the story was more in line with this chapter. Emo misery is not as satisfying as the sort of Horacio Alger climb from rags to riches but you sort of needed the struggle to climb pretty quick.

SunderGoldmane

So, are there mana transfer skills in this world?

Jonas

Thanks for the great chapter

WaxierJarl

My understanding is that the high tiers in charge are not affiliated with the prince. They can not directly attack, and doing nothing to save him is political move. The next ruler is “last man standing” and they are taking advantage of the situation.

BaguaBrady

I loved this chapter. Though I don't fully understand the idea that high tiers don't step in from an in universe logical perspective, I do really appreciate the way you're writing real consequences in to their adventures. I don't see the tone as slipping, in fact I felt the story needed an arc like this to maintain suspense for our characters. I wouldn't want this type of situation to dominate the story moving forward but it adds a nice element to the mix for me.

Oxykon

TFTC

C_Mantis

I think i get what you mean but is a brutal fight than a war meant to be light? I don't think that would do it service. Matt very much lived a sheltered life and this is a arc meant to forge him into someone stronger and he needs to go through the heat and fire. The story will lighten up after this arc but sorry this arc is going to be a darker one. I feel it NEEDS to be shown for the growth of the character.

Patrick Schuldt

Well I think he should stay there. If there wasn't higher tier people sitting on their ass I could agree that he should do something because he feels guilty. But with the politics of the kingdom he is completely unguilty IMO 🤷🏻‍♂️ Or my empathy sense is not high enough to understand that 😂

Robert Amundson

Feel the tone I liked in this story is slipping. Probably just this segment but it definitely feels less fun for a while and more chuni and grimdark leaning.

william wallace

Would love to see liz walk up to him and knee him in the nuts.

Kevin Caffrey

I know that Matt isn't the vengeful sort, so I doubt he will do anything to the prince, but I really hope the prince gets some karmic justice in the coming battles...

Alex R

Nice chapter.


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