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Chapter 41

🕑 Added 2021-05-24 20:01:01 +0000 UTC

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Thaabit Rivertree

Wow, I really enjoyed this one. I kept laughing at Leon and Mara's antics. It's great to see some levity and goofiness from truly powerful people. Makes them a bit more relatable.. and it's just really entertaining and well done. Glad to see they are on board with Mat + Liz

Blaublue

Not much sense that the video forwarded from Matt included his name and they can then look him up, otherwise good chap

Aaron Weingrad

One trade off from this chapter’s revelations is that the path and Matt’s risks have been nerfed. There is no way to read subsequent dangers as actually risky anymore. Matt is walking a path of false risk and enhanced rewards. Kind of ruins a lot of dramatic tension.

Alteron

I really like Bob, I hope we will see more of him.

John Koor

Love the story but I have one issue. Timescale of ancient royals. How do these 10,000 year old (and much much more) royals all seem to know, as well as have an attachment to Liz? Even the dude that sleeps away decades somehow knows a 20 years old that has been away on the path probably since she was 15. To such ancient beings that's such a short period of time that they'd probably not got a chance to meet her, let alone form a serious attachment.

Forestfire

Mara has a tier 35 baby sitting her daughter. A rescue would pull them off the path. Liz can only be angry if she is alive. The sitter is 35 so as not to violate any of the war powers acts. The Emp has 3 tier 40's watching the healer because she is a strategic resource, you go to war to protect those

Galavantes

More than the stick's POV?

C_Mantis

Yeah it would be dumb to risk strategic assets like that.

Daniel Childers

I appreciate the overtones established in this chapter. It also explains why the character will and has been extra lucky over all. The smartest way I've seen used by authors so far. It even helps build the anticipation for the direction that Matt and liz are moving both romantically and Path. Wonderfully done!!

Daniel Childers

I called it. I knew Matt was being watch from the start

Alteron

Great chapter

J S

I do wonder why it’s tier 35s watching folks from the chaotic space and if that’ll remove some of the tension in the story.

J S

Very interesting to have a war to help future talents. A largely risk free war, at that.

C_Mantis

Thanks!

what I like about this chapter is that it shows the author had the whole ark planned out for several weeeks (bob). Good on him.

C_Mantis

The Tier 36+ can rip reality but it takes them time. They have to work on it. That's why Bob didn't even think about it. The T50 do it by their very power The moon isn't just moving at normal speeds tho, hes wanking it down with his power its moving a lot faster than it would be in a normal collision.

Obran

Two minor things. In one place in this chapter you mention how it is forbidden for people over tier 34 to do battle because they would rip reality apart. Then a few paragraphs later you idly have Emanuel contemplate Dominic ... two tier 50’s The second thing is really minor. You mention how Emanuel pulls down the moon and uses it to shatter the planet. Historically speaking a few billion years ago Mars crashed into the Earth and the Earth didn’t shatter. It just formed the moon. Just saying it tales a lot to shatter a planet.

Termac

He did, three times. The first and third were referring to the planet, which is, indeed, tier 5. The second was referring to rifts tiers 5 and under, including those on the tier 5 planet. Unless he ninja-edited out a fourth which was a typo. I presume you were referring to the third (and most vague) case, though. > At the seams, the bonds of reality started to fray. At Tier 5, the world was unraveling slowly, simply from his mere presence.

Gunnar Crider

You wrote tier 5 not tier 50.

Brad

Excellent chapter! It makes so much sense that Duke Waters has a farming Talent, everyone knows that the farmer backstory is OP and produces godslayers

Jonas

Thanks for the great chapter

travis pancake

This was a fantastic chapter I'm glad I just upgraded my patron. I can't wait to go back to Matt and his adventures but I love the look into how the greater powers are moving

Lictor Magnus

What's your guess?

Pyrefiend

I had an inkling back at the play pen that things with Melinda would go horribly wrong. Now that inkling has been upgraded to a hunch

Icha

This is my new favorite side chapter, ever.

Michael

I like how the empire watches and treats the youth and lower tiers. It honestly just makes sense. I hate novels where there are levels or cultivation and it's always like "hah you are a puny Mortal of only strength level XYZ you cannot compare to me and mean nothing" its annoying and doesn't make sense. Like if in our world there was a 7 year old who could do basic calculus equations you wouldn't laugh and say well I knew advanced calculus you amateur! That kid would probably be nutured i.e. how Liz and Matt are being watched. In a world where individual power matters on such a large scale helping raise the next generation is the only way to not go extinct as a nation.

Cadastral

Thanks for the Chapter!

Storyhunter

I now understand Liz.....the pain of surviving with intact sanity around that......

Stephen Pearson

Thanks for the chapter! :-)

Alex R

I took it to mean that it takes a year to get it encapsulated to transport.

Alex R

Yes

Tyrant_Rayne

Useless Talents, Aspect at Tier 23, and would have completed the path in a 100 years without outside intervention?!? Is Duke Waters the actual Xianxia protagonist while Matt’s journey is just a side story?

Obran

So if the rift is “small and fragile” will they need to spend a year re spawning it every time it is delved?

Bunny Waffles

If they are this saucy normally, then it is almost guaranteed their kids probably need brain bleach after walking in on them.

william wallace

Nice world building.

тђє v๏เ๔

Loved the chapter. Thank you!

Starfall20

Also the sheer adorableness of aunt Helen and the fact the entire empire is helping her rebuild her images. Wow.

PortlandPhil

Lol, I guess we know why all Mara and Leon's kids need therapists.

Rhaid

I love Mara and Leon!

Starfall20

I was laughing so hard at the end of this. Also the numbers for the upper tier is insane. 30000 year of ruler ship? Those are big numbers. Mara and Leon are adorable. Melinda is scary. I wonder what the full context of her concept is.

C_Mantis

Thanks. Grammerly really doesn't like odd names.

Max McLean

Safran -> Safrar for consistency!

Angel

Wooot


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