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Chapter 62

🕑 Added 2021-07-23 20:00:05 +0000 UTC

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Jonas

Magic is might

Lani

I really hope Matt doesn’t go the pure mage route

Jonas

Thanks for the great chapter

ZaA

I feel like this whole golem arc is just so boring. It feels like things are happening because they need to happen for the characters self progression, rather than by happenstance. Especially with him feeling some relief at the capture thing 'cause of him

Stephen Pearson

Thanks for the chapter, I really enjoy your story:-) There was one sentence that really stood out to me as wrong though, given what happened in Matt's childhood: 'The approach was the worst five minutes of Matt’s life.'; if you change 'worst' to 'most physically uncomfortable' it would work a lot better.

PortlandPhil

I kind of agree, it's dragged out quite a lot. I like aspects of the arc, the golems aren't a bad advisory, but there is only so many chapters of the same combat over and over again you can read before you start skipping to the end to see if anything is going to happen.

MAS

This entire arc is unbelievably slow and dry compared to everything that's come before. I'm very glad it will soon be over.

Literally Goose

Thanks for the chapter!

Enzo Elacqua

We better hope no recordings of that are there, not just because of the fact that they woke up the rift but the mana output


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