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PoA The Concept of Death 1

🕑 Added 2021-08-04 20:00:04 +0000 UTC

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Lorraine V

a rift of his Tier -> a rift of this Tier

C_Mantis

So right now the idea is a 10ish chapter mini arc type side story. That might change but thats the plan

Yotedom

Do you intend to make this a full fledged side novel or something that if put in a book would act as interludes for the main story? I really liked how this turned out.

Sirius

“Fear the Healer” a bit of a play on Fear the Reaper.

BaguaBrady

"Death's Reluctant Mistress" though may be too on the nose

wanderer117

"Near Death" my best effort, some honorable mentions bellow "A Matter of Life and Death" "Walking the Line" "Miracle Melinda" Your friend here is only mostly dead. There is a big difference between mostly dead and all dead.

wanderer117

I've heard of those, they're called life pools right?

Adurna

"To guard life" Seems like a title that captures her current motivation and also allows for several different kinds of growth without being awkward. Like it would both work with evolving death to rebirth, but it would also work with if she started using death and went for something like controlling disease as a way to protect those lives she seems more important.

Adurna

I think that Baxter might be more clever psychologically than he seems. He won't deal in absolutes and helps M nuance her world. So I am hopeful of Melinda getting a more balanced view later on without losing teammates.

just_a_potato

Title suggestion "I see dead (sic) people"

Monadologist

"Made Milson" Should we start a pool on how long he'll live?

SquiddlyWinks

Title suggestion: Shadows of Death

Osamaru Ta

More Disappointed that we didn't get to see their interaction with Auntie and the Shard.

Dominic Pernicone

So far I'm interested in the side story. Melinda seems like she's being a bit naive and delusional about the realities of her Talent, that overhealth will be able to solve everything. It really won't help if one of her teammates gets obliterated down to atoms, which from what we know CAN happen at high enough tiers. I hope she can be shown the issues with that before any of her team gets killed and she has a "vengeance" or "regret" fueled need to grow stronger.

Jonas

Thanks for the great chapter

Amelgar

She comes off as rather childish interestingly. Calling her Concept evil made me chuckle. Quite a contrast to Matt, he comes across as mature most of the time.

Javier Runco

Thx for the chapter

DaftWully

Also, I'm guessing the guy on the bus was a hitman. Just throwing that out there.

DaftWully

Here's another alternate title: 'To Spurn Death'

Matt

I am excited to see how Aunt Helen helps the team out. I really feel like Melinda is refusing to learn what Baxter is trying to teach her about life outside healing. Her healing has been a cheat code and what's going to happen to her team when that cheat doesn't take care of everything.

The Grey Mage

For alternate Side Story Titles: Life and Death, Healer’s Rebirth, Miracle Maker

C_Mantis

Yeah but needs must. It really doesn't translate over well to audio sad to see it go but it's kinda still there.

C_Mantis

Yeah but they were peak t2 when they first met and he was t1.

ZaA

Matt hasn't caught up though. The gap is the same as it used to be. These guys are tier 6 unless I misread? Meanwhile Matt is 1/3 of the way through tier 5. Considering each level takes more xp than the previous one to get to, they are leveling faster, no?

C_Mantis

Matt did sit on his butt for 6 months in top of the travel and he almost caught up.

GeneralTusk

So they had a year or so headstart on Matt and Matt has already nearly caught up. They didn't take a six month break but have been delving continuously and Matt still caught up.

ZaA

Ummm....so this group is leveling just as fast, if not faster than Matt, Liz, and Aster who have been leveling at a prodigious rate due to the insane amount of events that have surrounded them in combination with Matt's ability to give his teammates mana so they can do rifts more frequently plus being half the team size so they end up getting more xp out of those rifts? I know Matt's group traveled for a few months. But you'd think it would be the same for this group, no?

Luciaron

Can't read it now but dayum that is a beefy chapter

Yashakami

Booooo, Mat and Matt sold this story man


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