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PoA The Concept of Death 4

🕑 Added 2021-09-15 20:01:01 +0000 UTC

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Compendium

Yeah "you don't have a 50/50 chance" doesn't clarify much lol

Aaron Martinez

Personally I always assumed it was a smokey semi-transparent black.

Silvertooth09

also there talents might need a refresher on the other chapter as well for the same reason

Alex R

Luna could have told him about them.

Hunendora

First Pather to fifteen gets the planet, but the Path doesn't end there, and I don't think they're expecting someone to just stop. There will likely be a way to hire a seneschall to run the planet while the new ruler continues ascending.

Simon

Yeah for some reason I also pictured it to be at least somewhat see through and greenish

C_Mantis

good point!

Stylemys

If this is meant to be a separate book, you might want to rehash Matt's Talent when he brings it up at dinner, like show what it is when Melinda pulls it up. It's critical to the context of the conversation, but the way it's written now assumes that knowledge is already well known. In Matt's story that works, but in Melinda's story he's a side character.

Redbeard

The trio are being constantly followed and monitored by their management team in person (as we've seen with the army guy, Throne I think), and as a T40+ Baxter wouldn't miss them. As the Emperor's personal healer, he probably has more access to personal files/can request and get it easily, so him obtaining some recordings of the trio isn't unreasonable. Your guess could still be right, but I think him holding two important posts at once is less likely.

Stylemys

They’re all orphans that grew up together after the rift break. It’s a found family.

Starved Consumer

Liz did jokingly say she thought Matt was just the armor back when he first turned it off in front of her on the training planet... I always assumed the skill was green, though.

Osamaru Ta

Possible. Silver maybe? Would fit him.

Enkelados

Btw what does she mean by that, is her team hee family?

Ellija

Imagine a planet with perfectly cultivated rifts though. It could be a contender for wealthiest planet in the empire in a few thousand years.

Stylemys

Oddly, Melinda would probably be a good choice to rule it. She seems like she’s be more prone to staying in one place. Plus her foremost goal is just to get her family to T15 immortality. She probably wouldn’t mind falling off the Path so much.

Stylemys

That was a needlessly convoluted way to give relative odds.

Stylemys

They’ll fall off eventually. Completing the Path wouldn’t be special if everyone in the story were to do it. It’s just a question of when. I expect they’ll at least make it to the T10 tournament. Should they hit T15, Melinda’s motivation will probably flag too. She’s mentioned that her family’s immortality is her real goal several times.

Shmigit

Thank you!

Stylemys

I’m betting Baxter is a member of The Seven. That’s how he knows about the management team and can give Melinda relative odds on beating Liz and Aster too. He’s seem them fight in the rift test videos the investigator presented at the Path tribunal.

Enkelados

Yeah if you don't use the tools you have because muh' feelings you deserve getting kicked off the path.

Jonathan Brewster

He who fights monsters

Shmigit

What story is that? I don't recognize the character name and I'm always looking for more good LitRPG stories to read!

Jonas

Thanks for the great chapter

Enzo Elacqua

I feel like him owning a planet would only hold him back. He already has an infinite source of wealth, there’s no point in owning a planet

Kemizle

I liked the description of Matt’s armor I don’t think we ever got a good one for it. I always assumed you could see Matt through it

Literally Goose

Really enjoyed this side chapter. Interesting to see a different perspective on Matt and get an idea of his growth. Agree with others - the relationship is hugely unbalanced now. If you continue with these side chapters I think j the war needs to hit Melinda and her team hard - they need to earn any power ups they get, not rely on Matt or fluke. They need to pay for growth in blood sweat and tears. Matt has given them the head start in terms of the shard and growth items but let that and this lesson be the end of his contribution please, or their relationship will not work.

rizen

This was REALLY satisfying. It gives a good look at people whom we generally know the power scope of seeing how Matt is fighting above his tier. Significant enjoyment seeing a decimation. I hate to bring another litrpg story as a comparison, but I got the same strong emotional reaction when Jason Asano beat up a well rehearsed team in the mirage room. Spot on execution.

Daniel Smith

I actually hope they get lwft behind, maybe even fall off of the Path. It would help show that Talent alone isn't anuff.

Fleetpanda

That was if they WERE 50/50 against Matt, which Baxter points out they aren't.

Patrick Ralston

Well, Baxter at least seems happy. This encounter probably plays right into his plans to push Melinda.

Josef Blumers

She should start using her concept....

just_a_potato

Do you remember Matt's jealousy when he saw their talents before he hit tier 3? It was a very lopsided relationship then in the opposite direction. Baxter has told Melinda that she's not doing enough. Hopefully this encounter will push her and her team in the right direction, as others said above.

Pyrefiend

Is Aunt Helen's name a reference to Helen of Troy? The thing about accidentally starting a war got me thinking about it.

Conor lennon

Well I guess this shows matts gonna advance past them and probably get his planet as he will be the first one at tier 15

Clay Smith

So to comment on your note about not wanting overlap in the story, personally I like it. It shows reactions of the other characters, plus since it is an on going story with melindas crew I actually care about their thoughts enough for a whole chapter worth. Most importantly tho since the Wednesday slot is for bonus chapters I don’t feel like we are losing out on story progression. Loved the chapter keep it up.

Darune Albane

True but he will not notice it and in the end will push them to be better

BaguaBrady

it'll be fun on Friday to get more of the biplay between Liz and Baxter

Josef Blumers

Melinda wanted to be hurt....???? As Melinda listened to the odd echo of their breathing, Matt reached into his bag and withdrew the two items, a bracelet, and a quiver. => withdrew two

Luciaron

Nice, looking forward to how they grow from here

Tim Johnson

i think this is the direction it has to go. We already see her dreading how poorly shes doing as a leader and is working to make sure she improves. This experience will only serve to further kick her in the ass and get the rest of them motivated.

Bunny Waffles

Their team has a Healer with an absurdly broken healing talent. Really this is the kick in the ass they might need to push their training into high gear and shape up faster. End of the day, they are still friends.

Matt

I like how Melinda is finally realizing that she's over relied on her healing ability to keep her team going like Baxter has been trying to tell her.

Yup, that was really fun.

Nah, she’s more of a support right now. Ties people up and such. Okay damage, but no defence to speak of, so it would only take a single lucky shot from any one of them to get her.

Uuds

I enjoyed that.

striderfighter

So nice to see Matt dominating

Rhaid

That was very satisfying to read!

Enkelados

Hmm this makes the whole relationship very lopsided. Matt has a huge wealth and power advantage over them. That's not healthy for friendships. I hope they take motivation and not bitterness out of this.

Alex Matheny

Hm. Idk man i like asters odds more then one in ten.

Dan

That was very satisfying to have Matt walk all over his old friends


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