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Chapter 78

🕑 Added 2021-09-17 20:01:02 +0000 UTC

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Aaron Martinez

That and fight similarly strong people

Tjark

It's nice to see what you did with mentioning the void dragon egg before explaining how a void bond might not have the drive to get to 15 and now we see that with Luna and Nora. I remember how it was mentioned Luna is a crazy void user and apparently she craves making others perfect.

Jacob

"When she slept, she dreamt, and when she had dreams, she had Nora." Well, I wasn't expecting to be sad today, but here we are.

Simon

I bet the special location has some interesting rifts you whose delves they are auctioning off. And I also bet ppl are going to be confused by the rabbit rift.

Frardowin

I initially thought it was liz that said that, but you are right about it being baxter. You are also correct that is seems very out of place/character for their possible manager to refer to them as matt's friends.

Knyko

Hopefully Matt and Co start to really push now, given that they have shown the ability to delve rifts 2 tiers above their own(and that counter them) thats really what they should be doing in order to improve the most, is it not?

Josef Blumers

"Matt’s friends are the perfect team on paper. They have all the traditional rift .... " Baxter should speak of Melinda's Team, not Matt's Friends Team.

C_Mantis

I said more in another comment but I wont have lots of overlap so worry not. I agree it would feel bad to get an entire chapter repeated. I try to shake things up and change the tone at least for this one. Liz watching them get smacked around is just another day. Nothing new or unexpected. Just Matt fighting.

C_Mantis

No you arent wrong but the idea to tell it from Liz's pov was deliberate. She see's it a just another fight for Matt. Nothing big or special. Don't worry though this wont happen often. Like look how they wont be going to the auction. I dont intend to have lots of repeated scenes. Look at RR and how many people just didn't care about Melinda's chapters and wont read them. Gotta have enough where they don't miss anything.

william wallace

Also, possible to steal essence crystals from the other side. I would assume as the war goes on there will be rewards that could help with advancement, like a fully charged rift run, wouldn't matter for Matt and Liz but could be very valuable for teams that are near peak.

Alex Matheny

Hm. Glad to see i was right with aster :D

Alex Matheny

I gotta say i do not agree with this. I think the internal thoughts and perspectives and little details added up tomake this a good read. Being told matt was asked to "play" with them to drive it home? Couldn't have gotten that from last chapter. Learning about liz as a(n adorable) little girl? Worth it.

BladeTytan

Termac, they can buy Essence Crystals that you can absorb, worth around 1 delve per crystal. Melinda talks about them in the last chapter, near the beginning when she’s planning what to buy with her Points.

Termac

How would they raise their tiers above seven? They're fighting a no-kill war, not delving. And even if they were killing, absorbing essence from another person is a bad idea for reasons, so they still wouldn't gain essence. The only essence they're getting is essence stones.

Enkelados

Having read concept of death, this chapter was really one the weaker. Lots of rehashing of scenes already told. I know you kinda intend those to be different stories, but it really takes away enjoyment if half the chapter is a retelling of already told stuff. And mat's Liz perspective didn't add enough to require a retell. I hope I'm not to harsh but I've read too many stories already that lost themselves in retelling the same scene through different perspectives.

The Lost Pages

Really enjoyed the Luna side story. Thanks for including it.

I second this. RR can be more than a little shitty for authors, and the Melinda pov was just another example of that. These are fun, and they turned out great. Keep up the good work.

Luciaron

Nice to see some reflection from the team on how they started to slip a bit themselves focusing on the wealth side of generating rifts

Bodoroo

It was unfortunate Melinda's chapter and this one overlapped like this but it wasn’t exactly the same chapter rephrased so it was fine. Liz and Luna's povs really helped keeping me reading rather than just skim it. And considering they are at the opposite sides of the war we probably won't have too much of side story and main one bleeding into each other more than necessary. I was bit scared when the note on wednesday's chapter said there would be overlapping, but I am glad with how C. Mantis is handling this. I saw some discouraging comments on RR when the first Melinda chapter dropped off this week, but I am personally happy with how you've handled that side story line to this point. Thank you for providing more content and and entertainment to our weekdays and not charging extra for the side stories. I am sure you are making more than one person's day, on both patreon and rr, despite the ones that immediately dismissed the side story.

william wallace

Really like how the two stories are blending. Usually don’t like side stories as they tend to be pretty disconnected from the main plot but the Wednesday side story is helping with the main plot. Will be interesting to see how the war goes. Are the pathers prohibited from raising their level to/above seven? Also i hope the main team gets “killed” at least once. A year of constant fighting should put them in at least a few tough spots.

Log Daniels

Thanks for the chapter!! :D


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