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Chapter 83

🕑 Added 2021-10-04 20:00:04 +0000 UTC

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Fortunis

Aster is Best Fox lol. As for the bitch that screwed them, I'd absolutely hammer her tits in to paste. I'd also be getting with the other teams that got fucked over and looking to take over somthing kingdom side to start a 3rd faction. Cause fuck those people.

Adurna

I too really enjoy the characterization and the depth it adds. It is surprisingly well anchored and shows that Matt has lived through things before and has been growing behind the scenes. I disagree on it edging towards issues. It is very much the model if having overcome a bad situation. He was faced with his own fragility. He accepted it as it is and decided to do the best with his situation. It is literally the base model of cognitive behavioural therapies centered on dealing with a bad situation or processing trauma. Accept it happened. Distinguish it from yourself and act to do the best of your current situation without letting the past rule the present.

Adurna

Oh interesting catch! I doubt it somewhat as I suspect her social capital will be great with pathers meaning it would essentially become a nobles faction. Not impossible though, especially if twisting the truth enough

TerrestrialOverlord

They definitely need to break that idiots femur, maybe Liz can find a way to make it way more painful. The faster people know that you don't mess with their team without repercussions, the easier it will be to continue with the war... they also need to make a public announcement that all participants need to exclude them from political machinations... also changing sides won't help them, and will just give them the option to add horrendous torture to the menu

Stylemys

Well... duh. Matt’s talent hasn’t been a gimmick for a long long time. He’s had multiple freak outs about some high Tier person kidnapping him as an infinite mana battery because it’s so powerful even now. The Emperor literally called his Talent a game changer for refilling rifts. Gregor told Matt that even if he fell off the Path the Empire would have a job for him on the back lines. His absurd potential and value as a mana source is very well established at point.

Stylemys

So this war is definitely meant as a training exercise for young royals too. The state benefits most when your people do X, but your subjects individually benefit the most by doing Y instead. Now reconcile the two somehow.

Proposal: Matt could win the war for the kingdom if he was willing to reveal his talent. So we know that one of the major shortages either side here faces is mana. Crafters need mana, Healers need mana, defensive formations need mana, rifts need mana... Everything needs mana. In fact, it could be argued that having Matt out in the field fighting is perhaps the most wasteful thing that could be done with his talent. Of course, no one knows what he can do, but let us pretend for a second that he decided to reveal his mana generation to the kingdom. Here are ways that the kingdom would get ahead: 1. Crafters could create more items. This is important because it would make it so the kingdom could supply their troops more effectively. They made a big deal about it a couple times, so I'm gonna assume it's important. However, even in the most wasteful cases he could be used to offset the cost of using the cannons we saw earlier. Free up some portable mana stones to be used in temporary weapons. 2. Tiering up the cannon fodder. If matt were to make a few hundred rifts of tier 5 and 6, then just spend all his time refilling them, he could probably single handedly grow his side. Even if he were to claim every item out of the rift as his, it would probably still be considered a fair trade. The average level of the kingdom would rise, and that would be a boon. 3. Healing. I would expect with so many people needing healing the people upstairs would be very happy to have some more mana. The kingdom could probably leverage this to earn more point purely off that. 4. Defensive formations. We saw on the training world that cities can have mana hungry shields. If he were to go around charge these, the kingdom's position would be nearly unbreakable. Now, I get that Matt doesn't want to reveal his talent and be used as a mana battery. BUT, purely from speculation, I would say that his talent being used to it's full potential as a 'utility caster' would win them the war. If you still aren't convinced, consider this; There really are only up to tier 7 people on this planet. Everyone's mana generation is fairly low - three days at rest to full low - except Matt's. There are only some very limited resources that can outdo him with regards to output, and once those are used Matt ends up as likely the best source of mana on the planet. By a long shot. Merely by the fact that he's no longer out-tiered, Matt's talent has gone from a useful gimmick that lets him grow fast to THE best source of mana available. Thoughts?

Jonas

Thanks for the great chapter

Man, Matt's 'I think I've been prepared to die for a long time now' was heart wrenching. It's an impressively subtle characterisation that puts him on the edge of having issues, while explaining how he can continue normal life. Gotta respect the author for that.

Kory Smith

I like the idea of the Pather faction creating chaos, and there’s a possibility of it being introduced as a Chekov’s Gun.

Forestfire

I read it as Luna being unhappy with Matt just swinging his sword around. At the end he kind of did a berserker rage thing

Obbu

It's interesting that we're seeing the foreshadowing of a third faction being created - not because team bucket might do it - but because both current factions are not being portrayed as villainous. Meanwhile we have a suitably villainous very pure bloodline person about to be reprimanded in such a way that might cause her to leave... :P

Alex Nimmer

If I may suggest a couple edits I think you mention twice that Luna is impressed, the second time seems redundant. When thinking about Matt, Luna notes that he might be more devious than she thought after he revealed his concept but hid his talent but in the next paragraph she worries that he might be a warrior blockhead after witnessing him kill 30 people (writing on my phone so not easy to pull up exact phrase), which would be fine except that her retelling doesn’t match the timeline of events. If I remember correctly the sequence of events was he mentioned his concept then he went HAM. This makes her opinion the way it’s written a little confusing

Obbu

Edit Suggestion: cost to higher Tier 25's -> cost to hire Tier 25's

Lictor Magnus

Considering they’re all be watched by hi tier people so that they don’t die I can’t see them getting away with that.

SunderGoldmane

I like this idea a lot. This would unify the prince and princess as well and would be a best case scenario for the empire.

SunderGoldmane

I think what alby is pissed at is that he could be dumping half of the stored points into infrastructure and it pay for the other points he’s keeping on ice. Money that isn’t moving is money that’s not generating value. And from the sounds of it this is a situation where the prince is NEVER allowed to use these banked points.

COCOMOJOE

I hope the pather start there own faction.

JoBo12

Great Chapter which provided insights on the bigger picture. I am curious if there will be an issue with a "win trading" culture, in which teams from different sides conspire to trade forts back and forth with minimal combat to artificially generate points. Would the Empire war AI intervene if such behavior was detected?

Steven Mcduffie

the third faction would be my favorite outcome lol

Alphafenrir401

Tier 15 patreon always could most people just forget or fail to notice that reward like the fen character awhile back was my idea

A B

I'm really just reading to watch for when Aster is having some good rabbit fun. Lol

Osamaru Ta

XD Wait, we can Design a Character? When did this happen? and how?

Stylemys

The banking of the points actually makes sense. With the soldiers continuously reviving, this is going to be a war of attrition. It will likely take a massive well-time maneuver to break that and really put the other side permanently on the back foot. The Kingdom is going to need those points to fund something truly game-changing.

Adurna

They are being offer reimbursement to hopefully keep them. They could accept it and walk afterwards. With how it is laid out I doubt that a contract stopping then is gonna be brought into play. It is just expensive to change sides :p

Storyhunter

Well looks like the current crop of faction leadership at least knows what's good for them. What they might not realize is that righting the Imbalance in points rewards is a kind of test to see who will make good vassals. After all who has the most influence on the throne of a vassal state. The emperor.

Adurna

Same! It would fit with some of the Panthers we have seen and it should be a worthwhile challenge to grow stronger too.

Nim

Now, the question is, after being offered the payoff to stay...do they?

Stylemys

So the prince and princess are willing to collude to prevent a Pather faction from forming. They should also make deals to punish each other’s problematic nobles with prearranged death traps. They’d each maintain deniability while screwing over their internal rivals.

Teatime42

I like that we got to see the Prince NOT being an asshole, after seeing multiple other assholes. He may not be a great guy, but he's decent enough to know and do his job as best he can.

Alphafenrir401

Oooooh I want the third faction thing to happen lol

Tibstrike

It's also to test both competing sides ability to properly plan, strategize, and handle people like Pathers or independent forces.

Clay Smith

So it helps that the leader of the reinforcements wasn’t a coward and was just a cunning noble POS. Personally I prefer my nobles to be competent and evil compared to incompetent and cowards. Makes for a better antagonist.

Rielgesh

Why is the point system set like that where it's more lucrative to take a fort than hold it? Best guess is either to reflect taking land from the enemy, or to weed out those that are only participating for personal gain.

Forestfire

Thanks for giving aster a friend to play with.

Forestfire

Argh! I could rant and speculate for pages about how most of the nobles only wish for the war to go well enough for their faction to 'Win' without either nation making headway

Andrew

Thank you!

Wesley Ervin

My boy is thriving! Thank you!

Bunny Waffles

That last bit just made my day! Of course the support animals would be nigh indestructible when you are dealing with a bunch of traumatized superhumans.

Enzo Elacqua

She seems pretty powerful in her own right, plus she likely has the support of both her parents who can just give her things since she isn’t on the path

IWannaBeATiger

I really wanna see Matt/Liz crush the reinforcements leader brutally in a sanctioned duel.


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