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Chapter 91

🕑 Added 2021-11-01 20:01:01 +0000 UTC

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Jamie Trevino

THEY DID IT! Finally, stage one complete, actually pretty invested in their relationship and happy to see it progress

Stylemys

<blockquote>"The screen changed to show an older <b>feather-headed</b> clone of Elizabeth holding a little baby"</blockquote> Since Mara has feathers instead of hair, that would be a major difference between her and Liz. If they're going to be compared to 'clones' then the one major discrepancy should probably be noted.

Erriballon

Are we getting a chapter today ?

Noooo I'm finally up to date and can no longer binge this incredible story :( Great work with all of this C Mantis what an amazing story!

Adurna

Huh I guess. Though to be fair two consecutive arcs have had the same location so fine enough.

BlodWedd

at chapter 94 it will be 50% of the story on this tier 6 planet

How do you pronounce Ateleos? At-lee-os or A-thee-lee-os?

C_Mantis

well see it later but it wouldn't have been binding. The kids have right of refusal. If there is a betrothal contract its mostly just agreeing to have them spend time together at negotiated dates and times to try and get feeling.

Stylemys

A harem of bunnies

Obbu

Edit Suggestion: enough protection to fight off the another Great Power -&gt; enough protection to fight off another Great Power

C_Mantis

The queen is right where i want her then! I wanted to avoid the ''Cold Ruler" type of queen to her daughter. Its so over done. Instead let the daughter never live up to her own expectation.

Ernie 3

Also what would happen if his storage ring disintegrated with his growth sword inside?

Ernie 3

Please tell me the arm that got disintegrated wasn't the one with the very very rare mana growth ring and sword storage ring?

C_Mantis

the bounty system is kingdom run but you arent wrong about the few pathers they killed having different point totals. Whoops

Crushing Despair

Sorry for nitpicking, but I remember killing pathers gave different reward (50 points for t6 I think). Matt and the team killed at least a few of them, I think (void mage?) Also top teams have bounties, did the void mage have any?

Osamaru Ta

XD Is it just me, or is Aster getting Sassier? Liz is rubbing off on her lol.

Mike G.

Good chapter, thanks! “On honey." -&gt; "Oh honey."

TerrestrialOverlord

I was hoping that Matt's concept would somehow evolve to another layer or level.. Somehow I both like and dislike the queen. Also Bow Chica wow wow..

Obran

princess'

Adurna

Seems like a worthy investment for the team. Matt could repay by giving sieging forts so good point source.

Adurna

I have trouble imagining the Empire personel not just discreetly replacing it if so.

DB

Umm, hope that arm that got voided wasn’t the one with the contraceptive (again). Or as backup Liz’s is still working after that extensive damage…

SunderGoldmane

If aster doesn’t comment on them smelling like sex when she gets back I will be disappointed lol

PlasmaticPi

At this point I think its safe to say Aster will eventually fall in love with a cute bunny person while she is away after she gets her human form. She just loves those things too much.

Thomas Brusilovsky

Very cute

Stylemys

“Sir Matthew, you dare threaten a <strike>princesses’</strike> <i><b>princess’s</b></i> virtue?”

Clay Smith

So I really liked this chapter. I love seeing the 3rd person perspective on major events. Really like Sara and the Queen tho. I hope Sara has a larger party going forward.

SquiddlyWinks

Hit that like a tree on the forest moon on Endor!

Tjark

I really like the relationship between Queen and Sara. It shows the queen cares for her daughter. Except for that betrothed to Liz comment maybe but I guess that's just how it is in their world.

Yannick Scheer

Agreed. Especially as those giving orders are usually focused to sow chaos among defenders

I could see it turning out where he gathers some points from his teammates to try and grab that cracked breach skill. Maybe a hundred thousand each, with promise to repay? That would lower the cost to what, 1,000,000?

Yannick Scheer

Ngl laughed more than I thought I would. Thx for the laugh!

That point total really wasn’t as high as I expected, but it seems reasonable. 10X their previous high for ten days in a place where they have 1000X the chance to die. That said, I was a bit disappointed that his role of commander didn’t give him points (aside from that one). Thought being in charge of the wall would earn him something.

That seemed like the plan, but then her mom was distracted.

Fleetpanda

... and in the corner of the room, invisible to the two lovers, Luna, Kurt, and April floated while taking notes. Luna, as always, was quite upset. "What is that technique!? He would be getting a 30% increase in efficiency if he put a little more effort into his hips!" Kurt was madly scribbling on sheets of paper, and April could see out of the corner of her eye plans being drawn up for the two to attend yoga classes and for Matt to take supplementary women's anatomy lessons.

Derze

Sex is a perfect coping mechanism. good for them.

Banroth

She let the Queen mother her. mother verb: to care for or protect like a mother

Enzo Elacqua

I was hoping she would bring up Matt to her mom. It seemed she was going that way when she talked about “one of them in particular”, and the whole nickname thing. Especially since he was part of Liz’s team

Rhaid

Aster all: "You just don't get it dad!"

IWannaBeATiger

Damn that's a lot of points. Wonder what he'll spend it on.

Jake Malony

Thanks for the chapter! That was a super sexy... Point total!

Gerald Morris

There is a sentence. That doesn't make any sense. It says she sat with the queen mother her... Etc. Right after she gets out of the shower.


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