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Chapter 93

🕑 Added 2021-11-08 21:01:00 +0000 UTC

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Tom sawicki

Awesome chapter!!!! The only feedback I have is in the beginning when they were putting the flying apartment together, it was a bit vague or less detailed to me and it took me a minute to get the picture in my head of what they were doing. Maybe I was reading too quick cause I was excited but I had to re-read it a few times before I realized the purpose. Thanks for the chappy!

Compendium

Not gonna lie, feel like he should have left a message saying "Soooo EZ" as Talous was tele'd out lol

Awesome chapter! This is such an enjoyable progression story. Love seeing all of the improvements and additions to their skillsets. Liz and Matt are more terrifying with each chapter.

J S

Nice work!

Could be. but then again, a lot of people have weird names for their SO's. Melinda could just have ignored it.

Obbu

Fun chapter :) The fight against Talous was fun, and I thought the description of each exchange was clear and tense - was also good to see Matt on the back foot. Edit Suggestions: but saying on the defensive would only tie them down. ->but staying on the defensive would only tie them down. Matt scorches a hole in their lines. ->Matt scorched a hole in their lines.

C_Mantis

Well ideally Matt could use cracked breach as a normal spell and just crush rifts with shitting out mana. But he will do some of those things worry not.

Crushing Despair

It seems Matt improved the least from the team, they got multiple upgrades, and he got just one. He's saving up for cracked breach, but what's the point? It's said that he won't be able to use it in the war. And for rift monsters mana blade works just fine. I think shoring up his weaknesses will be much better investment. So far we found that - He can be held up (by water, for example), he should think how he can be "controlled" and look for counters. - Phantom armor is weak to corrosion and void. Again, look for countermeasures. - Matt's is good with the sword, but not the best. He can train with the military. Maybe with focus on aerial combat. - Look up for natural treasures. Blood iron will be an improvement, but there might be even better ones. To me, staying up indefinitely is Matt's greatest strength, and he should play to it.

Crushing Despair

If I think about it, for barrier to keep heat, it should be airtight. If Matt uses flamethrower inside, they might run out of oxygen (I'm not sure how magic works). Or they can be noticed in the sky with bright flamethrower. Or it's not his problem, so Matt didn't think about it.

Dragebar

Just as a headsup, youmight wanna state why matt doesnt just use flamethrower while in the clouds to heat the flying base up - or include it

Crushing Despair

Well, I thought he removed the armor because he was going to teleport and he was betting he won't get hit. He also ran Endurance to heal up a bit and recover.

Shaggy

You have an error with your logic in this chapter. If Talous can break through his armour and still hurt him it is foolish to lower the mana cost to it's lowest because it isn't doing anything. The armour is still slowing the blow. (In fact you have used that logic to explain why he wasn't seriously hurt by someone else in the past) I would describe this as similar to having someone be able to hurt me through my steel plate so I take it off and just wear leather armour or cloth armour because it wasn't doing anything anyway.

Allute

So with the whole no reaction to the double princess quip there I'm guessing we're missing something that's likely to be expanded on in a Melinda chapter?

SunderGoldmane

That was thrilling.

Shmigit

If you're talking about the management team, I think one of the POVs for Luna had her saying she wanted to wait until after the war to meet them so that she could fully observe them.

TerrestrialOverlord

I hope we get some kinda time skip to like a few months or years... see how they are growing... also when are the trainers going to meet them...

Erriballon

Can we have one more plzzzzzz

C_Mantis

changed one to reduce repetitiveness. Thanks

Robert Amundson

Pretty enjoyable but the bit where you said "Talous was a better melee fighter." Twice was a little weak.

Enzo Elacqua

Nice to see their growth, glad to see Matt’s embracing the mage lifestyle he was destined for all along

Andrew

Thank you!

Luciaron

The mobile flying sword base in the clouds is awesome!

C_Mantis

:)

william wallace

Flying base in the clouds has an awesome Super Villain vibe. Even if its low tech now, future Matt can power his own armed flying fortress. That high mps flame thrower is nasty especially if he can tweak it for more range or make the fire sticky like napalm. As much as cpa is the core of Matt’s build he should look into acquiring a few more defensive growth items and skills. The war goes well this week. At least until flying assassins figure out how to track them.

Michael Hughes

I really want to know what they brought back. TFTC. See you next time.

BaguaBrady

FYI Matt calls Liz double princess in front of Melinda before any mention that she let them in on her parentage. Not sure if that's intended or an oversight

Clay Smith

At least at the current level. If Matt wasn’t doing war stuff he probably catch up to upper 6 quite quickly and would probably curb stomp the dude.

Disclancer

Really enjoyed this chapter

Thomas Brusilovsky

Cool fight, nice way to wreck the dude. He’s a pretty good counter to us for now, but doesnt seem like he will scale nearly as well.

Frank

Tftc

Log Daniels

First like and comment :P


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