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Chapter 108

🕑 Added 2022-01-10 20:01:01 +0000 UTC

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Jonas

Thanks for the great chapter

John Thomas

Suggestion: "None of them were unfit, but a mage usually didn't undertake the same kind of strenuous training that a melee fighter would. ." -> "None of them were unfit, but a mage usually didn't undertake the same kind of strenuous training that a melee fighter would." (Remove double period)

Rifts! Whooooooo.

Logrus

Good transition into a higher tempo / pacing. Rift making certainly has some room for interesting stuff to happen, but I still worry about the overall pace of the story. But I'm glad to be here to find out!

Tom sawicki

I liked this chapter in that it felt like a good time skip/training/ transition type thing. Really looking forward to the rift making!

Yotedom

The classic training montage! Not a bad topic to go at a faster pace, it works well.

Adurna

I enjoy the tempo. Quite good for a training arc to move things along and give a bit of development of character and world too.

James Squibb

Really liked the chapter! I was a little disappointed with Matt's reaction to Luna's goading though during training where she is trying to break each person though.

Borindak

Matt may have a lot of ideas to test with rift-making, but clearly the most important is making those ice cream rabbits for Aster.

Frardowin

That was fast.

Obbu

Edit Suggestions: This was more a general and informal tactics training class ->This was more a general and informal tactics training class (Remove Double Space) She did only have her paws to work with, after all. ->She did only have her paws to work with, after all. (Remove Double Space) you’ll be fortunate to avoid crackingyour spirit. ->you’ll be fortunate to avoid cracking your spirit.” It was still a chuck of stone propelled with a point. ->It was still a chunk of stone propelled with a point. with them beating wave after wave back. But as time progressed, ->with them beating wave after wave back. But as time progressed, (Remove Double Space)

Shmigit

"Sam made herself a Concept centered around her Phrase, ‘the dose makes the poison’." This looks familiar, it would appear I used the same source for inspiration when I created my submitted character a while back.

saganatsu

"Kyle, in the same vein, created himself a greatsword Concept. ... . The proficiency was akin to those individuals whose Concepts centered around that particular weapon" -> I think it's "akin to those whose Talents"

Andrew

Thank you!

Dragebar

the rough of it was that we learned that matt doesn't have the amount of fine control to excell in skillfull manipulation of the elements, and that he won't get it either while on the path bc. his manapool is gonna wreck his control again and again. Then again, we don't know just how far he is right now, so I hope he learned a bit more than "shove tons of windmana to the front and hope for the best"

Dragebar

also after my science rant, I have to say: I too don't like these questions, as you can never be certain if its a trickquestion "none, just push it into the sea by hand and use no water yourself" or sth stupid

Dragebar

to follow up on c.mantis: to get a boat to float, you need to have the water surround the boat to the point that, if it were in e.g. the sea., it would replace enoough water to float. Water pressure doesnt work with acumulated mass but with height (to simplify it), which means 1m under the sealevel there is the same pressure as 1m under water in a pool. Long storry short, if the drydock is a bathtub with exactly the same shape as the boat, then the volume needed between boat and wall in order to reach the required "height" of water would be extremely small. But thats academic, as there is no drydock with a perfect formfit for any ship

Dominic French

It was a pretty good training montage, now I want to see their skills put to use in exploring the randomness that Matt can create

Victor

A few things seemed a little off with the faster pacing, but I much prefer this to weeks of just mundane training without rifts. I think the element manipulation could use some more expanding on and exploring its potential. I don't like something that could be extremely strong left without defined limits. Thanks for the chapter 😊

Luciaron

Looking forward to the crazy scientist. Thanks for the chapter!

sqeesqad

Fair, dealing with age and ferals is tough. Still, can't be good for her development. Also, couldn't you just have shown one, maybe two, of the teases? That should've been enough to get the idea it's done to everyone while stil having the actual reactions of (some of) the characters. Maybe something like the POV seeing the other characters get angry too

Alex Hignett

Thank you for the chapter! I really enjoyed this and the pacing was good. Would have loved to see more about the growth and improvement of Matt & Co and how they felt different. But awesome chapter non the less!

C_Mantis

The Concept of Death is over. And I was going to have each person have their own POV of the "talk" but it was just too many POV's to show she was doing it to everyone. And Aster is more like a teen at this point but she isnt human so its weird.

sqeesqad

Also, how do they plan on dealing with the trauma the torture is undoubtedly causing for Aster? She's basically still a child, right?

sqeesqad

The luna part was a bit strange, why do the teasing from her perspective? It's one of most boring perspectives I can think of for it. Any of the main character's perspectives would've been more interesting imo Also, why so many details on the sidecharacters? They have their own story, right? Why not keep these details confined to that?

IWannaBeATiger

I thought so too but dry docks are supposed to be flooded (and then drained) to get ships in and out. Could be a trick question though which was my first thought as well. Edit: Well there we go lol.

C_Mantis

So I was told the answer was, and note I hate these things so I dont follow the logic, is "Enough to fill the drydock. IE about a cup full as its a near perfect fit." But i refuse to do these out of principle soooo idk

hmDrake

Thanks for the chapter!

Enzo Elacqua

That was great, interested to see just what Matt can do with his manipulation skills now

Istyatur Elestel

To me it reads as a poorly worded question. In dry dock, by definition a ship is out lf water and supported by its keel or clamps. Or magic i guess. So, either the first part is a red herring and the answer is the same as always (technically the correct if i remember parsing my bad english rules right) or None due to it not floating.

Lictor Magnus

That was great. I thought it was very well paced.

M van Dongen

Batterries not Included.

IWannaBeATiger

Weird mind teaser. Is there an answer or is it supposed to be unanswerable?


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