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Chapter 125

🕑 Added 2022-03-11 20:00:05 +0000 UTC

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Thomas

For everyone complaining about how they haven't really changed personality wise in over a decade and haven't really matured. Maturity comes from biological changes in individuals far more than from experience, unless the experience was fairly traumatic. From a biological perspective the amount of time that has passed for the trio has been less than 2 years, they are still biologically teenagers because of the slowdown in aging from being higher tiers. Once someone reaches tier 15 they no longer biologically age so their personality will be set and only traumatic experiences will change it. This is not to say that high tier people in this universe won't change and grow, but the core of who they are will be stable.

Daniel Smith

So I have 2 min problems with this chapter, one of which was already meantioned, the time skip putting them in there 30s seems out of place within them still acting like they are in there teens. Then them not being allowed to advance or use all of the abilities even tho Luna says she wants them to be the strongest they can be.

Rhys Rathbun

I agree that kind of character development could go wrong easily but it doesn't need to be a vast change. It's not like you go to being a completely different person between 18 and thirty but there is usually at least advancement in maturity. Also I do agree that Matt and Liz's relationship could be expounded on a bit now that they've been together for a decade.

Adurna

It would suit him

Jonas

Thanks for the great chapter

Andrew Pritko

I really enjoyed that chapter. Fantastic. Thank you!

Rhys Rathbun

I really want matt to rank up at least one tier via inspiration.

TerrestrialOverlord

mundane moments like this are why I love this novel (and the rift research I love a well thought out concept) "Their delving eventually devolved into the three of them starting a contest of who could come up with the best monologue line that fit with an endless stream of [Fireball]s."

Nim

Little shade for Tala there, Mantis? :)

Jake Malony

There is a potential problem here with the passing of time andvimmortals in general. It's hard to understand and thus relate to these people that spend 15 years as if it were a few months. How quickly do they change and mature? If you do a 1000year time skip, does the reader care about the vastly different main character? If the character does change that much its jarring. If they don't, it's jarring. Just seems hard to write.

JoBo12

I hope we get to see a change in mentality and demeanor from the team members now that they are 30 years old. If you put it into perspective: By now, nearly half their time since birth was spent being delvers and Matt and Liz have now been in a relationship together for a third of their lives (nearly 10 years iirc). I am curious as to how their relationship evolved during this time. It would make sense for them to have learned and studied delving a lot during this time, meaning they no longer require as many explanation from their mentors as before.

Pyrefiend

It took me off guard seeing that they were 30 years old. The passage of time always went gradually enough that I was still imagining them as teenagers somehow.

Brad

What other system would you use?

Andrew

Thank you!

Leander

Ok the only problem I‘ve had with your story is the justice system. I mean, it is a semi-futuristic society with people in it that had potentially aeons to study law and the best they could come up with is a version of the anglo-american judge/jury system? A system that is almost ancient, with ancient flaws and shortcomings? Come on.

C_Mantis

well matt will have time to make talismans so its not like he will charge in the middle of battle. the prep time hides him well imo.

StormyAngel

I actually had assumed that the Talismans would be the last thing Matt could reveal at the tournament. To use them he has to be rich (which no Pather can be rich enough for this) or able to generate absurd amounts of mana. This is basically a dead giveaway about his talent. Edit: Ok, not a dead giveaway. But it's more than I think they should be revealing. Although, I guess the point the chapter makes is that they're going to claim his talent makes Talisman's cost effective *without* absurd mana generation? I dunno. It's only a single step removed from the truth, and that makes me nervous. I can't help thinking there were better options. I do love Liz's disguise set though. The shapeshifting weapon is unique enough, and adding fire is fun.

C_Mantis

correct

Thomas Brusilovsky

Interesting. Im curious about how specifically they explain his current persona’s capabilities. He can spam talismans and infinite damage spells it looks like, so what exactly is he supposed to be

Austin

You say there are tournaments every five years, but in the paragraph above that you say the next tournament is in 7 years.. do you mean they're skipping a tournament in two years and participating in the one in seven?

C_Mantis

yeah its been too long for him not having any problems where his fist isnt the answer. Gotta learn.

hmDrake

Thanks for the chapter! Glad they addressed the beating and lesser sacrifice.


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