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Chapter 143

🕑 Added 2022-05-23 19:01:01 +0000 UTC

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nolan saylor

All the PoVs are fun for different reasons. I just love that Leon's PoV is so wholesome, both for caring for his family and loving his wife.

David Oldfield

I rather liked seeing the dichotomy of rivalry and partnership at play. You don't really get to know any of the royals before this chapter, and I doubt I was alone in wondering about their cohesion. They are clearly bound to a singular purpose, united on everything that is truly important, while equally married to a political philosophy antithetical to others. It is rather like seeing leaders from various religious denominations arguing about who will burn in hell while simultaneously doing the good work.

Kacoo

That was a great chapter. The unique perspectives tied together by that final sentence for each of them. The Harper foreshadowing provides an interesting step. In the earlier chapters I was quite worried that you would struggle with timelineing it cause the powerful secondary characters are so long lived and the main characters are going to get there eventually but it seems that that goal line is well in hand

Paxi

2nd read of the chapter, love it, probably my favorite till now!!


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