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Chapter 157

🕑 Added 2022-07-11 19:00:05 +0000 UTC

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Adurna

Hmm I guess we are also mostly focused on the action rather than slice if life. I feel like the humour cones out whenever we do more slice of life/resting chapters.

SwiftFate

I love when Matt lets go a bit and shows his fun side.. I feel like he is often quite a broody and reserved character, which isn't necessarily bad, it can just come across as quite bland sometimes. Would like to see him banter and have fun more. I think Liz's parents are great role models in that regard, so hopefully he opens up a bit more.

Logan

I really liked how the Gems reveal went.

Kalphor

What did luna’s message say?? I must know!!!

Ryan

Yeah that's more in line with what I was thinking. Plenty of exciting story bits to cover, I can't wait to see what you do!

Nimps

Nawww Kimberly... I would be interested to see how Matt as himself would interact with her real self. But that's obviously not possible in this competition. On the other hand I am going to enjoy the absolutely epic next battle between them!!

C_Mantis

yeah the more I math it out it looks like mid next month. Im 5 chapters ahead of patreon adn we are getting into the "top 50" area so its going to be a bit father out than I thought.

Ryan

Thanks for the update before the chapter. I feel like there’s a lot to get through to wrap the arc but by the end of the month. Regardless, I’m excited to see what comes next. The arc has been awesome so far. 😀

A B

Ah in my initial read I read that as recorded lines like a script to be read. I see it now, thanks.

VertigoMonkey

Matt prerecorded a lot of lines, then it states that Luna essentially used ventriloquism for any responses needed that weren't prerecorded.

A B

Kurt can speak Matt's lines? I thought his ability made it too dangerous for him to use his voice? Did I miss or forget something?

Rod

Thanks for the chapter. It's great that you are taking breaks. I would hate for you to get burnt out and stop writing this amazing story.

Luciaron

Luna shit talking a bunch of tier 10s is endlessly entertaining for me too.

J S

Good work!


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