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Chapter 162

🕑 Added 2022-07-29 19:01:02 +0000 UTC

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IAVL

You know, Frederick is totally on Point on someone seeing Lilly as an experiment. Just look at what Virgil is doing. I can see her going, "Shit, the Empire is even one step ahead of us in shady experiments to make more Duke Waters!!!! Everything is a conspiracy!!!", with a tin foiled hat on her head and a bunch of 'Yes, Mother' kids behind her murmuring about the derpived Empire, noticebly without tinfoiled hats. They disrupt mind-control after all

Yshua

That really came through, nicely done.

Yshua

To me all this highlights is that other people *are not* strong, because Lizz & Matt still expect to take ‘em with their hands tied behind their back. Same applies to Light & Shadow. These guys are just the Worf Effect.

Clint

We need to see a wider range of the top pathers at the tournament, because they're going to be important in the War arc to come, I'd assume. Especially if Matt's going to be an officer again.

Jon Nay

Or just give him the regeneration skill. No need for a crack

M3lvyn

Wait if you get matt in that cracked skill effect and give him a channel healing spell doesnt he just become ilea from azarinth healer. Add liz through it to and theyre basically invincible in their tier.

Desidia

I wonder what would happen if Melinda tried a healing skill with her death mana? Would it be like her Death Concept vs her Healing Talents? Maybe she can experiment with plants and mundane animals.

C_Mantis

Yeah its more people looking for patterns than the Empire having the secret sauce. They just want to just something bad to try and hurt the others. Or at least that is freddys idea. Im more trying to show that Freddy is trying to work FOR the Empires best interest but hes willing to do things the others dont really consider. Everythings a number to him.

C_Mantis

Eh none of theses chars are t15 rewards I dont think. I really just want to show other people are strong. We dont show too many so worry not.

Mister Cakers

Kinda weird Melindas concept wasn’t brought up

J S

Neat!

Weirwood

Thanks for the chapter. Love having the world filled in a bit more

Weirwood

It's not that the Empire knows how to engineer talents. It's that everyone else will think they do and try to "copy" them by causing planet wide disasters

Tom sawicki

Thanks for the chapter! Fun developments as always! This one felt a bit choppy or disorganized though. I am going to reread it but I feel like a major (potentially?) bomb was dropped in implying that the empire figured out how to engineer “overtalents” but there wasn’t any set up or debrief. Like it just blinked into existence and then back to the story. Maybe I need another pass or it’s just my weird brain! Also, the chapter is still a 7.5/10 lol I am always amazed that what I consider (imo) your “off chapters” are still so good :) and I say that with love and respect lol.

BlackMarch

I have to admit, while I can understand why it may be needed to describe other pather's fights a bit, this chapter just felt empty. Also it also kinda feels like alot of these fights have been shoehorned in here to cover the tier 15 patreon rewards; not sure how true that is but thats kinda what it feels like. I for one know I'd rather have less fluff even if that meant our character ideas don't ever show up.

SilasDrekken

I started out not liking Frederick. He came off slimy and devious, but then you get in his head during his pov’s and realize; yes he is VERY devious but also well reasoned and against all odds, upright. I’ve really come around on him, well played author.

Augustus

It is not too unlikely there should have been people with powerful talents born in the past whether they became famous or not. if the empire has been expanding their population by orders of magnitude it is likely they currently have a small but decent amount of the total population that has ever lived currently living in their borders, which depending on the rate of the Matt level talents appearing allows for the chance that it is just chance. For example about 10% of every human that has ever lived is currently alive right now, this is up from around 2% a century ago, and 2000 years ago it was around .5%. If the empire has been keeping a growth boom on the scale that is going for us right now, with improving living conditions and more room to expand for tens of thousands of years they definitely have to brute numbers to take a shoot at getting a few XXX talents.

Pyrefiend

Maybe someone high tier has a butterfly-effect prediction talent or something similar, and used it to arrange for Matt & Melinda's appearance. With the author drawing direct attention to the unlikeliness of it all, it seems likely that it was manufactured somehow.

SwiftFate

I really am starting to like Frederic. He is so politically savvy, but also genuinely cares for the Empire despite his differing opinions.


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