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Chapter 173

🕑 Added 2022-09-09 19:02:01 +0000 UTC

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Jake Conway

Ok so I'm super late to the party, but I only discovered you on Kindle a week ago so cut me some slack. Anyways, I really hope that they get courts, mundane life, and all paupers super late, and upgrade their teleport rings to be STUUUUPID OP, and then trade rings to propose. Yes I like cheesy romance so what.

Joel Magnuson

I hope Folded reflections and spirit journey are part of this arc. I'm like 90% positive Folded reflections will happen but I really hope spirit journey make the cut as well.

Tauwetter

Question about courtly warfare: the goal is to win the the floor-wide war. But every floor can be entered and exited at any time. How can there be a winner, if the floor remains for 12 years? Or is it a war per ruin?

Tauwetter

Wow, thats an info dump. I dont know how to do it differently, though. We should have made a betting pool on which floors they encounter 😁 Like, everyone submits a list with seven floors. One point if the theme comes up in the delve, another point if you got the floor number right.

ALEXEI

Loving the read but God I really hope mat doesn't add healing to his concept that would just kill all suspense in fights for me.

Jumping Flounder

My money is on them getting blood is thicker in a deep floor, with the reward being a bloodline for matt

Corey Boatright

Was waiting for some kind of choose a monster theme where a random person from the first x to enter got to pick a monster and that became the floors theme. Then somehow having aster be that random person who then picks ice creme bunnies.

I like this lay out, and the floors sound interesting. However, after I read this yesterday and caught up, had a thought. These last two chapters feel a bit unnatural in terms of their exposition. Not too badly in that they don't make sense or don't work, but that it's missing an explanation from Luna as to why she kept them waiting. It feels like she kept them waiting ONLY so she could explain all of this for our sake as the readers. And that leaves me kind of scratching my head, and makes it feel unnatural in hindsight. The exposition itself isn't bad, and is laid out clearly and it makes sense for her to explain it. But the timing makes it very weird. It's like in a show or movie where someone starts explaining something for no reason even though both of them already know it.

Talents are not transferable.but Mats skills are all channels. But it can be atributed to talent that says all chanel skills cost nothing. They have precedents of talents that remove mana cost. But no precedents for mana generation talent.

Miguel Canarte

There is also the possibility that matt and Susanne get blood lines like the dwarves

Phillip Hunsicker

So let me change the question from which would help OP Matt and company to which would be best for story/character development. My personal opinion is Courtly Warfare(what if they are seperated and join different sides...), Spirit Journey(they all have to face their demons of course this will be fun) , Folded Reflections(the series of short chapters on the characters other possible journeys through life would be fun) and Self-Identity (ths would potentially let the secret out about Matts talents after all someone else would get them... ) and potentially Blood is Thicker(this is so they find out about bloodlines before tier 15 and Matt and Susanne might have to over come some trust issues)

Matthew Smith

Shove it into the inherent slot and bam, the universe's hardest hitter it born. It's what I'd do if I could expand my mana pool back to max by precharging a couple stones. (Insert Palpatine meme here)

Matthew Smith

Ita a simple solution to his very unique problem and I'd be disappointed if he doesn't think of it with it being able to make ANY skill and all


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