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Chapter 244

🕑 Added 2023-06-05 19:00:05 +0000 UTC

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Colton Horton

Oh! What if forming her concept/intent/aspect causes a dice roll? Surely a nat 1 would severely injur/kill her, but what if she rolled a 20 on concept creation?

Colton Horton

I love Eleanor's talent. I wonder if it affects automated or reactive abilities of items that she isn't consciously activating. If so, a weapon that acts kinda like MCU's Black Panthers armor could be absolutely amazing for her. Something that absorbs/stores damage done to the item and adds it to the next attack could turn the nat 1's into a benefit for her. Then any damage that isn't absorbed could be fixed through a repair rune.

C_Mantis

just the Empire. Sorry. I should ahve made that clear. The other Great Powers do their own thing. The corps, the republic, the guilds, and the clans are all pretty nice places but not as nice as the empire with the guild being a close second. The Monster Collective is more neutral (About earths western countries) but the sects and federation are downright awful to live in.

Abriel Blauer

C. Mantis You are saying "There aren't any homeless in PoA" Did you meant all the Great Power or just the Empire. I remember being said that Agatha (Manny's Granny) implemented many social reform, against the will of the Nobility at the time and that she had to finance said reform herself. I remember that a large part of the Emperor delving profit still goes to support basic food / sheltering across the Empire. This, in turn, allowed the population of the Empire to grow beyond any other Great Power, and increased the chance of outlier. Combined with the Path of Ascension, which allow kids from poorer background to have a chance to grow, resulted in Duke Water, Light and Shadow, and now probably Matt. Many other Great Power still use a slaving system. I remember the Leader of the Sect having been such a slave as a kid, in a freezing cave system to harvest ice crystal or something like that. Most slave died in those cave, but the future Leader was able to adapt to those cave and develop ice mana, or something like that, allowing him to grow stronger, break out of the cave and being recognised as a disciple of that sect. That Leader is proud of his origin and still enforce that system, which he believe made him stronger, and is, according to him, the best way for the Sects to grow. He seems to hate the social reform of the Empire and despise the few Sects that are trying to reproduce that success. So, I believe that, other than the Empire, many of the other Great Power probably still have homeless and starving people. Or maybe I misunderstood something.

Violet

I'd joke that you'd need a god emperor to maintain a post-industrial economy with everyone in it consigned to the most dehumanizing work imaginable (service jobs), but we manage it through little more than propaganda in the modern world, so the god emperor probably just helps simplify the equation.

C_Mantis

T1 things are generally mass produced and automation is a thing. They have like construction drones and such but they aren't fully autonomous just mostly so, think the crops harvesters made for rifts. Most jobs are service jobs though

C_Mantis

They exist but are more strickly controlled usually by someone local and of the tier of the thing being done. So mostly the same as here just more paperwork on donations.

PoeticSaint

Full. Effing. Circle. That was a beautiful chapter and going in I'd thought I was going to tire of the two quickly! You have a wonderful way with creating storylines ebbed within established storylines! The lore is ever increasing and you handle it wonderfully. I can only imagine the planning you put into the story for it to come out so enthralling. Or are you secretly an immortal yourself with firsthand experience on Ascension? Have you returned to the mortal plains to bless us with this story?

Violet

I hadn't considered the possibility of a talent upgrading her die itself... Although it would be a pretty underwhelming growth talent in that it would also lower crit rate.

Tucker Glick

It becomes a 100 sided dice

Charles handgis

I hope we get some periodic check ins with these kids, as Matt and Liz’s first sponsors it would be cool

seth dauer

Every 20th attack potentially destroying gear or injurying is super debilitating, outside enemy capabilities. Maybe it'll force others into having dice rolls as well? Or maybe granting modifiers, or requiring confirmation of crit fails with another dice every 5 tiers

MissingP_rt

Welp, now I'm wondering what Eleanor's Tier 3 Talent is going to be. Will she be able to choose what gets affected by her roll of the dice, as in carry around a bunch of sticks that can break instead of her actual equipment? Or will she be able to decide for whom / what the roll will be lucky / unlucky, i.e. buff allies, debuff enemies? Or maybe even make an attack 'unfortunately lethal' for an enemy?

Bob Bryan

Hey, curiosity question. How do charity organizations work in the empire or are there no social programs?

Havokk

perhaps he was similar to Liz in that he wanted to make a name for himself without relying on the Juniper name, or perhaps he knew of the deeds by the family and being a good person wanted to separate himself from them. Plus we never did hear how the Empire heard about the rift breaks perhaps he was the one who reached out about it

Supremagorious

It would be manageable for higher tiers to cover it. However it would remove huge segments of the economy and one of the goals of the empire is encouraging people to tier up as much as possible as they always need more soldiers. Removing too much strife from peoples lives could adversely impact that goal.

Violet

Is the automation of industry effectively impossible for some setting-specific reason, or is it just banned so that the mortals have something to do when they aren't serving their primary purpose and reproducing to create more potential cultivators (if we engage in viewing things like a state, that is)?

Violet

Given that the Junipers hadn't been subject to imperial sanction yet, I don't see a reason for them to be shy about who they are, unless Darius happens to have betrayed the family to the Empire, which would be interesting, I suppose.

C_Mantis

There aren't any homeless in PoA. Basic apartments would be provided for cheap for anyone but that doesnt mean people budget well or dont splurge with other things. Also stuff happens. Layoffs and what have you. But most things for mortals are subsidized heavily (food/shelter).

Mashiara

If there was a sidestory regarding Ethan and Eleanor at some point, I would be interested in that. I do hope that during Matt and Liz's journey we'd get a line or two regarding their progression.

Cameron Kispert

It mentions that people need to fix their own problems but it seems to me basic food, water, and shelter would be something the gov/higher tiers wouldnt be averse to funding. It's non impactful to them monetarilty but a huge deal to the mortals. Additionally part of the reason the path works so well is it has such wide base to pull from, something a basic needs initiative would work to support.

Havokk

Thinking back on Darius, the other person to arrive at the playpen at the same time as Matt, I remember a line about them needing to fill out personal info and Darius being hesitant in filling in the correct info. Was it perhaps because his last name was Juniper?

OlivierA

Must have had a Tier 1 talent for unnoticeability then !

C_Mantis

Nope he was there. Just a few lines tho.

BlodWedd

I always wondered why the guy who got to the playpen with Matt (Darius) got the attention he did in that chapter. Felt like he was special. Hope we will see him again

MikeL

I’m glad that you addressed the issue of the playpens with a great explanation. I always wondered why Griff or his boss if they were there at the time never stopped the rift breaks.

OlivierA

Was Darius retconned in the Kindle release ? Couldn't remember him in the royalroad version


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