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PoA: Aster's Adventures Chapter 7

🕑 Added 2023-06-07 19:00:05 +0000 UTC

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Kevin DD

Just finished rereading Asters Adventures. I can't remember if they're official chapters or not, but I hope they are as they're fantastic and do a lot to fill out even more of Asters character.

Marcus

Was not expecting this chapter to come with an onion cutting ninja attack. I have absolutely loved these chapters. I'm a sucker for character development and have truly enjoyed what you've done with Aster in these chapters. I found myself feeling like I was holding my breathe while reading them just hoping that each on stretches on just a little bit longer. I guess it's back to regularly scheduled programming, but I know that it will be fun especially Aster interacting with Luna again.

Jonas

Thanks for the great chapter

Havokk

So if Matt and Liz decide that when they complete the path they reveal their true identities perhaps Aster could convince then to do a documentary or something of that sort for Kelly and her movie club friends to help the studio get some street cred

OfMiceAndElves

I wonder how far Fen and the gang were delving up to still get to Tier 15 on curve. Also, what's the reward for getting all the way to Tier 15 on the Path? Hopefully Fen got a sweet cash out despite having to step off.

Will Saye

i doubt Luna comments too much on her being lax during her time there, part of the reason bonds go to the university is to make sure they have separation from their humans, and create their own personality, so Luna pushing on her for wasting her time there sounds counter productive to the intent of the 10 year separation.

PoeticSaint

I can see.... rather imagine that being exactly the case!

Kirisuk3

Who the hell started making Onion ice cream... I swear I'm not crying, it's the damned ice cream!! Such a great ending to Aster's time away, you can see the growth of her character. I'm hoping we get to catch up with a few of her friends from time to time.

J W Walters

Luna will have a heart warming wee moment where shes proud of how much asters grown, and then she'll immediately launch into a million and one different ways to leverage that growth into more growth

PoeticSaint

The character growth here in this storyline was beautiful and I loved how she came into her own! I can't wait for Luna to tear into her over how "lax" she's become lol

Tristan R Mitchell

Each person had their name on/in their hats. Then they tossed them all up in the air and caught a different hat. Aster caught a jock's hat, while Cameron caught Aster's hat.

Renegade

Did Aster ever get those skills from Frederick?

John Balman

What's the deal with the names on the hats?

Gb

Didn't they watch a quil and torch movie? As I type this I remembered that was about the bandage skill. "The scribble" ah well they will make a movie about that too. It sounds like they might know about it since Kelly couldn't get rights to a quill and torch movie.

Obran

Would have been funny if one of Astor’s friends had been a Quill and Torch fanboi. While Astor has to just sigh and pull a “whatever”

J

I was surprised Quill's fight with a Tier 19 never made it into the side story; I wasn't expecting it to be a major point but thought a paragraph or two about it might pop up.

Summercat

Wait where's the kiss :P

MikeL

I hope Aster creates her show when she lived as an artist, then her friends could direct and produce it.


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