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Chapter 283

🕑 Added 2023-11-06 20:00:05 +0000 UTC

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Nicholas Grey

Have they, the materials and engineering specialists, thought to test the physical and material properties of Matt’s mana crystals? Are they particularly tough, or simply regular stone crystal sort of thing? Can they be broken or cut into pieces without dissipating? If not, the building-sized ones may not be particularly useful, if you can’t, say, “carve off a five million mana chunk” Can a given crystal be used incompletely? The five million point demonstration piece that Origami was looking at - if she wanted to use a million points, would the rest of the crystal remain? Would it shrink? And lastly - how does his stuff compare in size to the industry standard? How big is a regular artificial reusable mana crystal that will hold five million mana?

Nicholas Grey

I know it makes *sense* to replace the sword, for entirely logical reasons, but this means he wasted a Minkalla reward.

Solyom

Most of it was fitted nicely in the story, and didn't feel too out of place. When I read power armor, I think of the many shitty animes with mechas (I know it not the same thing, but that's the image that pops into my head.), and this image is just irreconcilable with a fantasy setting.

Maxine

did you completely ignore the fact that it was covered like twice that his phantom armor is going to combine with and improve the power armors defense? it isnt irrelevant it was literally a core part of the design of the armor to incorporate his buffs and armor

sambee

Is Liz’s new ability like a hive mind or is every clone different but she retains their knowledge when they get dismissed or destroyed?

Dave Kemp

No I get they are stronger. It would just be fun to read about their interaction with Matt and Liz having to lower their power to spar.

Alex

Travis and Keith are out, they should be T20 tops now. Too weak. Leah is T40+ I think, Sam is T35 (and busy with the war). They're both too strong. That leaves Erin, Alice and Daniel. I don't remember them that well. Erin has her harem, but I don't remember what she does for a living or her Tier. Alice is a crafter. I have zero clue what Daniel does, not even sure I remember his name right. Edit: Alice is T37. And a crafter, so yeah, not a great match. Thus we're down to Daniel and Erin. Poor Erin, I still feel sad thinking about how much damage growing up as the kid of two royals did to her. All the sycophants trying to suck up to her, manipulate her, marriage proposals etc. Mara and Leon learned from it and Travis and Liz grew up with less crazy. Threatening to eat everyone who tries to bethroth their kids was quite effective. They're still damaged by it. At least a bit. Liz ran away to the Path (which worked out quite well for her)

Alex

T35 only has 8x time compression I think

Alex

They owe Rusty a spar though. They promised to do it when they finished the path.

Alex

They already fought them to a tie back at T14ish. What's the point. It wouldn't be a spar, would just be bullying.

Mister Cakers

Your thinking of when she killed some of her copies and got a copy of her own skill shard. So yes, it would be her version of blood manipulation.

Dave Kemp

I want to see them spar with Liz's brothers now that they have blown past them

Haikaiko

"You can't just mutiny and take over, Luna!" "Shows what you know." "What, you have some secret plan we don't know about?" "Huh? No, mutiny is when you're on a vessel of some sort. This is more appropriately called a revolt. You clearly need more training in semantic linguistics. Which you'll get, since I already took over the entire base two seconds ago, while we were talking about your pitiful inability to tell the difference between a rift and a raft."

Haikaiko

That's actually a fair point in and of itself. Luna hates it when people take shortcut handicaps, to the point she is more anti-AI than Elon Musk. I can see the next chapter being "I see you've commissioned power armor, Matt. Tsk tsk. That settles it. We're going to spend the next two hundred years training in methods to effortlessly shut down even a Paladin's mechanized armor and turn its own strength back on the wearer. Hope you don't mind getting crushed into paste a few thousand times. You'll live. What, they didn't mention that unique weakness? Look it up with your in-suit AI then, if you don't believe me."

Paul Bade

I'd like to see an upgrade ai. With Matt being able to feed it millions of mana a second and empower it with his will I works live to see what upgrade options it could have

Charles Simon

I’m guessing it might be a book of illicit blood magic research (the dark side of it) but just a guess

Mario Morales

Prevents the Liz horcrux problem. Does that mean she can do the Naruto practice thing and abuse so many clones to get better at something faster or learn new things while asleep and other such shenanigans?

Mario Morales

I'm mixed on the armor. On one hand it does feel like it kind of downplays the cracked phantom armor and much of who he was up to this point. On the other hand, using his insane mana to power a literal war machine seems like a very logical jump. If you could, and it would increase your power and versatility by 20 times, why wouldn't you?

Mario Morales

I'm very interested in the Paladins now after this chapter. They were neat before but now, in my mind, they went from maybe some Spartans to many Master Chiefs.

StabAlloy

Iron Mana

Jonathan Campbell

If Luna doesn't wind up in charge of Group Branch through sheer frustration at seeing the inefficiencies allowed by everyone else, then that's just a missed opportunity. Especially if we get to see her have a nervous tic surface right before she breaks her composure and takes it over!

Step 1: use precious resources to upgrade staple skill (cracked phantom armor). Step 2: make step 1, as well as all the work you've done up to this point irrelevant via power armor that seemingly does everything for the user. Hopeful step 3: Luna eats Matt for ignoring everything she taught him

Adurna

Small nitpicking. Analgesia is not feeling pain. If the skill messes with exotic senses/all senses then anesthesia is more correct as anesteasia means loss of sensation. I can understand if it was due to ease of confusion with general anesthesia which also includes loss of consciousnesses.

MikeL

Liz mentions that her Blood (water) Manipulation is not as good as a real one. I remember that they got one in Minkalla. Was that based on her water version.

MikeL

8x

Andrew K

Sounds to me like if her bodies get too far apart, she has to "let go" of one (or more) to avoid tearing her spirit apart, and given tearing ones spirit apart has been established to be lethal, we can expect an inert mass of some sort to be left behind. (From a meta standpoint, this seems to be avoiding making Liz ludicrously unkillable by virtue of being able to leave extra clones scattered across known and unknown space.)

Daniel is ŁØNE

She is technically a blood-based hive mind, there is technically no clone, and they are all equal parts of her. If the initial body is destroyed it means nothing, there is no "original" You either destroy them all or she survives. So while they would technically be doing individual things with individual minds, all the information still pools back to the hive mind and thus she is always aware of their actions and thoughts even when they are based on completely different circumstances. They can't really get the idea to leave because that would require Liz to decide she wants to do so, there is no Liz 1 and Liz 2 there is only Liz. She is basically the embodiment of the phrase I am Legion.

brennon Petersen

Tftc!

Jamie Trevino

TFTC! Very nice to see Matt’s new armor, and what they’re willing to invest in ascenders, I do look forward to seeing what that Dwarf’s gift to them will be

Ryan Berends

His intent was massive and the opposite of his concept? He is a blade mage not a pure warrior. And comparing him self to queen on only the blade? Why would he do that? That’s ridiculous. So Liz should not use blood and aster should not use her ice ability’s? And what about all the training he has done over the years that limited his mana usage by Luna during the dives? When is the last time he fought Queen? Why are you trying to compare them? Have we even been reading the same series? Sounds like you don’t comprehend what you read.

Jake Kimmerly

Yeah you put what I didn't like about it into words p well.

Jake Kimmerly

"Barely keeps up with his peers" we haven't been reading the same books

Eddie

So are Liz’s clones out there making friends and creating lives disconnected from what MLA are doing on this planet? If they leave the planet without telling one of the clone does it stop existing?

Allen

Thank you for the chapter! The armor sounds and looks sick! I can't wait for the moment Liz commits to the blood Mage she is destined to become. That will be a fun payoff.

Rhys Rathbun

I'm sure this was mentioned but I don't remember. what is the temporal acceleration for the rift they're in

Ryan Romano

Uncle Manny even said he did his future sight stuff, and that he needed Matt to be in the war at 25, and that helped stifle his urge to be a bit selfish and push him to level faster

Ryan Romano

probably a century in rift time? which was like 50ish times faster in that level of rift, so maybe 6 months in real time?

Haikaiko

And the thing is, Aster is the only one power armor makes sense for. Time and again, her issue is that as a support type, she has no real oomph or survivability. Plus, convincing her would be the easiest. "Try the power armor." "Excuse me, I'm a fox. A creature of nature, not machinery. I'll never set foot inside that contraption." "It comes with an ice cream maker built in, and the fluffiest tail we could make out of T25 materials while still being indestructible." "Wouldn't hurt to give it a test ride at least. Which of these buttons makes the cute little ears twitch, again?"

Haikaiko

It's an issue of "just because we've seen it done, and it logically makes sense, doesn't mean it's a good idea." Matt's Concept is "I Am Dauntless", and we've been told that every word counts. It's not "My Equipment Is Dauntless." Changing up his set like this would be the same as if the next chapter starts with "So Matt, I know you've trained your whole life with a longsword and identify with that weapon, but our crafters agree that's not really suited for you, here's an assault rifle you can channel mana through instead, it makes more sense. "

Aaron Martinez

I thought it was the book of skill options and possible upgrade paths. She's not certain what direction to take her skill set because she's not certain about herself. The Book of choices just keeps shoving that in her face.

Kain

While I stand by my previous comment the concept art does look sick

Havokk

The sentence "She was no longer the daughter of Mara and Leon. Now, they were the mother and father of Elizabeth Torch… or whatever her final Ascender title would be. " gives me chills as while she has accomplished so much as herself its also a reminder that Leon and Mara would see nothing as a greater compliment or accomplishment than to be referred to as" Elizabeth's Parents"

Violet

That was the joke. :P

James Faulkner

The armor is everything I could’ve dreamed and sounds SO FUCKING COOL. I can’t wait for every enemy he encounters to shit themselves when this black monstrosity with glowing gold runes comes out of nowhere and kicks ass like a Gen 2 Spartan fighting toddlers lmao

Kain

Up front I will fully admit that I am biased against power armor, just never liked the ascetic, but I do have some questions mainly the ones Matt asked. Like ok those things she pointed out in answer do apply to normal people…. But not anyone in this project by her logic every member of this team should be in power armor. The only limiting factor would be personal mana generation to power the things but having Matt in close proximity solves even that hurdle. And from what I’ve read the only other one rocking a set is Stone. Edit: also applies to the Uber rich which to be fair we haven’t seen that much of but again this is the first time hearing non-corpo power suits are just straight up superior given the right resources despite the fact we have interacted with the Uber rich a fair few times, not a lot but enough to see some entitled rich shits, just seems like something that would have come up during one of the snobby rich kid segments “oh the peasant can’t even afford the superior type of armor” idk maybe I’d like it more if Matt’s talent was tied in to the reason more direly like explicitly the only reason it’s objectively superior is Matt’s insane mana through put to the point even his Concept wouldn’t allow others the same kind of advantage.

adam1

Being the worst of the 0.001% of the best still makes you very, very good.

adam1

Yeah, the paladins were described as a super elite force. I would love a side story of the opalescent paladin that was mentioned a while back as a historical badass.

Member of the Unseelie Accords

I agree with the others. I’m not reading this story for Matt the Power Armor user. I’m reading it for Matt the Blademage. A mech chapter would be cool. But like I honestly give less than 2 fucks about his power armor. It’s less his accomplishment and more all the people making his armor who none of us have met.

adam1

We've already seen power armor, cyborgs, and spaceships... this isn't really a fantasy setting as much as a space opera with some magic setting.

adam1

Creatures from rifts are always unreasonably aggressive.

Havokk

Well he is planning on creating a guild around aperology and wants to get the best crafters to see what they can do with his budget of mana. And I suspect a lot of the crafters that get to know him from his time in team zero are going to be begging him to join

Caelum

More likely, they just played AC6 and trying to slowly introduce mechs one step at a time. First step, power armor. Second step, full blown mech.

Havokk

Now Im never gonna be able to hear the song "I am iron man" again without changing it mentally to "I am Irona Mana"

William Johnson

Seeing what they're putting in to Matt's armor and how much it's projected to enhance his abilities kind of helps explain why Seasaìdh and her crew were such a pain in the butt even a tier down. Also if what they're making him is a scuffed version of the copo's paladin armor that stuff must be hard nonsense.

David Harr

Well, it is not the Talent that makes the Ascender, but the grit to finish the Path. Remember, he wouldn’t have been allowed to continue at tier 5 if he hadn’t demonstrated exceptional ability. Melinda’s team had an arguably more broken Talent, but they couldn’t hack it. It has always been the plan that they would get every resource they didn’t have on the Path once they finished. We are just seeing that now. It’s not like we haven’t known this was coming for a couple of books. It seems somewhat disingenuous to declare you are leaving in a huff now. Of course, you are free to do whatever you want, but I can’t agree with your reasoning.

Discordian23

The story has always been matt has Infinite resources. He just had to hide them because he's too weak to utilize it.

Discordian23

Because of the war, if they push too hard it'll start a true war with tier 50s and that's not something anyone really wants.

Phil

Agreed. I'm here to see what Matt, Liz, Aster, and the others can do. I'm not here for Iron Man, and It's pretty difficult to make power armor that doesn't immediately fall into the Iron Man framework.

Ok, now I’m done. The story, as it is now, has nothing more to do with the tags that it has on Royal Road, which is sad because I used to be excited about each new chapter, but with each new chapter, this excitement gets less. The fact that the story right now basically follows three people and that Matt is just riding along with his TALENT but has, even as an ascender, not much else to show for it is already annoying, but adding power armor makes it even worse, and I already filter everything I read to exclude these stories. I mean, he is an okay sword fighter, but Queen is better. He is, out of everyone on his team, the worst at forming an Intent. In his crafting, he is only throwing Mana at everything, as is basically everything else in his fighting style. It just feels like he got an lucky TALENT and everything else is just a consequence of that. That is not the story I started reading, where someone fought against all odds and still made it on his own. Not a story of one who barely keeps up with his peers even though he has all the best cards (TALENT) in his hands.

MikeL

Sounds like it was meant to be a tease. We will find out eventually. Based on context something to do with her form changes. Or she stole Light’s Codex.

Violet

Enjoy your power armor while you can, Matt. Eventually, you'll Tier-up far enough that no one can make power armor good enough for you. Guess you'll just need to develop some pretty awesome crafters to keep up with you if you wanna stay strapped... Into power armor?

M van Dongen

Confess...you like Iron Man.

Tom Riddle

I don't know/remember either - maybe something i don't remember from minkalla

Silver Beard

I keep wondering since the reveal last chapter if the real kicker has been realized. It's not what he can do now... but the fact it doubles with each tier! Kinda wondering why they aren't pushing higher for that alone.

Drendude

>It would still take some time to be fully created, years even, and he’d be returning regularly for fittings and testing, but he couldn’t wait for the end product. >The worst part about it was that it could take up to a century to be complete, and he wanted it now! These feel like two different timelines to me.

Haikaiko

"I am Mana Man."

Andrew

Completely agree. Not a fan of power armor either.

Esch

Hopefully it will turn awesome down the road but I'm not a fan of the whole "Power Armor" thing

Tommy

Fun chappy, enjoying the Newns of sci-fi and fantasy. TFTC!

Envoy

Btw I just gotta say that I'm glad we've had all these timeskips. You're not milking the story. You're not wasting chapters. You're simply following where the story leads us and I love it. It truly felt like just the right time for them to ascend. I can't wait to read of their first mission and whenever Matt finally gets revenge and slays that sect girl.

Cody Dennis

Im picturing mat as a space marine now

Shaun McDonough

Yeah I am super confused about that too... Are We meant to know what the book is about?

Azulmar

I am Iron ma...wait I'm in black with a shoulder cannon. I am War Machine!

Apiris

Can someone remind me what the book Liz keeps mentioning is?

TheFool

Iron Man, is that you?

Alex

So the AI and spaceships and stuff didn't break it for you? (I understand your feeling though, power Armour doesn't feel magical, regardless of how well it may fit in the story)

Solyom

Okay, I have to say this. I absolutely HATE the idea of a "power armor" in any kind of fantasy setting. That should be an exclusively sci-fi thing.

RedLeaf

That suit of armour is giving off serious "Iron Man" vibes. The first war mission in that gear should be epic!

mitchell kaiser

Can’t wait to see some of this gear in action!

Bunny Waffles

Power Armor is ALWAYS sexy.

777777777777

Thanks for the chapter! What was rift madness again?

Sezra_

Thanks a bunch! ʕ•ᴥ•ʔゞ゛

Ryan Berends

Thanks for the chapter!

Fucking Shracc

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Fucking Shracc

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mitchell kaiser

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