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Chapter 340

🕑 Added 2024-06-24 18:58:00 +0000 UTC

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nolan saylor

Ever planning, ever preparing. I do like the type where the longer you wait the bigger a threat they are. Calling himself a two-bit villain is nice. I wonder how true it was, as we all look back at our younger self and cringe at times. A teen needing to vent is real. Just don't become like the 'hero' the speedster mentioned. It is also nice to show that some people start strong and just fall off. I really do hope the Guilds luck comes back around. The have all the potential and methods. I think, with the Empire's Path being crippled, that the Guilds should get the next Ascender. Laying it on that the methods work. It seems reasonable that heroes are the kind to think less. Part of that is media and part of it is that a hero is more reactionary. They can only help if there is a disaster or crime. A villain must prepare. On the other hand, a villain always has options. Unless their Path creates fake disasters for heroes when villains are hidden, and I doubt that. It is an interesting topic. A fair critique of Manny. And a calm response from Allister. Edit: The Tier 50 in the Empire had gone from their capital to the edge of the Great Power in a single move. -Just reads as awkward. Why say 'the T50' instead of 'Manny' same with their/his? It is grammatically correct, is it just trying to show distance between them, Allister still a bit peeved. Admittedly annoying to be on the receiving end of a person essentially saying 'guess' but it is fun to read. Add in that Allister is smart enough and Manny wants to see how quickly people might guess the absurd. LZ and Gan Le are really rather smart, or perhaps simply open minded. Seeing a glimpse of a person's truth feels like a big deal. It lets you catch a glimpse of who they truly are that they can't hide. If Allister was an enemy it would let him plot better against Manny. -I do wonder how complicated truths are. Is it just a sentence, or is it more. What differentiates it from a Phrase? I really do wonder about those orbs. Is he powering an item, so turning the amount of excess mana he has into inertia that he stores with his Talents. Or is it not so simple, an external part of his Talent? I think a T50 planet is interesting, but then it feels more free for all. What is to stop others from creating their own kingdoms, or causing havoc? If the T50s fight they are often just forced to ascend. Is it assumed that anyone who is so high a tier is at least not stupid and uncaring? -"The cause of so many more" is right. Aww, Allister didn't comment at all on Winter Hornet. I was curious what his take would be. Perhaps he is truly the a possibility to love the chance for T50 rifts or T50s to fight (though with how the current T50s tiered up they would actually be the weakest of T50s) -Or perhaps Winter Hornet will be ascending soon and so he isn't part of the equation for the true war, just his replacement. I like the consistency that he calls it a payday. Janet's senators suck. They are cliche greedy, sleazy, and hypocritical politicians who talk the talk but don't walk the walk. -How dare she do as she said. -Honestly, this is probably the best way to make up for how easy she was to dislike. Showing her in comparison to other politicians. A low bar for her to easily clear. To the victors go the spoils... but the victory got spoiled. -That glance with Aoifie was interpreted wrong by Manny. I like when it is shown people can make mistakes. Kinda weird how the Clans are about to attack her, and she wants to foster relations. Sure it's a 'tame' war but weird. Maybe it also works as it is better to have a tame war here than some other GP challenge them to a real war. -It is funny how it almost makes sense as a way to tempt their Ascenders with a good fight. Bonus as they are trying to keep their Ascenders low tiers, which would suck for the true war. More so that with MAL tiering up it could seem like another tempting target to fight. I do like her acknowledging her flaws and checking her biases. Accepting that Manny tricked her with her own beliefs an accepting his assertion that she is overly biased. Another way she is feeling more likable and less like a conspiracy theorist. Sure her conspiracies were based on admittedly absurd luck and deliberate disinformation, but oof. To be fair, again, people irl believe even more absurd conspiracy theories. Virgil is still a despicable living being, to the shock of nobody. Framing everything around herself. Gifting the rune squad a way to better be useful. I am sad Allie and co didn't manage to save the Rune Squad. Maybe she'll steal the data on them. Not really satisfactory ending, but such is life. Yeah, very creepy vision of children. Reminds me of old school teachers from kid's real horror stories. Overly strict and uncaring, self righteous and believing themselves flawless as they beat the misbehaving. -And she leaves their cruelness and hypocrisy in the dust. Criticizing the one she is using and abusing as weak. A piece of work. I do think she is set up to be the big bad. As much as I want her to accidentally off herself I think she has a good leg up on getting her Authority. Once she gets it she may be the final boss of the series. Perhaps the initiator of the true war, or a way for the Empire to direct ire elsewhere, at the person who actually seeks Ascendancy. Maybe simply splitting the GPs in those who stop Matt and those who stop the Maniac. I do feel her research will be useful but controversial. Like all the scientists who tortured people. There are whole debates on the ethicality of using Nazi research. (It also feels oh so fitting to compare Virgil to Nazis, so there is that as well.) -forget the scientists, erase their names, but otherwise feel free to debate. -Apocalypse Redux on RR had a nice bit about this. A guy doing all sorts of terrible things to create knowledge to spread. I won't spoil anything, but it brought up the issue. Yeah, her using Minkala mechanics sounds frightening. Even if she doesn't get to an Authority, her minions are set up for the army of evil. huh, Max does do blackmail. Lol, luck goes both ways. I do enjoy Wun so far. -He was both in a Challenge rift and napping, both choices are correct. He is a lucky ascender to have improved chances at challenge rifts. Most get less satisfying fights and rewards. He was just unlucky to get so lucky this time. Probably for the best he was busy, as if the Sects had another powerhouse things would've been more hectic.

Nicholas Grey

“Forty two million mana per second was impressive– it was more than he personally made a second” Allister apparently has a talent for understatement? Matt’s current regen is approximately four *thousand* times a “standard” Tier 50’s (as per multiple statements Matt would match a Tier 50 when he hit tier 13). Was this supposed to say “more than he personally made in an hour”? The numbers would be about right, 4096 (Matt’s second) vs 3600 (Allister’s hour). If not, then the “in a second” is redundant - the one-second time frame is already established by the initial “per second”.

Alex

There may be some hope for Janet yet.

jebediah norton

Mantis if a person had 10% to mana pool and 10% to mana concentration what would that mean for their max mana pool?

Julie Smith

Lovely Rip Van Winkle trope to end the arc and book. When will it be out on Kindle? I yearn to read it there. Good job setting up the future confrontations in the 'Real War' with the tier 50 POVs. Background tension is set to be stoked. Virgil looks even more horrible than she did in her previous POVs. Aspects for all her Tier 35 soldiers? That'll be a problem that Aiden and maybe MLA will face. I was a little surprised that Allister considered double crossing Manny. Also, I'm hopeful that Janet sees the Truth, that Emmanuel is beneficent and not a Tyrant. How will that change her behavior? Will she come to Allister's and Manny's side for a Tier 50 planet? How about the Monster Kingdom? Will Aster be able to persuade them to join? How about Mara? So many questions!

James Townsend

I saw the email, where did it go D:

JM O'Hare

When?!


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