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Chapter 344

🕑 Added 2024-07-15 18:59:01 +0000 UTC

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nolan saylor

Thanks Mantis! Thanks Daedalus! Immortal fashion truly is interesting and weird. I have a friend or two who may be much more intrigued than I, but still interesting. Could Matt truly guarantee that his gravitas had nothing to do with his Domain, the guy is T45. I do appreciate that the nobles put their money where their mouth is, or themselves I guess, and go to war. I wonder what happens if they don't return. Also how well leadership in the noble planets compares and translates to the military. How did Dominus do? Speaking of Tiberius's loss to Mara. It was originally he was T45 and she was T38, it can't be easily edited, but a possibility is that it was for show. That the real stage was in the political sphere and the result played out for show. Add in that Mara was probably a Peak or Pinnacle combatant before Tiering up and it is a reasonable base. Maybe she was friends with Manny and so had that backing. Another thing that as a pair that stepped off at T22~ish our current Empire has such people joining the military for a bit as payment for the benefits of the Path. (We let you almost kill yourself weekly while we pay for that and after you almost kill yourself repeatedly for a few wars. Seems fair.) I wonder how much of Dominus is honest in his eagerness to fight an Ascender and how much is in jest. If it is flirting I do like the idea of a dragon partner for Aster as they can change their bloodline to hers without as much resulting difficulty as other bloodlines. Darn dragon cheats with the Talents always matching the affinity. I am thinking on the less pleasant nobles. How do they keep expanding their families? As in they seem incompetent so why would others select the dregs of a family as their new underlings in a new duchy, or really any new location. Do they bribe them or try to abuse their influence in other means? Again not conductive in the long run. Perhaps they tend to the newly integrated like the Kingdom of the Seven Suns, places with low standards already where they would fit in? Or is it simply a way in which society regulates itself as people need to be competent and liked or the noble house will backslide or die off? Kinda sucks that even Ascenders are forced by political pressure. Not having as much freedom as Janet claims in who gets the positions of nobility. Curious how many of these duchies were started. How many had an ascender as an ancestor and how many were instead those raised by previous rulers, either by trust, merit, nepotism, influence, or competence. I am curious as to what Margaret Thrush had as her Talent and such that her Path manager still stayed in contact to polish her potential. We never did learn, as there was never a fitting time to learn. I still find it sweet that Matt cares about Lily. With his plans, and how he will be a future Realm famous philanthropist... or possibly called anarchist- still realm famous anarchist thought. I wonder how long his Legacy on Lily will be recalled. Both parents as Dukes is interesting, separate duchies. Almost a double princess. I wonder if they will have a single heir or multiple heirs. I wonder how the board of directors became a family. That is a large group of people. I shudder at the idea of a bunch of irl board members getting into an orgy, and pity the secretary outside barring the door from eavesdroppers and interruptions. More fun world building... and maybe hinting at a future kid. A fun ending. Particularly the wealthy and powerful being fearful at the word "Charity."

Nicholas Grey

“Half of their duchies were going to be hereditary nobles and half non hereditary, to test how well the two types of inheritance balanced each other. To prevent the governance from becoming entrenched in old established powers, about a fifth of their total candidates were going to be those not related to established noble houses, but those who had gone through meritocratic methods to stand above their peers to split the groups in quarters.” Ok, I cannot figure out the math here. Half are going to be hereditary nobles, and half non hereditary (but still nobles?)? But then another 20% are going to be meritocratic (and thus not nobles?), and that somehow divides things into quarters???

Julie Smith

And Matt drops the bomb on his first invention. It's a good idea he has a decade to deploy the technology. This will show them the optimal means of doing that. The world is changing nobles. This is just the first tremor of the earthquake to come. I can't help but laugh at their consternation, knowing his talent and future inventions will be far more momentous. And he has no compunction about destroying established cartels, guilds, and corporations.

Matthew Dargis

Manny wouldn't be allowed to pay them to delay advancing and stay in a combat tier.

Kelly Bryan

I imagine Matt might take a break in the mid 40s as his development of the realm will get increasingly difficult with the lack of existing infrastructure at those tiers. He can make and delve rifts at those tiers very easily but he will be interested in expanding it greatly

David Bean

Wait, he’s going to stop advancing? I thought the partial buy out for them was so they wouldn’t stop advancing?

Andre cook

Anyone else get chap 339?

C_Mantis

@Sial28 thats a good place to mention it.

C_Mantis

Matt will be given new armor once he stops advancing. Otherwise it will be kept for future use just like the weapons and armor that he used at first.

C_Mantis

just 5k

David Bean

Thank you!

MikeL

She was just someone why was actually very friendly to Matt at their “coming out to society” party at T15.

David Bean

Can someone please remind me who Silvia Dobrescu is? Also, does anyone know if Matt got to keep his power armor?

Sial28

Thank you for the explanation. Perhaps, could you mention this in chapter 340 when Manny explained the discovery of Aura rifts to Allister.

Coorsbie

Didn’t Matt take it a step further and compress it all the way the genesis energy? I think his with his black whole intent should be able to compress his mana stones down to essence or even genesis stones eventually. Regardless, he would just need to pump a star full of mana. He could do that immediately without setting off too many alarms provided he did it in Empire Space and had Ally helping him go around so no one would be able to place him at the scene of the crime.

Erriballon

What's the word count

John Sanders

That should be the Guild logo Matt carrying Liz with one hand like a Torch

Burgismik

Was thinking another guild development could be an essence storage device. Similar to the bracelets delvers use to share essence on a delve. Excess essence that people who aren’t allowed to teir up higher goes to waste. Also also all the years that Matt Liz and Astor spent training under Luna and they weren’t able to teir up farther. All that essence could have been saved and sold.

C_Mantis

Prometheus was a consideration fo using this name as well. But yes I try to keep from directly using well known earth gods names because it implies 'earth' as a planet in POA which is something I really don't want to imply.

EmmieCurls

I wonder if Amelia Galley and Matt’s intervention on her behalf is the source of the comfortable cotton fashion. I hope so!

Trevor Mergen

Thanks!

Immutably Empty

I suspect due to their size, stars tend to be much lower tier than the planets around them. So by the time someone can survive going to rifts on the star, they are much higher tier than the associated rifts.

C_Mantis

Fixed. Missed this yesterday. ty

C_Mantis

I will say Ive taken note not to slow down too much. I dont want the story to show down so much that it feels stuck in a rut but I don't think ive leaned too far that direction but you guys will have to let me know on the next few chapters (already wrote them).

Aaron Hardin

Why would a star not have a rift? Inanimate inorganic objects have tiers, that implies that Life is not a requirement for a planet having a tier, which then implies that celestial bodies that are not planets can also have rifts.

Jacob

It's when a rift spits itself out into the real world, making a ruin.

Kelly Bryan

OMG get Drifter a growth ship! She NEEDS it.

Patrick Schuldt

What does an inverted rift do?

Adam Červený

I just hope for reaction chapter to this. I Can see Rusty be so envios of Mat punching everyone with a punch of a news. Manny and others be in shock of Matts idea od politics, Mara and Leon making new contengency plans on how not to let Mat being killed by All guilds and nobles.

CottonMod

Wasn't that the idea behind mana -> essence Matt achieved in Minkala? Stellar bodies compress mana in their cores and create essence this way. As more time passes and more mana is compressed to essence, the core eventually gets full and has to tier up. Basically, it's the same way that cultivators tier up. The process is not perfect, so some essence inevitably leaks out.

Elaine

good chappie

Austin Byrd

I think it might reference both like a pun? And regarding Prometheus, I like the potential there for puns as well due to his ‘gift to mankind’ and also relating to Torch. I think some derivation of the Prometheus pun and lighting the way could still be used for Liz’s blood org that she’s forming. Prometheus is cool! Especially the implications of how he was punished by the other gods for his gift. But going back to Titans Torch, I also like the double meaning of Titan carrying Torch in his hand🤣🤣🤣

Austin Byrd

That’s fair, I am very excited for this arc! And the honey does sound really cool - I like how he was given a gift which won’t help him too much anymore but is practically the pinnacle of value for 99.9% of people. Stuff like this is perfect to help his friends or even just bait/reward for his guild - both of which I’m excited to read about - this arc is gonna be great! I think I’m being too critical of the last two chapters, you’re still setting everything up and we’re just getting started. Thanks again Mantis - I really like your story

Tommy

Bro…. This is awesome! Edit: Love the idea of Matt figuring out how to create mana generating trees. Probably riffing off his Endless aspect or something, imbuing the crystal

Andromeda Adams

Wow! What a lovely chapter! The way Matt made the announcement was Epic! Thank you for the chapter!

Alex

Celestial bodies with essence cores shed essence into their surroundings, Tiering up everything nearby; this is why the Empire keeps a crapload of planets in the capital system, since the Capital being Tier 47 Tiers things up for free. Stars do this too, but their essence cores are absolutely gigantic relative to their Tier - within a given Tier, the only thing that canonically has a larger essence core than a star is a black hole. Because of how large a star's essence core is, they tend to be on the very low end of the Tier scale, since it takes so much essence to raise their Tier. My guess would be that Stars would shed a LOT of low Tier essence into their surroundings, so they'd have a quality-over-quantity effect on Tiering things up. If you wanted to Tier a bunch of stuff up really quickly, a star would be great, but if you wanted things to reach a high Tier a star would be useless, since I don't think a star could raise anything above its own Tier. As for Tiering up a star to get a best-of-both-worlds effect, it just isn't cost effective since people don't delve star rifts (or at least I assume they don't since they've literally never been mentioned before). At least, it isn't cost effective if you aren't taking the Mattery into account. My guess would be that once Matt goes public with his Talent and starts Tiering up the Realm he probably would aim to Tier up stars - maybe raise a few to Tier 50 to start passively upping the Tier of the whole Realm.

Anime Problem

The empire has been attempting to grow that market if Matt can figure it out and release the method the companies that manage the hive would be the only ones with the ingredients necessary to make the rifts that would change as those rifts became more common yet it would actually be a huge boost to their sales in the short term and a large boost if they invested in those rifts long term

TwoMoreYears

I like the name, makes a lot of sense for what he’s trying to accomplish. Even sounds like a charity in a lot of ways. Love the reaction to Matt’s bombshell to. One of the lines that always stood out to me was the reaction to the bandage talisman from the talk show pundits. “Drunken, sloppy, masterpiece.”

BananaInMyPants

Mantis/Beta readers have mentioned on discord that they try not to use any Earth mythology, since Earth isn't a thing in this universe.

Chioke Nelson

And I thought my suggestion was extensive lmao this is awesome!

Drew Tunison

My first thoughts were about rifts on the sun... what does tiering up stars do to the local solar system?

Lorevi Q

It's also kinda rude to take a someones gift of a unique export and use it to break into their market. Great way to never get any gifts again.

Wool

Also, that guild is going to burn mana like it’s going out of style

alexander sam

Might be a little over used, and on the nose, but Prometheus would have been a cool one word equivalent to "Titan's Torch"

Jacob

Will Matt learn how to Invert Rifts? Just imagine if Matt learns how to invert an Aura rift...

MikeL

That what I was thinking also, which is why I still like the name.

MikeL

An alternate POV for the news might be nice next chapter. Maybe by a soon to be new guild member.

C_Mantis

It has to come out in some way and Manny is already in position to take advantage of it. Also hes already told matt he can tell people with teh guild so its effectively declassified

C_Mantis

There is prob a degree of whiplash going on from going from dense battle chapters to more slice of life. I could cut down stuff to move stuff along faster but im trying to slow the story down. As for the honey its our first look at a new type of cultivation stuff and I wanted to describe it well.

Havokk

When they were talking about the buyouts Manny made it very clear that the bulk of the worlds for the buyout would come from the republic, federation and sects as they were the ones who started the war so yeah I'd be surprised if M&L didnt get some feddy worlds

Havokk

when he first discovered it the Empire was already expecting a war over L&S completing the Path and Emmanuel wanted all the time he could to prepare for it. At the time the discovery would likely have kicked off the war before the Empire was ready. Now that the war is over and they have a guaranteed time of peace from the most aggressive of the other GP's the Aura rifts can be released without sparking a new war, That and it will help the Empire prep for the true war

BookDragonling

My first thought was to use the honey to make a rift and see what happens.

NeverNaught

Random Ideas for Titan torch research, sorry if I put your idea here. I tried to read most comments and I don't think I have too much overlap.  -Skills- >Tier 8 heal: [Cast]>>>[Stasis] Think body cast. [Wrap] Ace wrap in skill form. [Balm] Maybe alchemy adjacent, requires item component. [Sooth] Spirit rejuve. Be great if matt made this one from a music concept >Utility Skills: [Rest] All asleep regen, could figure out from hibernating bloodlines. [Meditate] Mana Regen. [Raywing] Lower tier flight. [Contemplate] Will power regen. [Accreate] Will power growth. >Lost skills [Item Box/Storage] Inventory adjacent skills of different flavors literally as one could hold food without loss of taste. [Polyglot] Language, could help with enchantment runes or understanding waters -Talismans- 1. Dragonfly wing: lets user escape from rift. Matt meets Lily's playpen director and creates these to save idiots from them selves 2. Stealth: Monster can't see, smell, feel, sense you. 3. Phase: Hidden pocket to hide in but not leave rift 3. RestZone: Rest + Stealth and/or phase 4. Evac: Auto Dragonfly wing + Stasis. Upgraded Dragonfly wing talismans. Would love a Janet POV where she's both vindicated and pissed that her sanctions are circumvented. 5. Challenge: Increases the chances of rift challenge 6. Lucky Loot: Increses the possiblity of rare rift reward drop at cost of mana or another plot relative cost. 7. War arrays: Bunker Busters, Alaxander Aegis, Slow (temporal) traps. Eventually Matt is gonna cause another war and a few centuries of stockpiling would not be remiss. -Mana Types- Earth: Tectonic Terra-Gaia-Crystal Water: Abysmal Aquarius-Uranus-Ether Air: Celestial Caelus-Pontus-Arialus(sky) Fire: Primordial Pyra-Ignus-Plasma Aster- Astral Artic Tier 5 mana type rifts could be very conductive to; tiering up planets, changing planets alignment, making planets easier to move through chaotic space. Discordant: Will disruptive mana type. -Tech- Neural network: En masse hyper efficient AI for entire population. Kinda go political hive mind to maybe being like bit coin where a population rents out their processing power to researchers for quicker and easier bits. Could be a huge mana sink that doesn't pay out until a lot longer. Tri-Dimensional overlay: D&D Shadowfel and faewild. Basically an upgraded Republic In-between. Travel mana gates: For Real space crossings Fae'scape: Non-Euclidean non-Newtonian spatial folding Chaotic space harvest: I don't recall it being used for anything else other than travel and maybe booby traps of travelers. Time Dilation chamber: So, matt can trade mana for years to help his intent increase his mana concentration. -Projects- Asters story time: Aster's actress friend could have a story time to young bond series in which Titan Prometheus gives gifts to mortals at the cost of angering the gods. Use this as a way to hint at big invention releases or misdirect to fool big guilds. Talent thief's: Side project for Matt and Allie. Realspace Nexus worlds. Dryad trees. Improved Empire Net with Antena skill improved with upgrade orbs, Matt could create "the web" or "Mainframe". Living crystal mana trees that produce ambiant mana, extreme initial cost but pay for themselves after plot relative years. -Growth Items- Boats>Ships>Spaceships -Rifts- Bonds, Aura, High Aura, Endless, Challenge, Pure Aura, Tech/golem Ruins, Dream scape, Multi aperture Farm, Open war, Vacation, espionage, economic, Talent Specific/related, Genesis, Primordial, Pinnacle.

Alex

Stars can have rifts and ruins in them? By that logic any celestial body with an essence core should be able to host rifts. That opens up all kinds of new and interesting possibilities.

Clifford Solonas

unlikely that small bottle was a tier 40 mana stone,plus the mana to experiment to get the correct mana subtypes

b51015

I might be wrong, but I don’t remember the Federation offering any worlds for that

Namorat

Graft also means bribery, I think

Tetrasimplex

Maybe it just got declassified? If I remember it right one of the reasons it was hidden was because Matt had no reasonable explanation for how he could have experimented enough to create it. Also, the war is over and now they have a time of peace with most of their biggest enemies, making it moot as a casus belli.

Tommy

If your horror threshold is at 40 then some quick maths tells us that their party would be 2’500’000% greater than your horror threshold. Safely putting it in hell-loop territory! Eeeeeek Edit: proviso, I’m not any good at maths, and might be quite wrong

Tommy

Is it even a party with less than 100m? Barely a gathering! 😂

Tommy

No one: Matt: Politics? Completed it mate 😂

Austin Byrd

Agreed, the honey is interesting but the length kept pulling me out of the story. Honestly the whole chapter felt kinda off. I usually love Mantis’ world building but here I caught myself several times thinking wheres the plot. I think 90% of this chapter could have been tighter (except for the thresh part- that felt perfect in pacing, mainly because of how quickly Cato pulled over the Countess) and we should have gotten a lot more of Matt’s speech and whatever happens afterwards. Especially after last chapter. Which was also about stuff I am very interested in reading about, just like this one, but I think it also could have been tighter and a better read if the plot moved forward slightly more. Progression!! Both these chapters are his normal word counts but both are like a single scene. Its like being fed a single bite at a time which is odd because I’m used to Mantis’ chapters being more dense - unless it’s a battle happening lol

Tristan R Mitchell

While Torch was Liz's old name, it is more likely it is Torch as in lighting the way.

Sial28

I love this chapter. But, I've one remark regarding the Aura rifts: it was an imperial secret when discovered. But now, without any explanation, it's not!

John Balman

LoL the mayhem

Chioke Nelson

This is the best translation lmao

Kazith

I see it as more of a joint endeavor considering that they’re married and do research together.

MikeL

I like the name, but seems weird using Liz’s old name when she is not really involved.

Jeff Wells

Yeah, it's definitely a mistake. I was going to say Lila is retired, but that doesn't do anything to her title of Ascender, and technically Shadow and Waters are retired too, and I think Light was caught up in Shadow's buyout too, didn't he? So yeah, just a miscount.

J

The Jelly might semi-reliably recreate the bee rift. Though if that was the case, I would expect that would have already been discovered.

John

Thanks!

Alexandro Xavier Guerrero

Aster already plotting how to steal enough to prototype new ice cream flavors.

Alexandro Xavier Guerrero

One definition of graft (as a noun) is literally bribery/malfeasance/corruption.

Jonathan Robichaux

Like 4 chapters

Jonathan Robichaux

It's nice world building on how other people cultivate

Roro

Yes, that was confusing (both names referenced for same person?)

Tom

Well, then *you* go tell Lila she doesn't count as an ascender. I'm fairly sure you'll only get eaten once

Wheels42

The most important question of the chapter: How does Aster react to the idea of royal jelly ice cream?

Jairo Hernandez

Another glorious ending to a good chapter! Dear author, you have a gift.

Spencer Needler

Xarow

Yep agree. Speed can be scaled down but no reason not to be his full tier 26 speed in this context.

Wes

I wish there was more of his speech - especially around the drive for change then the bomb drop

Jinjitsu

Im not saying that it shouldnt be talked about. I just feel like a more compact version would be a better reading experience. Just like 1-3 paragraphs less.

Cteatus

A hot honey glaze for some weird high tier space salmon would be so fucking good

Aaron Hardin

To everyone who is talking about Matt using the royal jelly to make a rift, the political implications of directly attacking a top tier guild (they have an exclusive product) are substantial, and this would be much worse than the aura rift below T5, since it is directly copying an existing product of creating something different that is better than existing products. That doesn’t mean he wont due it, but given they he is on good terms with that guild, it will likely be done in cooperation with them and that guild will maintain control of any rifts like that.

Tommy

TFTC! Titan’s Torch is good 👍

Bacon Sir

I wonder what the integration process will be like for any Federation worlds they receive

BagFullOfLizards

It made sense to me as our first look at the sort of cultivation related things Matt might be able to create for lower tiers. It’s not a random aside, it’s a preview of his guild.

Mike G.

My horror threshold starts around 40 people I think (because that's about the limit for the size of an extended family gathering for my family - for strangers, maybe 20?). Yeah, definitely not my idea of fun. I *am* tempted to weep for Matt! Not so much Liz and Aster, they're probably loving it - they're much more social than he is.

Adamas Shield

'Ascenders change the realms with their fists we only need to worry about opportunities and cost, nothing directly' [The Titan that gave mortals fire/innovation] 'I would like to announce that in 10 years we will give the mortals the ways to make fire'.

JM O'Hare

Perhaps it will be brought up again later. Matt makes a rift out of it, or some such

Clifford Solonas

i really want to know what happens if matt seeds an rift with natural treasures?like that Velview royal jelly if the effect is only 1/2 as good it would still help alot of people

rockus4

I know I'm weird but I like these political and intrigue chapters arcs more than fighting.

Augustus

I think that was current ascenders with the sand dragon to high tier to fight currently.

James Faulkner

Tftc!

Havokk

Okay with that mic drop at the end Sural and Thresh should already be sending a thousand messages detailing exactly why they should move to the new Duchy. And seriously that Guild name....... Perfect

C_Mantis

Spicy honey is really good and this would be even better.

Jinjitsu

Thanks for the chapter. Was good to read but the honey section seemed oddly long and partly redundant. 14 paragraphs is huge.

Nate Hada

Shouldn’t Matt look over at Cato at tier 26 speeds? I forget what tier Cato was but I thought he was above Matt

JAofO

How long before Matt tries to use the jelly to make a Rift

C_Mantis

damn it. her name was changed last minute because it was too close to a drug's street name adn those two were spelled wrong. Fixed ty.

C_Mantis

And poor Matt needs to say high to thousands of them. Weep for him lol.

C_Mantis

fixed

yannick schwende

Great chapter. I like the matter of fact way Matt announced his discovery. Looking forward to the fallout

C_Mantis

good catch

Erriballon

Thanks so very much

Keegan Moss

You could say that speech gave the feeling that Matt was exuding an aura of change… ba dum tsss

Domy

Did Matt just create the skill Mic Drop?

T

I literally broke out in hives’s when I read that

Cteatus

I know everyone's probably real excited about making a rift with that honey/jelly, but tbh the thing i care about most is how Matt could use it in his cooking. Feels like that Folded Reflection lifeskill/Concept expansion might get a neat workout with this honey and jelly too.

Anime Problem

Using a small amount of the royal jelly and the honey to try and make a craft able version of them seems like a good start they could probably even try to use it as a rift primer.

James Skinner

TFTC! Just a small do then lol?

MikeL

And Duke Waters

Bob Bryan

Lila, light,shadow, matt,liz,aster.

RedLeaf

Thanks for the chapter!

Mike G.

Is Dominus's mom Lutatia, or Saliva? I'd prefer the former, but both seem to be used. TFTC!

Andrew C.

Haha, Matt throwing a wrench into everyone's expectations and carefully laid plans (except for Manny's of course). Love it!

Thomas Brusilovsky

The idea of a party with 100 million people at it is deeply horrifying. However, happy to see how Lily is doing!

Bunny Waffles

Nice to see Matt just dropkicking that hornet's nest with suitable aplomb!

M van Dongen

Take that effers 😈

DowagerOfVeils

"The guild would be announced as soon as the remaining guests trickled in, and this would peak interest." Pique, not peak.

MikeL

Edit “ only six Ascenders,” . Isn’t it 7?

Asattor

Thanks for the chapter 👀


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