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Chapter 326

🕑 Added 2024-04-29 18:59:01 +0000 UTC

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Nicholas Grey

“He was being trained to rule the empire”? No, he wasn’t going to take over until he was already *thousands* of years old, so spending less than 200 years on the Path wouldn’t have been a severe gap in his education. (Keeping in mind that, just as a demonstration, the child he’s having with his wife *right now* is going to have *at least* 15,000 years before Emmanuel is due to Ascend)

Sean McClain

Oh you could milk this, in addition to a sect story: Someone in the federation who joins a rebel cell to overthrow the tryanical government. A guild novella about an young hero who wants to prove themselves. A clan short story about digging too greedy and too deep. A republic story about someone in the protected areas who is starting to see the cracks in the illusion of safety like the Matrix And the finally a beast nation story about finding the truth about rifts.

John

Thanks for the chapter!

Sean Jennings

good lord don't listen to him! The Germans were pissed about us using shotguns in trench warfare and said that the use of Trench guns was inhumane. it was a type of shotgun that allowed for slamfiring it. basically a machinegun version of a shotgun in the right peoples hands,

Domy

Water animal husbandry . His fish are slightly more healthy and longer living

Coorsbie

I forget what are duke waters talents

Louis McIntyre

I could see his next phrase be "I am Eternal"

Namorat

I thought Susanne wasn't going with them on the last attack? Or did she simply not attack?

Sam

Or add a was-- But what he was more interested in WAS the information One Step Behind had given him.

Reid Thompson

I've thought this ever since Matt's intent's phrase was established as "i am dauntless", but seeing him reflect on his domain this chapter kind of affirms my opinion that his Aspect phrase might be something like "I am inevitable".

Alex

I get the feeling that Erwin gaming the Inspiration system to pull off a double Tier up is a way of creating a canonical precedent of that being a thing so that Aiden can do it in the final battle and catch everyone by surprise. It's fishy as hell that Aiden hasn't collected enough essence to Tier up yet since he's been sitting at Tier 31 since before MAL were born. I know that the gap in Tiers grows exponentially, but he's been collecting essence from Tier 35 cultivators for centuries now.

Alex

I get the distinct impression that Manny's Talents would be bloody difficult to use; they're not autonomic, so he'd have to be constantly shifting his Talents in response to his circumstances, and that's no mean feat. If I had that Talent set I would absolutely, 100% have gone for a Domain which did all the busywork of picking the best Talent set at any given moment for me; that setup would have left power on the table but I think the tradeoff would be worth it for an average schmuck like me. I think Manny's in a weird category where he's probably an Ascender level combatant, but by virtue of the fact that his Talents would take so long to master he wouldn't be able to complete the Path in time; I assume Hastor's in the same category where he's definitely Ascender class, but didn't reach Tier 25 in 200 years, though I'd probably put Hastor in the same group as Aiden, Agatha, and the other proper freaks of nature.

Alex

In the Team Zero google sheet it says that the additional requirement to form an Aspect is a 'Truth'. It's unclear exactly what that means, but in my mind it would be something like an inspiration that sticks with you as opposed to fading away after the moment of enlightenment. I could see Matt's Truth being something relating to the fact he can produce craploads of mana, and also consume craploads of mana, making him the beginning and the end of mana. I could see his Domain developing in a direction that revolves around 'acceleration': he could envision his mana expenditure as a gradient between an extreme high point of mana generation (white hole) to an extreme low point of mana consumption (black hole) to create a sort of feedback loop that accelerates the rate at which he produces mana to an incredible degree.

Patrick Brennan

The disappointment when he found out about Duke Waters talents

C_Mantis

I 100% added it to the chapter the moment I saw it. It was perfect.

C_Mantis

I like the name lol.

C_Mantis

Also remember that Manny cant take peoples talents unless they are 5 tiers below them without them allowing it. Also most Talents aren't that good and still take training to use. His Talent works best when he can cherry pick out of the entire Empire with a 'spy' network identifying the most likely best Talents. Doesnt mean his Talent isnt strong but its one that gets magnitudes stronger with time and resources which are both lacking on The Path.

the oldest dream

i mean the immage is probably a blackhole fueling a whitehole and then the reverse in a infinite cicle... maybe this time he will begin with an immage and not leave it for last like he did with his intent

the oldest dream

i was thinking more in line of infinity, like i am infinite or infinity with the immage of the blackhole "fueling" the whitehole and the whitehole "fueling" the blackhole in a infinite loop.

Patrick Brennan

I read this chapter and was like, time to re-read book 1 again and kill more time until the next chapter comes out on Friday

Patrick Brennan

Remember, it takes a special type of crazy to become an ascender. You're correct, Manny was always meant to rule, and ascenders are notorious for being terrible rulers. In previous chapters he stated he knew his place in the universe so I don't think it was an Intent problem. It's not that he was not strong enough, but was he willing to go into a rift 4 tiers above his own on one leg with no mana? Was he willing to risk his life for that extra lunge when everyone else should retreat? That's what separates them from all the others. They live to fight and grow stronger and their domains tend to reflect that

Domy

I found the fact that the emperor didn’t complete the path very interesting. I suppose it could be argued that because he was being trained to rule the empire that from a practical standpoint he would not have enough time to get the important political training and complete the path. Or he had issues with getting an intent. It might even be that he would be considered too powerful if he was an ascender and tier50 so he was forced off the path. Not sure if he mentioned why he didn’t finish but it might be a good comparison between the skills of the current ascenders and the higher tier leaders.

Pararably

If you ever thought to write a spinoff I think a young cultivator who wanted to change the sects for the better would be a great story with tons of potential. You could call it The Paths of Cultivation lol

HT

Does the following sentence make more sense without the “what”: “But what he was more interested in the information One Step Behind had given him”

Trevor Mergen

Thanks!

Apep

I fully hope that he’ll tier up from the collected essence and use an inspiration to form his authority and tier up again.

austin kutz

If Matt ever figured out how to make genesis energy, that's the kind of secret he wouldn't be able to ever tell anyone about unless he decides that he never wants to ascend. If he can produce endless genesis energy and anyone who knows about it ascends, he runs the risk of being captured by tier 75+ beings the moment he ascends

austin kutz

I mean, that's what's being setup. If he manages to fuse his concept and intent it'll probably be something super weird, like some Tai chi shit that we don't actually have a standard understanding of. The fusion of a black hole and a white hole should logically be nothing but conceptually you could probably twist it into the big bang, or even a universal concept (as in, relating to a universe in principle but not a singular universe specifically) It might even kind of make sense to visualize himself as some sort of creation level God, constantly creating and destroy to make the world anew. Oroboros doesn't really work because it's really heavy on snake imagery but cycles might be going in the right direction. He's got "I am endless" with a white hole and "I am dauntless" with a black hole, and I suppose the combination of endless and dauntless would be enduring, though that doesn't sound quite dramatic enough.

Spicyice101

I’m also hoping we might get it soon, what with the year or so break he can dedicate to it.

Matthew Church

IIRC Mantis stole that from the comments section a few chapters back. And it made me soooooooo happy to read it.

Coorsbie

Could make it work with her winter court Minkalla boon.

Arden Burrell

I love this chapter. I'm really hoping Matt has a breakthrough in his apsect/intent and it leaves the HA even more confused about his talent.

Bob Bryan

Yep, exactly how it went down. Was a mistranslation between German and English where they thought shotguns were a specific type of soldier/marine.

SodaBoBomb

Did the Germans ever try and say that shotguns should be classified as supply soldier instead of combat soldiers? I didn't even realize shotguns were considered soldiers tbh.

Coorsbie

Or close the loop like minkala what the black hole pulls in the white hole modifies and puts out

Coorsbie

Or he could become a mini Mikala. Pulling in mana and essence, putting out genesis energy to power his skills, being able to create areas in his domain based on the flavors of his concept got from Minkala floors, etc… but less limited because he is a person not an artifact. Even more broken long term, the ability to create and tier up with genesis type energy that he himself produces.

soren jensen

I don’t know if the final blood fire blend is set, but to me it feels like what it needs is Air. The Fan of Flames, the Fuel carried by Blood, the Breath of Life. It’s already has order and creation with blood. it already has chaos and energy with fire. It needs motion and purpose. My two cents anyways. Great chapter!

Douglas Lilley

Doesn’t matter how strong Matt gets. It’s still a thrill to read about him working on getting stronger

Jason Hardman

TYFTC. Couple of typos: "including one with a high enough security clearing that Matt could speak truly freely with her," -> clearing likely should be clearance. "Eventually, their discussion turned to work" -> there's a break in the middle of 'their' splitting the paragraph. Edit, another took me a moment to track back down: "The moment he got back, he was promptly kidnapped, and the two of them absconded deep onto the rift to spend some alone time together." -> that 'onto' should be 'into' I believe.

da Finnci

Thanks for the chapter! Have you ever considered using footnotes? Aster telling Matt about "Virgil, the Federation Tier 50" is clearly a reminder for the readers, but in-story Matt obviously knows the leaders of the other GPs and the context was already given in this paragraph. I think it's a challenge with the characters being centuries old with perfect memory now. They know much more about the world than the readers, so that it becomes ever more difficult to include exposition without breaking immersion. Maybe footnotes could be helpful

Aaron Hardin

I can see creation and destruction and beginning and end (Everything starts from the white hole a la big bang, and everything ends in a black hole). I don't think he can pull off both creation and destruction and beginning and the end together, he would have to pick one, but one way to allow using both white and black holes while having still having the aspect add new things may be something around all creation has a beginning and an end, only Matt is eternal, or something like that.

C_Mantis

fixed

Tom

Not sure if this is a typo but “half-step between their Concept and Domain. It wasn’t a unique stage of a domain,” should the first Domain be Intent?

hachetnif

I wish we could get a actual rundown of what is life like in each great power because all governments have flaws And each Great powers only as good as the leader of it. For instance the federation kinda sounds like The worst Great power to live in because of their leader. And I'm sure back when that emperor of the empire was corrupt it was either just as bad as the federation or worse in the empire.

Isley

good chappie

Eric Alex

I don’t think he’s even close though. It requires 4 parts, phrase, image, anchor, and truth, and he doesn’t even have 1 formed. I don’t think it’s the type of advancement that comes from a burst of inspiration, as cool as that would be of an upgrade

Tener

I wonder what trick is Aiden cooking. Perhaps he intends to fully realize his pro-skill which will earn him an inspiration, thus fully healing and giving him a leg up on the competition?

hachetnif

Great chapter I wanted more talk about Matts domain and domains in general and it's cool that he could get a whole another new ability from combining or synergizing his opposite concept and intent.

Baconater

Man, I love this series.

James Faulkner

I keep getting blueballed with Matt almost getting his Aspect! Ouroboros sounds like a potentially insane upgrade

MinE

I'm hoping he finds a way to make Genesis energy just as another realm breaking secret. The Forge's core was basically a black hole and white hole superimposed on each other with how it pulled in mana and essence and shot out Genesis energy.

Ryan Romano

So how I read it was they all fought, but they all slowly tapped out and stayed at the base as their willpower decreased and they dropped off prisoners, until only the ascenders were still going out to capture people, I just thought that Susanne, when she tapped out, stayed behind as well, but her not fighting but refusing to stay behind fits with her personality

MinE

That actually makes sense.

Danzafan37

I am the beginning and the end, the creator and the destroyer, all comes from me and all comes back to me in the end.

Sean McClain

I wonder if Matt combines his concept and intent to create small wormholes so he can teleport but in real space so it's hard to impossible to block or lock down. Alternative he could become a wellspring of willpower as his aspect. Both would be cool.

C_Mantis

fixed ty

Danzafan37

And whatever comes at T100+

Danzafan37

I got the impression she fought but not the last part of the battle? Did none of the non ascenders actually fight in the blitzkrieg? And is there a good pun name for the operation? For some reason Snap, Crackle, and Pop feels like a base for a joke but in don't think rice crispies are in universe...

C_Mantis

It was more like "Throw shit at the wall to see if anythign sticks" moreso then a solid argument with facts and laws backing her up.

Evan EJ

"pulled a fluffy cloud of her spatial ring" should be "pulled a fluffy cloud out of her spatial ring" I think 'out' is missing.

Sean Jennings

Lol, I hadn't connected those two until I saw your comment.

Danzafan37

I'd maybe put a mention of fire blood mana earlier as I wasn't 100% sure what they were discussing. Also, we need a brief view of an Allie prank, maybe pantsing Light while he was having a discussion with the goofy rift researcher (starts with an E) and neither even notice for 5 minutes...

Notanautomaton

I wonder what Virgil's actual argument was. She's evil but competent, so it doesn't seem like she'd say something that would have no chance of success like "support talents can't fight in wars." That sounds like something the Feddie caste system would have, not something that would be part of the actual Laws of War.

Bob Bryan

I think space is close but eternity sounds more right. Black hole destroys and white hole creates. Endlessly, dauntlessly moving forward. That or matt is going to meet truth and become an alchemist. One or the other.

Keegan Moss

Would buy a very “dad joke” style shirt of the shadow of your former self scene

Robin Richards

Domain is functionally a collective noun for the Concept, Intent, Aspect and Authority

C_Mantis

Domain being the term for a Concept, Intent, and so on. Aiden made hsi Aspect at t22 or t23. Don't remember off the top of my head but it was before he even completed the path.

Robin Richards

or he can try using the fact that Eternal Black holes and white holes are time reversed versions of each other. Not sure how that affects his powers though.

C_Mantis

She didnt fight but was in the ship.

C_Mantis

fixed ty

Ryan Romano

I thought Susanne wasn't with them for the final mission?

mitchell kaiser

Great chapter! When did Aiden form his Domain? I’m wondering if Matt is close or would that be crazy?

Jana

Congratulating their enemies is the first nice thing i heard about the Sects.

dakota downey

Pretty sure this is a small error She wasn’t even eating slowly, bite by bite, instead of scarfing her food down like she normally did.(shouldn't the wasn't be was)

RedLeaf

Thanks for the chapter. Can't wait to see how Matt makes his concept and intent "play nice".

adam1

So, I think Matt is missing the forest for the trees in his Power strategizing. I think he needs to look at embodying space or a galaxy or something, with the idea that both white and black holes have their place in existence.

C_Mantis

good catch

Tommy

“She wasn’t even eating slowly, bite by bite, instead of scarfing her food down like she normally did.” -> This sentence contradicts itself? I think it should be “she was even eating slowly”

Bob Bryan

So basically the complaints about Allie are similar to the Germans complaining about shotguns during ww2 then.

NeverNaught

First, cant wait till the citidel comes under siege and matt turns into the duracell bunny for all those tier 35's.


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