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Chapter 336

🕑 Added 2024-06-10 18:59:01 +0000 UTC

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Nicholas Grey

Ok, I was re-reading old chapter and found the following: (chapter 306): Ascender Light has a controlling interest in a premium tea operation, for example. Tea. He sells tea 😂

nolan saylor

Manny really does have the GPs playing like marionettes. Not even using the future sight. At least part of that is that he is holding cards none of the others suspect. -It's hard to expect the opponent has a card that beats an ace. It should be impossible. I wonder how people like Liz's brother and his husband would react to their job not being allowed for 7000 years, no finding new planets. Or at least no high tier ones. I have to assume they can't even search as otherwise they might just place a beacon on the T20 planet and thus expand massively after the period. -Maybe they offer all found planets to the Guilds, for a price. Allowing their ally to expand -Misunderstood. They can only get the high tier planets. And any low tier planets are probably not worth a beacon. Maybe worth a quick shove towards the Guilds. Or perhaps bringing a Guild person with them to claim it... though that is probably agains the spirit enough it might cause issues. I doubt it is forbidden though, so that just means more help for their ally, cementing the alliance. I like that the theory the Federation will soon stop existing is a theory by Manny as well as me. My favorite Janet showing, anyone who insults Virgil can't be all bad. And her heart is in the right place. Everyone hates Virgil. -I wonder if even Winter Hornet likes the powerhouses she has made. Stopping the path really is a bit like letting someone build a dam, funnel more rivers toward the dam, and then not allow water to go through it. Something is gonna give. Maybe just loads more people entering guilds. -Or less scrupulous groups in the 'abusive worlds.' I like the wisdom that those after him may seek for the Empire to become Ascendant. Manny believes that conflict drives progress (or competition drives innovation, as he says). Stagnation leads to more stagnation. -I wonder if there was a GP that went away not due to strength but due to being so weak/stagnant that it was consumed as any minor kingdom would be. Perhaps split up as the size would at least be large enough it might make the GP too powerful for their neighbors. Manny doesn't even have to try to play them. They are helping Matt keep tiering up without Manny trying. I sorta feel it is dumb to give away the Dragon blood, but that is what happens when you're the loser. Although he then gets similarly rare ingredients... well, maybe not as valuable but still rare. If nobody traded away rare stuff nobody would give rare stuff. What would even be the point of winning if you couldn't get good terms. Ooh... I assume Manny is getting a revelatory mind gem for Melinda, to help her get her Intent. She might be able to heal any damage from a failure and an early success would be epic. Last we saw her she was T15, a lower tier than when Aiden got his Intent. Yeah, the thought of Virgil with access to an Authority is enough to put anyone on edge. -That is a final boss battle right there. Can't say I'm sad the Feds are being forced to war. It really is funny that they inflict it on themselves. I recall the bit from the rune squads how everyone declares war because they are jealous of their strength.... no. They are eager for their weakness. More than that though the Feds are douches, nobody likes them.

Nicholas Grey

Matt has his guild, Liz has her Bloodline corporation, Aster has her budding ice cream empire. I believe Aiden has a… courier company? Aqueduct, I think it was called? But did we ever learn what Zack and Allie are doing for business?

Nicholas Grey

“You know Empire traditions regarding this sort of thing, are you trying to flaunt them?” Flaunt (“show off as a point of pride or superiority”)-> flout (“Of laws or regulations, to disregard in an egregious and disrespectful manner”)

Abriel Blauer

In PoA Universe, everything runs on Mana. It was said over and over that the Empire was running at a Mana deficit. All the Social Programs, like housing and food for the less favored are paid directly by the Emperor itself from his delve. It's like that since Agatha, Manny's Granny, took over. The nobility refusing to pay for her reforms and blocking all attribution of taxes. Leon and Mara also mentioned often that pretty much all profits from their delve goes to supporting their Kingdoms. Hell, even Aster, when she was treasurer during her time at the Bond Academy, used her own personal fund to cover for the Clubs budget. What C. Mantis means is that, in the Empire, the vast majority consume more mana and resources than they produces. It is because of a few elites that provide for the difference that the Empire can keep running and growing. Remember that this is the Universe of PoA, not our world

Julie Smith

On my second read I found this: "The average individual, of any Tier, consumed more than they produced. It was the few outstanding individuals who created the infrastructure the Empire needed, who fought and won its wars, who tethered new planets to the growing web, and contributed the most in taxes, perpetuating the enormous machine which was Emmanuel’s empire." Economically speaking, I think that is false. In most economies individuals of all skills produce more for society than they consume. It doesn't have to be edited, if you sincerely feel that way, but I think it's factually false.

Julie Smith

Ah, Manny is like the used car dealer who moans about how he's not making any money on the car he just sold you for twice the price he bought it. Very clever negotiations where he hid his real goals, sold them his fake goals, and achieved his purpose. Further, it's hilarious they have no idea MAL are more dangerous than Light and Shadow.

C_Mantis

Between here an RR? Not a ton. usually only spelling mistakes. Edits for the books can be larger but never change the overall flow fo the story.

Ellariayn

Side question: Hey Mantis - how much editing do you do between posting (either here or RR) and publishing?

Trevor Mergen

Thanks!


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