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Chapter 359

🕑 Added 2024-09-09 18:59:00 +0000 UTC

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KnightRider007

… to me, she doesn’t seem the ‘type’ to get inspirations. She’s the “practise one kick ten MILLION times, and then practise the next kick ten million times too” sort of person. She’s not out there excited and exploring, she’s the sort who attains the peak of power by grind and polish - basics, basics, basics.

Julie Smith

We get exposed to some Sect culture and the latest aperology developments. We also get a rough time check: it's less than the 10 year time limit to deliver the aura rifts. I'm a little frustrated not to get a Soerilia update, but that's the plot thread I want. It'll be cool to get some rift delving. What level rift is this? I heard a level 30 planet, but not what the rift was.

Danzafan37

Uhh, find me a single good story of just fighting all the time. This is a story about people... Maybe you need to touch grass for a bit...

James Evans

Dude!!! You are leaving right when they are able to show all the upgrades they have done and progress. We only saw Liz's new bloodline for like 1/3 of the chapter and do you know how long it has been since they went into a rift? Last full one described was the space one when they were 20..something.

Jason Hardman

Fair enough, didn't remember that.

Alex

@Jason Hardman, the idea of a big bang is a known quantity in-universe; Aster's mind over matter trial revolved around her throwing her will against a Minkalla's representation of a big bang, since the cycle of cosmic renewal via the big bang is anathema to her concept of an eternal frozen end.

Trevor Mergen

Thanks!

Jason Hardman

Interesting idea, although not sure if we can assume that that is how their universe works, although it's possible they have big bang events. I note there's been some suggestion that the world's they visit aren't necessarily in the same universes.

Alex

I had an idea at one point that Matt's Aspect would be something along the lines of the big bang, so something like: Phrase: I am inevitable. Image: The big bang. Anchor: ??? (I literally have no idea what would work here). Truth: I am the beginning and the end. Then while his Domain is in white hole mode it would be the big bang running forward, and when his Domain is in black hole mode it would be the big bang running backwards - I honestly discarded the idea because it seems unreasonable ambitious for an Aspect, but I feel like the connection to space he's established kind of supports it.

NOpe Nope

Sorry, didn't want to bother you into making edits, just thought it was a bit weird. Also esl, so that might not help. Love your story :)

ByLAWphoto

I didn't remember the previous ice cream scene. Check out chapter 329 for why this is funny.

C_Mantis

If you want a refund I'm more than happy to provide. As to try and answer your comment. The story needs to grow and do other things. if it just does the same thing over and over it will have grown stale long ago.

Logrus

I 100% ship Aster and Gan Le. They're too perfect.

MinE

Matt, Aster, and Liz probably wouldn't have been able to complete the path on their own, so its more luck than anything. Matt is the only one I think who would be likely to solo complete the Path.

Tommy

Traditionally, Yorkshire pudding should only be served with roast beef. Other than that, carrots, Brussels sprouts etc all fair game. Cauliflower cheese is a great addition too. Generally we have roast potatoes rather than mashed. Source: I am English

Tommy

He will bend reality to his will!

DasGoat622

See is certainly not an Ascender, she lacks the drive to do the impossible. I don’t think that is the debate. My argument stems from her relationship to both sets of Ascenders. She good friends/former teammates of MLA and is supposedly dating Zach. I also think she rounds out the party nicely as she provides an off tank so they have two complete groups. Not that Light and Shadow need the help. I just think it could have been used to get her in the mix.

Andromeda Adams

There are those Jellybeans (beanbozzled I think is what they are called) that give you a chance of getting nasty flavors. Was you influenced by that?

Andromeda Adams

Tyftc!! Hope you feel better soon!

Andromeda Adams

I was thinking the same thing, and can’t wait to see where that goes!

Jeff Wells

I disagree. I like her, but she's clearly a step below the Ascenders in power. MLA cleared the Path with time to spare; Suzanne failed despite giving her absolute all. It's possible she's near the top of peak elite, but it could also just be good matchups so far too. I do expect her to become Ascender-level under Lila's tutelage, much like a Yun Me, but she likely isn't there yet.

ByLAWphoto

I remember Luna telling Matt she could nap in between words when they spoke because of the tier difference. But didn't Matt recently make a mental note how long the reset was? Seems to me, he kinda whined like a kid 2 minutes before recess.

da Finnci

i feel bad for Queen, all the other kids and her bf are in the cool kids club now lol

Mario Reiman

:) you need some legendary levels of stoicism to put up with asters crap. But yeah I also root for their ship.

Mario Reiman

The side character stories are really gripping at the moment though. The main characters are currently at such a domineering position that unless they dominate their opponents in combat it would feel like a very jarring nerf hammer at their face. Like the next real challenge would come once they level up to be able to combat "on the last line" squad. Until to that time (thousand or two thousand years?) its way more entertaining to see how the individual storylines of the side characters are going (for example Soerilia power plays, new cultivators from Soerilia, Empirial power plays related to titan, maybe the story lines from other pathers or other great powers). I guess there is a chance that reading these chapters right now, when you need to wait for a next chapter for half a week might suck a bit. For me I had a similar feel for most of the Minkalla chapters, most of it felt like a crap filler chapters that I skipped. But later on, I went back and read it in one go and it was a great world building ark.

Elaine

good chappie

C Smith

My opinion I'm sure many disagree. I hated the previous chapter with the whole spy, missions, bla bla stories. I'm sorry but acenders would be hammers. Why were they training to be half baked agents?? The older asenders are hammers, they do what they want they are fun and are adventrous. Matt Aster Liz are now boring aristocrats who make ice cream.... I was so stoked for Matt to get back into aperologie. He did and I'm board. Aura, trains.... boaring. He has finally got massive mana and he's doing public service. The best part about his aperology was the loot growth items stuff that helps them grow. None of this is exciting. I agree public works are a good thing but it's also boring to read about in a fantasy adventure story. I loved everything in this story but since like Aster went to the school it's been dull. The war was pretty good. Besides that this tory has fallen off. Anyway. I'm dropping off. I hope you get back to what made this story awesome because it really was.

Lin Ming

First time being completely caught up! I love your story C. Mantis! Keep up the great work!

C Smith

Just read it and still way to much fluf. It's just extra words. Idk why authors think a lot of esoteric descriptions adds anything. A good description with small amounts of fluf usually seems best. Unless your a literary genius.

austin kutz

For the qualifications for something to be an inspiration I think it has more to do with knowledge given to a person or learned through normal means vs knowledge that comes from oneself, whether through an experiment or realization (like an epiphany or enlightenment). A person at a higher tier is simply more likely to have heard information in passing about more subjects and therefore have fewer opportunities for inspiration. That may be why so much information is hidden from mortals in the empire, especially the pathers.

Matt Brown

Tftc! Hope you’re feeling better

Alex

@austin kutz I don't think there's any way a Tier 35 could save up 15 inspirations. There seems to be two distinct varieties of 'delaying an inspiration' - there's one version where a person who starts an inspiration can hold it off for a while like we see Erwin doing the war arc. This method of delaying an inspiration takes actual effort, and it seems like the effort required to delay the inspiration increases over time. We can safely say there's no way that Yun Me is doing this. That leaves the second variety of delaying an inspiration, which basically seems like someone pushing themselves to the cusp of an epiphany, then holding that train of thought for later so that they can have their inspiration when they're ready - this seems to be what Hastor and Emilia Galley did when they delayed their inspirations. Yun Me definitely could, and probably is doing this, but I don't think it could get her to Tier 50 for a very simple reason - a revelation that qualifies a person to have an inspiration at a lower Tier is not necessarily sufficient for an inspiration at a higher Tier: we know this is true because Zack says in the tournament arc that Quill's bandage rune "should have qualified for an inspiration at such a low Tier" showing there's a minimum 'quality' requirement for an epiphany that increases with Tier for someone to have an inspiration. I don't think that it's physically possible for a Tier 35 mind to touch on something so profound that it would cause a Tier 49 to have an inspiration, while still being possible for that Tier 35 to control that epiphany and hold it off for later.

eriah cat

The fur isn't patterned, the tunnels make a pattern with the roots. There is a lot going on with that sentence though. The scene could have been more comfortably drawn out with a few more words.

Austin Gillespie

I don’t normally say it on every chapter (and I haven’t even read it yet), but thank you for the chapter! Just finished a long day working outside in high heat and smoke from nearby fires and this is exactly what I needed to wind down while dinner cooks. Always excited to see what MLA are up to and I’ve been loving this arc

austin kutz

She might be saving them up. It's been implied that Immortals can delay their inspirations. The leather crafter that Matt invested in did it, and so did Sword Saint Hastor. If they can delay their inspirations, Yun Me definitely can. She'll probably inspire herself directly to tier 50 when the sects eventually fall

DasGoat622

Yeah I think she is somewhere between Ascender and peak elite. And give. Her relationship to the group I feel like an exception could have been made. It’s not like they are gonna leave her behind level wise, unless she wants that which I don’t see happening. Now they just have to catch her up afterwards.

MinE

She is dating an Ascender and she is basically one in combat power.

Derze

great chapter , thanks

C_Mantis

No AI used. One of my betas fluffed it up so it might not be all my voice but not AI. Made some eidts let me know if that helps.

Jason Hardman

I'm very curious about where Matt's ability to sense Allie's spacial manipulation will go. Could this be the beginning of a new evolution in his powers, what with his concept and domain (if those were the correct terms) being tied up with gravity, spacetime, energy and mass.

CringeWorthyStudios

Same, definitely same. They’re strangely cute together.

Jason Hatter

It certainly feels that way

NOpe Nope

Is it just me or did you use AI for garden description? I don't quite like it, and too many occurence of "curated" as well as weird focus, such as intricate pattern of mice fur coat. I don't think i care much, but just a bit weird to read as in that's definetely the part of the chapter where my attention drop and i want to skip/not read/disconnect. Thx for chapter :)

John Balman

TFTC

C_Mantis

Correct Roast is just a type of cooking a meat. Thats why I didn't specify the type of meat cause it doesnt matter to the meal.

Cteatus

I mean a roast is a style of cooking so could theoretically refer to any meat. The British specifically have the Sunday Roast which can be with a pretty wide variety of meats, but traditionally comes with the same sides (Yorkshire Pudding, Mashed potatoes, a sauce, and maybe a veg). I would assume this is the vibe of the meal that Matt's making? That being Mantis what do they call Yorkshire Pudding here given that Yorkshire doesn't exist.

Xarow

Thank you for the chapter

Tristan R Mitchell

Nah, this is a gathering for Ascenders. The only reason Mr. Durability was there is because he lives there.

CallMeTee

Wait is that like a regional thing or something? I've never heard that used as an expression ever lol

C_Mantis

Roast is roast. Usually beef but Roast is Roast!

CallMeTee

A side of roast *what* though?

C_Mantis

Yun Me is a beast thats for sure.

C_Mantis

HP seems to have come up with the OG idea but its a thing anyone can buy so I dont mind using it as a reference.

Abriel Blauer

Not sure I should say this But the surprise ice cream flavor and the allusion of replacing hard candy do remind me of Harry Potter

DasGoat622

Too bad Susanne couldn’t come. Feels like she should be there.

Havokk

and its rift delving time again YES............. and the combo of MLA and L&S would make a great diving team this should be fun and I hope they do a lot of rifts together

Alex

The fact that Yun Me's been operating as an Ascender-class combatant for a million years is insane to me - honestly I don't think any Ascender could ever manage that. If we imagine a hypothetical scenario where an Ascender decided that they wanted to devote their eternity to fighting in the political wars and never advance past Tier 35, I don't think they could do it. By virtue of the level they were operating at, they would inevitably have an Inspiration and Tier out of the war Tiers. Operating at an Ascender's level without having an accidental inspiration for a MILLION YEARS is one of the most impressive achievements that's been shown in the entire story in my opinion.

austin kutz

I'm still shipping Aster and Gan Le in my head. If they aren't married by then I bet Aster will kidnap Gan Le to make him her house husband by her ascension

Ben Heggem

Ah perfect thank you

C_Mantis

Correct. 15 min is a hard rule. And remember higher Tiers can shift their perception so that can feel like a decade or a second so its not too bad if they dont want it to be. Also remember that the cycle timer only starts on an instance being created so higher Tier will rarely deal with it because the rifts just cant handle being delved back to back like that.

C_Mantis

Sect Ascender. Nightmare woman. Mother of the empowerment twins.

C_Mantis

editting kerfuffle. Fixed

Ben Heggem

Which one is sien again?

Eric Alex

Or just like something else is missing introducing the kitchen

Eric Alex

“She responded with a considering hum, but otherwise kept to her mountaintop kata. It was similar enough to what he was used to that he had no problem settling in, even if he had to pull a few items out of their house to fill the gaps of what he needed. Thankfully, the kitchen was fully stocked with the best of ingredients, which let Matt go wild. As he stepped inside, a pair of Tier 30s dressed in servant’s garb appeared from nowhere in particular and offered him help. Matt declined the help, and they returned to the scenery.” Are the second and third paragraph supposed to be swapped? It feels like the second paragraph is describing the kitchen that he goes to in the third paragraph

Kain

Question so that 15 minuet per rift closing is a hard time right? So wouldn’t that make it unbearably slow for higher tier people whose relative experience is so much faster than mortals. Like imagine a tier 40 waiting 15 whole ass minutes for a rift to cycle wouldn’t that be subjective years for them unless they slowed down to mortal speed which is its own pain in the ass.

Cteatus

Oooh rift delving in the sects let's go!

noah radencic

Tftc

nolan saylor

Thanks Mantis! (And Daedalus) Another reason it is easier to test on low tier rifts, specifically the testing to isolate parts of the inner rift, is that the large rifts are much more varied from instance to instance. I do wonder how they will keep up with the expenditure when Matt isn't around restocking the mana. I like the logic for losing water to rift dumping. - the bit about the treatment process is also reasonable. -What sort of rift has clean water as a base? A larger question as rifts grow larger and more unique instance to instance. Maybe a city rift? Would a city rift have spatial expansion locations that could be pulled out? I feel like maybe but it would cheat as to the how, partially for cost and partially to not allow the delver to collapse the inside to kill the monsters. Allie being late feels like deliberate comedy on her part. Of note this may be the first time we learn of Allie's domain, and of course it is space. (I may have forgotten some previous mention.) Allie wanting tease DW about his Domain is on brand. I admit, it sounds like a nice zen garden. It is not trying to be nature and thus is peaceful instead of feeling like a mockery. -I wonder if it can be a massive formation? I have read of various plants forming formations, and there were a few that were more involved with many species supporting the formation, but could mice dig one? I guess Doctor who technically had one involving planets, and I think I've seen larger thoughts as well. -The answer was yes, it is a giant formation. -It is interesting to have humans as part of the cogs and not as the maintenance. Zack greying his hair... maybe tired of being compared to 'the Ancient One' and is now going for Dr. Strange? wait, if this is Yun Me's house... will we see Gan Le again?!!! -Is the picture on the discord from Aster trying out the Sect experience... maybe with Gan Le. Maybe she took his criticisms to heart and is working to make her inner world nicer. Ah, it is extra evil if it goes from delightful to disgust. Bringing you higher into enjoying it but only to have a larger height to drop you from. Aster really did get the prank ice creams, and Allie did help. The best way for Gan Le to enter the group. -I hope he wasn't informed and is thus terrified upon realizing who is surrounding him. -Perfect. Gan Le can eat Aster's ice cream without issue, he is obviously superior to Yun Me. (and a fun dating option for Aster.) Oh, that's an interesting thought, that Yun Me hit Gan Le perfectly hard enough to have his impact crater as a part of the formation. I do like the idea. -I want a formation ascender who uses their opponents as ink or canvas for their formations. Though that sounds a bit morbid actually. Maybe they are from the Sects or Monster Collective. I am not sure Gan Le is exactly a protector...it is all self preservation. He does protect others, but that is because that encourages others to fight his enemies and for people to keep him safe politically to protect their grandchildren. I just realized that with immortals eating your food it really is a compliment to the cooking as they no longer need to eat at all. I do love the Gan Le punching bag, even when he is not present physically. Maybe Gan Le and Yun Me will be a couple. For now though he may get extra beaten for Aster talking about the possible relationship. -I worry what type of fighter would be produced from that kind of pounding... and I actually meant what Gan Le would become, not what the kid would be like. Oh! I was curious about rifts on gas giants! Cities as well. I do wonder what sort of creatures have survived and thrived from gas giant rift breaks. So this is what the debate about [Portal] vs [Teleport] was for, and they somewhat seem to be not in the same progression but more adjacent each with their own advantages. When did honor come up?

Thomas Todd

Thanks for the chapter

Asattor

Thanks for the chapter 😊

Itsigu

Tftc!


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