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Chapter 411

🕑 Added 2025-03-31 18:59:01 +0000 UTC

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KnightRider007

One good thing (among many!) about this series is how often the need for therapy gets mentioned and normalised.

nicholaus perry

Just had a thought about Manny’s foresight. Why doesn’t he use it to find out what the Minkala layout was going to be? Wouldn’t that be a huge advantage for the Empire?

Julie Smith

Nice end to the book. I don't recall having Melinda's POV before. She's had her own pressures and problems. I'm glad to see her moving along.

TwoMoreYears

As always I love seeing the Manny POV. Definitely a great way to set the tone of where we are. Definitely enjoying this phase of the story, seeing the characters grow I to their place in the Empire and Realm. It was really nice to see Cameron, while I know there’s only so many small arcs like cosmind you can fit into one book, but seeing Asters college best friend reminded me how much I enjoy seeing people who see important to Matt/lizz/aster show up from time and have them hang out like in the real world. One of the things I’ve loved seeing is lately is the seamless foreshadowing of important moments to come. Dropping the line about the next generation of ascenders made me realize that they’re likely on the horizon in the relatively near future. I imagine it will be when the gang is in the tier 30s but it’s just one example of all of the very cool storylines I feel we’re getting. If I were a betting man, I’d even bet that the next ascender will have used one of Matt’s skill trainers or something derived from it. That was a very long way of saying I loved this book and look forward to the next.

Matt Brown

As a person named Matt I appreciate how there are multiple people with that name in the book and how it’s addressed. I’ve rarely been with a group of people where I don’t have the same name as someone else and one of us is either called Matthew or addressed as our last name

Leander

End of this current book. Next Friday will be the start of the next one. That chapter will be another alt pov.

DowagerOfVeils

It's the end of the book, not the series, yeah. Mantis ends each book with a Manny PoV

Paul West

So I am a recent addition to this sub. This is the end of the book not the series right?

Sean Shivers

is the 4.5 k 3rd pov chapter the start of the new book? Maybe i misunderstood, i thought it was this week.

Desidia

Are we going to find out what Emperor Emmanuel was doing?

C_Mantis

Fixed ty

C_Mantis

Thats clever and I didnt think of that.

Trevor Mergen

Thanks!

Xarow

Thanks for the chapter. “people wanted to mingle and felt good about the triumph. “ Should this be ‘feel’ rather than felt?

Zed

the ending was nice but i was expecting something like stem cell / cancer like how any cell can be anything with a mutation just like how rifts can change.

john smith

Oh THATS what the pigeon was about! Thank you I was so confused. Slightly difficult to keep up with so much varied info.

Etoyrt

This chapter is I think a good look at an important truth of the realm again: Tier 50s are at the top definitively. It is incredibly rare for there to be any sense in which someone is overall greater than a Tier 50. They have the most impact on the state of the realm as individuals, even by their mere presence and inaction. Yet, Tier 50s are not better at everything than those under them. Someone can be better than a Tier 50 at things at a Tier way lower than them. Mastering everything is way too difficult, it is practically not done. Enchantments, skills, talents, and domains below Tier 50 can also block a Tier 50 in certain respects. The fact that other Tier 50s exist then also changes the game. With everyone being immortal past Tier 15 and the political machinations of Tier 50s being the background state, the plans of those below that Tier can matter a lot too.

Isiah Debarros

I mean it doesn't affect skills it affects domains

Jonathan Robichaux

Great chapter! But I feel like we were robbed of our first 12k chapter now lol

Rev

Enjoy your vacation/break thanks for the chapter I'm excited for this other POV

Spencer Needler

I’m sad we’re gonna have to wait till the 11th for the Aunt Helen POV chapter

Sean McClain

I wonder if Matt's blended domain where he shuts off active skills (basically turns off magic for a second) messes with future sight, in that it creates blindspots and time perdiction shadows where it's hard to perdict the future with a skill of events immediately afterwards

Alex

He probably WASN'T: 1. Creating a massive stockpile of mana crystals. Manny's mana output will be so much higher when Matt gains a few extra Tiers that going M.I.A now to make a mana stockpile would be an inefficient waste of his time. He also doesn't appear to have been in his Tier 47 Rift base, which is where he'd go if he was just trying to pump out as much mana as possible. 2. Sneaking into the other Great Powers. The Tier 50s can sense anyone who's Tier 46 or above from anywhere in the Realm, and they'd be keeping constant watch on the other Tier 50s to make sure they weren’t going somewhere they shouldn’t. Manny says that he can defeat Tier 50 senses for a little while, but he also says that it's such a pain in the ass that it isn't really worth it, and it would be suspicious on its own if he dropped off the radar for long periods of time, so it's completely implausible that he's been hiding from the other Tier 50s and sneaking around in their back yards for as long as he's been gone.

Ves

Wonderful chapter 🙏

Adam

Do we know what Manny was doing while away?

C_Mantis

There shouldn't be. I was talking about a yet unmamed HER. (but I could have messed up but im pretty sure I didnt)

Alex

I think Virgil was the one who said plans within plans when Manny reveals that the Empire’s ‘unethical experimentation with mortal populations’ was a setup to divert attention and make the other GP’s waste resources. Virgil’s also a paranoid lunatic who massively overvalues future sight because she’s constantly expecting betrayal, so she probably thinks that anyone who has future sight would be a Machiavellian manipulator because that’s what she’d be if she had that Talent (I mean she already is a Machiavellian manipulator without even having the right Talents for it).

Quixotic

Galip's gender flips back and forth.

C_Mantis

It sure is. But hes comparing himself to people who had it at less then 200 where in lies the problem. Comparison is the theft of joy.

Tyler Owens

It might just make her aware but I’m all for speculating how it works

Tyler Owens

Plans within plans within plans, Aofie (clans T50) was spot on. It also shows how much of a multiplier Matt’s talent is to already powerful people with Manny able to spam futuresite

MikeL

I can understand that Matthew is overwhelmed by his more successful friends. But he actually has his Intent already. That is truly impressive, before Melinda even. Isn’t less than a 1000 years considered great?

A Flashy BR

Tyftc so excited for the new book

Havokk

great chapter and Im really happy to see Aunt Helen getting all the celebrations she deserves. And the thought of JR having a clone just doing a happy dance because Aunt Helen thanks him is as unsurprising as it is smile inducing lol. I love that Manny aint even mad at the Ascenders tossing a lot of his plans away instead he seems happy for the excitement. Yay to seeing Mathew and Melinda again hopefully we will get an update on the rest of their friends soon. And it would be fantastic to see how the training hall has developed as well as how much it has impacted Lily

Alex

A Talent that lets a person utilize the senses of anyone who invokes their name? Not a bad power for a tyrant. Edit: Bet if she had of been Empress should would have required people to say a pledge of allegiance which included her name at least once a day.

James Skinner

Thanks for the book!

C_Mantis

He brought a pretty rock!

Ray S.

Anyone want to bet that the third pov was a certain bird as he hilariously bumbles around ineptly trying to court Aunt Hellen.

Domy

Thanks guys enjoy the time off

Ryan Berends

Thanks for the chapter and see ya on the 11th!

Aiden Bishop

Thanks for the chapter!

Kasamuri

Thanks for the chapter

nolan saylor

Thanks Mantis! Thanks Dae! Kinda fun to see quantity beat the Quality of a T50. Manny not able to outmuscle the change in fates of trillions of lower tiered people having a new chance at life. OOOH! "Next generation of Empire Ascenders?!!" -I wonder if we'll ever see MAL letting something pass as it will help younger people strive against something. Maybe a Pather, maybe their own kid. -Janet was right, Manny sees everything and Georgois totally planned DW. ;) A sister... you have a sister. Obi Wan was wise to hide her. Sorry, wrong story. I am curious to see how this younger sister will play into the story. Maybe they will be the power that arises to take the place of the Feds? Or they at least show how a group may exist to replace the Feds. More confirmation Nardo was genuine. I do enjoy some karma occurring. Good people getting good in turn, and the occasional douche getting what they deserve. I'm sorta rooting for JR and Helen. He may be a bit greedy, but they just seem a fun pairing. The old Dynasty seems almost useful. A whetstone for the Ascenders, old and new! As well as a smokescreen for what is happening with Matt's mana. Maybe encouraging the other GPs to let the Empire, seemingly, weaken itself with its own fallen faction. Maybe let Harper practice some assassinations. oof, a return strike already planned. Allowing the execution to be a celebration also works as a moral blow. Encouraging any younglings see the old dying as a good thing. Making the old pretend to celebrate their own defeat for any outside observers. A hint at a Talent. Maybe even a useful Talent... one that Manny probably has. Multiple people or multiple heads? Hail Hydra? (I still want a hail element hydra) Congrats on Matthew already having an Intent. Melinda should chat with Matt more, he understands how it feels to be valued for their Talent more than their talents. Though Matt has worked to overcome that by being an Ascender. So maybe not perfect. Needing therapy sucks, but needing it and not getting it sucks worse. A less exciting anchor, but still fun. A fun chapter even if we apparently missed a third PoV. I'm curious of who. The Cabal or a GP leader are options, but I am curious if that would've been our intro to the Former Emperor's sister.


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