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Chapter 391

🕑 Added 2025-01-17 19:59:01 +0000 UTC

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Ellariayn

I did NOT need nightmare fodder about dog-sized spiders 😂

KnightRider007

I literally can’t remember who the other Alice is. Someone over tier 40, obviously, but I can’t bring them to mind.

Ellariayn

I think that even if Alice was spelled slightly different (for the new character - like “Alyce”, it would be significantly less confusing. Especially since Aster’s Alice is not mentioned that frequently previously, but is mentioned a “decent” amount in these couple of chapters (more than once) - with another “Alice” it gets confusing.

KnightRider007

“Everyone around her started to murmur, but before they could say much, a wave of golden flame engulfed the group for a brief instant and they found themselves somewhere else.” “Alice felt small pellets of ice hit her face like tiny hail drops, but by the time she registered the feeling, she was standing somewhere else along with a third of the gathered Empire Tier 15s.” Since when do Liz and Aster have abilities that let them mass-teleport people?

KnightRider007

Essentially. As per chapter 335: “From their spies’ reports, Matt knew the physical shielding of the ship was going to be incredibly thick and made of both Tier 25 exotic materials and natural treasures. Still, he was taken aback at just how true that statement was. The hull of the ship was probably worth more than what a dozen Tier 30 star systems made in a millennium.”

KnightRider007

" they lightly heartily complained about the planet's rotation." -> "lightheartedly"

KnightRider007

"Maybe we can just get Clyde to do it now? Or him and Alice? Together the two of them should be able to speed up the rotation safely" This, followed immediately by a PoV shift to a *different* character named Alice, was a bit confusing

Julie Smith

Yes, George. For those who are not familiar with the method, it involves one person slicing the cake and the other choosing to take the piece or not.

Julie Smith

Typo Edit: Replace: "Still, with their own agreed upon limited interference, it would ultimately come down to those that chase to participate." With: "Still, with their own agreed upon limited interference, it would ultimately come down to those that chose to participate."

Julie Smith

Tier 15 delving! The good old days! I love the set up and the competition. The mercenaries should win based upon better organization, but quantity has a quality all its own. I bet there are just as many quality fighters in the Empire's hoard, and probably some superior one to any the mercenaries have. I wouldn't want to bet my life on the outcome, but on a hunch, I think the Empire will win.

Timspt8

Seems like a rather high tier rift, it does sounds interesting admittedly

Trevor Mergen

Thanks!

Baconater

TYFTC! Slight punctuation error: "The room was comparably small, maybe two hundred feet t" I can't remember if what Olivia said about the ship being made of Natural Treasures was true, anyone know?

Ben

Little late but I have an idea for a new rift. A space themed wave rift with a white hole in the middle, with endless types of monsters with endless attributes and abilities. Something that will resonate with Matt and teah him something about him self

Reodude

Love it but maybe swapping the portions of the last sentence would have more impact?

Clint

Fun chapter. Always great to see the MCs from a more normal pov. Looking forward to seeing them be the powerful watchers snatching low-tiers from certain death, like the army during the queendom war way back when. It makes their progress more concrete somehow. Should we know Alice and Olivia? Is this the same Olivia who was an officer during the tier 5/6 war game??

Xarow

Great chapter thanks. I like how this feels like a full circle where they are now those supervising rather than being supervised.

TwoMoreYears

Absolutely loved this chapter. It’s cool to see Matt, Liz, and Aster having the full ascender effect. It reminds me of the tier 10 tournament when Matt and Liz fawned over Lila, or the idea of meeting light and shadow. I really hope we get to see that continue. Giving awards, possibly even training, or as a top tier reward being able to purchase a slot on a delving team for Matt’s guild. Whatever happens next, I’m definitely here for it.

Donan The Barbarian

As tier 26s while they might not be capable of handling everyone needing extraction at once themselves they can probably handle most of it relying solely on Matt's concept and mana regeneration to keep the 3 of them fresh. Might need help from their seneschals and guards at times but that's now a problem of needing to be in too many places at once for even Legion and Matt to handle after being buffed by Aster

Donan The Barbarian

Most people fall off of step of the path by tower 15 so while there might be some there's probably only 1 or maybe 2 teams/individuals in the sector at tier 15 still on the path and everyone else was too far away.

IAMather

Love this chapter and the new POV. Made me want a dispute where they do a version of the pather war having the Empire path vs one of the other powers version of the path.

Derze

"...it would ultimately come down to those that chase to participate" that chase ->chose to participate Let's gooooo! This arc is going to be sooo good. Let the games begin!!! Go Alice Go!!

MinE

I wonder if that'll be one of Matt's projects. Making either a practice version of Minkalla so more people T11-13 survive or a higher tier version for training at T15+.

Drew Tunison

Did any pathers come to the ascenders call? There have to be some right?

PikaAndrew

Tftc

ExcitableSpren

Like the chapter! Always enjoy seeing MLA from an outsiders viewpoint, and the low-tier delving will be a fun break.

Jason Hatter

Hopefully better than the Golem War

Sangui

During their pather war the watchers were tier 25s, so I assume they can

C_Mantis

Huh TIL, because ive used this method myself a few times but never knew the name but its fun because it makes both sides think equally.

C_Mantis

A very good point but I will point out stubborn doesnt always mean unchanging. Mostly at least. But yeah I do agree and there is a reason we don't see too many like it.

A Flashy BR

This looks like a very fun little arc I'm excited for more <3

Havokk

I am so happy that we get to see the ruin delved and from the perspective of someone who is in a risk versus reward tier. It's always fun to see MLA delve but its also great to see someone who isn't our MC's do a delve. This is going to be fun. And I am really hoping that at the end Alice gets her T20 skill shard and is presented it by MLA just so she has the drinking game bragging rights

Pizza Scribe

Oh shit, Minkalla 2: Rift Boogaloo

Dominick Ruiz

Mini-arc then

MikeL

So what skill is Liz using for mass teleports? Does [Teleport] do that? I also want to know what Blood Teleport might do. Are the 3 of them now powerful enough to watch and remove everyone as needed.

Tsorov

Probably will only be one or two more chapters. While definetly interesting, the main focus of this arc is them developing their duchies and fighting legal battles with enemys in the shadows

BagFullOfLizards

Clyde huffed. “Ascender Titan, don’t think to pull the wool over my eyes. I noticed that the ruin entrance moved to be farther away from each entrance you made during its resets.” - is the first ruin entrance here supposed to be the boss room? Otherwise I’m not sure how the entrance is moving away from the entrance.

Alex

Having a literal stubbornness Concept is WILD. As cultivators advance through the Tiers they become less bound by the limits of reality, and more bound by the limitations of their Domain: cultivators can bend reality according to their will using their Domain, but the trade-off is that they're compelled to act as an expression of their Domain. It falls somewhere between unpleasant and outright dangerous for a cultivator to act in defiance of their Domain - depending on the exact nature of Alice's Concept it may genuinely be dangerous for her NOT to be stubborn. Imagine feeling actual pain and rejection from your inner Self if you changed your mind about something, or admitted you were wrong.

Tom C

TFTC!

George

the selection method here is called a 'cake slicing algorithm' and is considered optimal for dividing something like this, although the entrances being discrete could screw it up

Zach Gusler

I like Alice's view. I want to see her meet the ascenders

noah radencic

I enjoyed Alice's pov I hope she does well in the rest of the event Hopefully earning an ascenders favor

Anton Selling

Like the story direction seeing some more average people in that world 👍

Dan

Please keep giving us perspectives from inside the Ruin

Dominick Ruiz

This is looking like a fun arc

John Smith

I really like seeing Matt make things because he can. The flourishes on the tunnels were a great example of that. Personally hoping that aspect of his personality winds up in his aspect.

Owen Kaz

Let the Delving Commence!

Kasamuri

Thanks for the chapter

nolan saylor

Thanks Mantis! Thanks Dae! Some good logical reason for why the Corporations won't steamroll. It's funny to see Matt finally benefitting from things moving slowly. The opponent being the one who wants to rush things. Sure Matt's style is for long drawn out fights, but this isn't combat. I am amused by the ruin also having a safe room as the entrance. We talked about how Realms aren't rifts, as Mantis doesn't want it to be rifts all the way down. But could it be ruins all the way down? Rifts can form in ruins. And a high tier rift can contain galaxies, perhaps a large enough one can contain universes, and then once it becomes a ruin it is a realm with universes. -Do large rifts contain a chaotic space equivalent or do the high tiers need to travel between different galaxies the somewhat slow way? All this about a labyrinth shuffling around rooms is making me a bit nostalgic for Percy Jackson, Battle of the Labyrinth. Assuming the Empire gets this, the poor ruler is going to be bothered so often by the Dukes visiting them. Though the other influx of traffic of people visiting this wonder will probably make it all the more worthwhile. I hope whichever Ascender gets this selects someone special to rule it. Maybe an elevator tube, maybe a flight tube. Gotta love the grumpy cat. -I sorta forgot she was black and focused on Luna being moon white. I remembered the whisky purple void claws. I wonder if the change in the rotation of the planet could lead to some interesting things with water. Suddenly some of the ruin has water blocking hallways instead of staying in pools, and the whole place has puddles and streams on the ground. Though it has oceans above it, so there is probably some way the ruin doesn't suddenly become a water level. -I wonder if a ruin ever altered the planet's rotation. Maybe a sudden existence of metal blocked a river and slowed the rotation of the planet. Three Gorges Dam did so on Earth. Or perhaps a volcanic ruin acted like an obnoxiously large rocket thruster. More likely to change the orbit than the rotation, but maybe. Matt mentioned 10 starting stairs and then MAL and Clyde each got 3. Did they make less or is this needing an edit? Huh, I guess I sorta got my PoV chapter, just not the perspective I expected. Just not a full chapter. 5 name Mantis strikes again. (Though maybe not their choice if it's a Patreon's character.) Kinda funky to read "Tier 20 mana stones worth" instead of "millions of dollars worth. " It just sounds weird. Like someone walking a thousand kilometers in stead of a thousand miles to stand fall down at your door. It sounds too science-y instead of romantic. Huh, Liz/Legion really is great for being able to greet everyone. Clones are useful. Reminds me a bit of MAL meeting Oliver and his schtick of speed clones to interact with everyone. Liz is moving up in the world. -I may have been assuming Liz had a clone for every ship that came, and did so simultaneously. A T15 as a clean up crew for T25 materials? I'm with the skeptics, feels more likely she heard the story from someone else and is claiming the story for herself. (And it is amusing to think this may also be some Patreon's character and they just wanted their character to be unlikable. Though to be fair I offered my character to be dead via over-confidence.) I like how even the "she looked at me" trope feels realistic and valid here. Part of it is that it wasn't a random glance into a crowd someone claims was directed at them. Again, I like how PoA shows that characters aren't caricatures. They can be rude and rational, mean and competent. So far the labyrinth isn't having hallways high on the walls, in the ceiling or floor. How long will that last though? Will it really only go deeper via incline or stairs? -I guess abusing spatial manipulation does make it not need stair or inclines to change what level you're on. How useful is it to map out rooms if the rooms move? (Though I don't think they were informed of that.) I guess it will be fun to see people staying in rooms or hallways to try and keep their path stable. That does allow for people I preferred the ore as a light source. Spiders are bad. Does make for amusing imagery when I am not the one forced to see the spider. Do you want the light or no?! Also could be a cool hunting mechanism to start only expecting spiders when there is light, then being jumped when the spiders can turn off their lights or coexist with a non-glowing species. Glad they are aware of the need to look up. We really need some creatures that act like bombs when they die. The goblins were clever but a buttload of mana (minor joke for the spiders storing mana in a glowing abdomen) would make a logical explosive. And for creatures that live in a group to be willing to die for the group is fair. Just need to make sure they don't all go up in a burst if the one dies. Still sorta works if the spiders are indeed mana resistant. Using a mana sponge on a mana body is a delightful counter. That, looking up, and the shield work is a good reminder that these are supposed to be competent demigods who fight for a living. Alice and the others are better than most. Good to see it actually shown instead of claiming they are good and then being useless. Mana weaving? I hope they have some gorgeous webs, though they are spiders living in a cave and we saw no mention of webs. A web from a mana weaving species could/should be valuable. -I like the idea of a rift with glowing webs, encouraging the delvers not to burn the webs. Not to destroy the light source. That feels like a low bar for natural treasures. Maybe it's just stockpiled up for a while? Maybe anything that is technically natural counts as a natural treasure? Does make for some interesting possibilities for Knights. And Knights are rather fun to theorize about now. Yeah, I do love a good PoV. Thanks again Mantis & Dae!


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