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Chapter 392

🕑 Added 2025-01-20 19:59:01 +0000 UTC

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KnightRider007

I'm reading that as "(The devlers) being at the same Tier (as the monsters), Matt (thinking as an Ascender) wanted to say none of the delvers should have any trouble with the monsters inside". He hasn't quite calibrated to the fact that "normal" adventurers don't treat monster their own Tier as negligible threats. But yeah, the phrasing could definitely be clearer.

Ellariayn

“ which resulted in a half a dozen teams from both sides being cut off from the main groups and then shifted to another portion of the planet. Matt, Liz, and Aster wanted to give both teams more supplies…”. Teams or sides? Because there were half a dozen teams cut off (and it doesn’t say how many were from the Empire).

Ellariayn

Sorry - please ignore if obnoxious or wrong as it’s late but I can’t sleep: “Being at the same Tier, Matt wanted to say none of the delvers should have any trouble with the monsters inside, but watching the spectacle below was a stark reminder that they were not normal.” But they AREN’T at the same tier. They are over tier 25, and the delvers are tier 15?

Ellariayn

“Watching a Tier 15 Corporation mercenary scout, someone who was battlefield trained and tested, go down the path that led away from the ruin's boss room after being given the option between two paths.” This sentence doesn’t actually lead to any conclusion. Yes, it shows that the other team is also following false trails, but I would recommend being clearer at the end of the sentence if whatever point you are trying to communicate.

Zitensi

Fantastic chapter. Loved the suspense of potentially losing out.

Adamas Shield

yeah this will be a very happy trooper.

KnightRider007

Disagree on the probability manipulation. “Stubbornness” wouldn’t affect that too much - seems more like a super-subtle mental influence, that’s more something that stubbornness would defend against.

Julie Smith

Great description of the battle for the ruin! You drew out the suspense very well, and brought it to within a minute and twelve seconds. Excellent job! Alice got herself noticed by Matt. She'll surely get recruited, one way or another.

David Tart

Really great buildup i ended up on the edge of my seat too. I think you should omit the final sentence and end it instead with the previous one. I think as it is that final sentence is sort of redundant and kinda pulls the climax down. But great fun and lots of energy. Keep up the good work !

Trevor Mergen

Thanks!

Lukas

Thoroughly enjoyed this. always look forward to the next chapter every 3 days almost like clockwork. This chapter highlights building additional characters well. I like that within the MC storyline, others can still be there hero of the story. it is obvious they have an outsized impact on the worlds around them but that it doesnt mean others cant still make big impacts while they are unable to... even if it is their money that funded the whole thing.

austin kutz

I doubt she cares about something like that. She'd probably prefer a few weeks of training from an ascender with a similar concept to her stubbornness. Endlessness is a good match tbh

Abdulaziz ALRumaih

Good for her

Havokk

well now... guess who just got the winning hand in every bar game of drunk story one up she ever plays from now on

Corvid

Yep. Killing one in ten is the archaic definition, not the modern one. Modern definition is to kill, destroy, or remove a large percentage.

Christian Sullivan

Yeah the Liz-pocolypse would descend on the poor tier 15.

Havokk

from the last chapter I think she would prefer a kiss from Matt, though Im also sure she wouldnt ask for it for fear of what Liz would do

Tsorov

The point is more that she will at most become a background support character that will be mentioned once or twice. She ain't no pather, she will not be able to get to tier 25 in one hundred years. Maybe she will matter in the true war, but that is far in the future

austin kutz

She might not be ascender material, but she's solidly in elite territory if she can manage an intent that fits her as well as her concept

Jason Hatter

Sure, she's no Ascender, but MAL can always use competent,stubborn AF allies.

Aaron Hardin

Am I the only one who finds it funny that the moon (Luna) is helping a “Sun God (Ra is Egyptian Sun God).

Christian Sullivan

She deserves a big hug from Aster!

Nick O'Gara

He still highers delvers to get loot tables. Plus it's good to have stubborn people on the payroll.

Alex

They should be. Pathers aren't military. Back when MLA were fighting for that T22 planet, they were considered civilians. (Though the clans i believe bend the rules for what counts as civilian by letting off duty/on holiday military members participate.) And the other elites there from all powers also weren't officially soldiers. Pathers definitely aren't soldiers though. They can leave at any time. Nobody orders them around. Yes, they can do missions, but im fairly certain they're allowed to refuse if they dont want to.

Fabian

Mentioning Courtly Warfare made me go down the rabbit hole again :( 188+ In search of the meeting with Winter, if I ever get there

TwoMoreYears

Really fun chapter. Thanks.

Luciaron

She was awesome but don’t think she was just a head, more like she only defended her head while leaving the rest of her open.

Thomas Brusilovsky

That girl is damn happy she decided to drop her rift slot. She’s set for life now lmao

Kain

The comments are already ready to adopt Alice lol. Sadly I have a feeling she’s gonna me more like that critical hit/failure pather girl they sponsored or the PoV character from their problem planet than like Susan.

Kain

Agreed on probability shifting, me thinks that “literal coin toss” by the assault team may have cost them more than they bargained for.

Kain

No current pathers were mentioned, Scorpion lady was a former pather that fell off. Even if they were I doubt there was time for any to get here it was a tight turn around from discovery to this competition and there really aren’t “that many” tier 15 pathers in either GP.

StabAlloy

After that showing they should probably let Alice name the planet. Planet Everdon?

Drendude

Nah, ascenders would've won handily.

C_Mantis

ehhh decimated in the roman meaning means that yes, but in modern day English it meaning is closer to 'wiped out'

Sebastiaan B

they wanted to see what she could do. why stop an interesting fight when you don't have to. in the grand scheme of things, a minute means nothing at all to anyone involved, but its worthwhile to enjoy the show and see what they'd do.

Kasamuri

Thanks for the chapter

Alex

Maybe a probability effect? If the Ruin increased the probability that a cultivator would choose the wrong direction it makes sense that Alice would be less affected since her distribution of possible choices would be more stubborn and less susceptible to bias.

The Grey Mage

So the ruin was definitely doing something, since Ms Stubborn was having better success scouting than others. Really interested in finding out what the effect actually is. And in seeing more of her. A minute thirty as just a head is crazy.

Alex

Alice's Concept isn't useless, it's problematic. Cultivators are compelled to act as an expression of their Domain - a stubbornness Concept would give a person incredible staying power in a fight, but it would also compel them to be stubborn about everything in their lives, which isn't great. You can think of a Domain as being like a genetic predisposition to addiction: just because a person is genetically pre-programmed to become addicted to things doesn't mean they will, it just means they need to be vigilant and disciplined when they deal with things that have the potential to cause addiction. It's the same deal for a cultivator who has a Domain that would compel them to behave in ways that aren't healthy. Alice would need to carefully monitor and control her stubbornness, or it could control her life. Luna has to fight the same battle with her perfectionism Domain: it's not completely debilitating, but it is a pain in the ass that you'd want to avoid if possible.

SunStar

they were either not watching the clock or just wanted to see if she'd kill them all, I'd guess.

MikeL

So are current Panthers considered civilians for this game?

ByLAWphoto

Yeah...Alice is a baby ascender. She's gonna get adopted. (Side note, Mantis--"decimated" means 'reduced by one tenth.'. So if the Empire teams came from the back and reduced the Corporation fighters by one tenth, then cool. Otherwise, I think you mean some like "crippled" or "annihilated".)

fruit dragon

Nah doesn't seem like the researcher type of person? Maybe a guard for the dutchie or something like that

MikeL

Join His guild?

Esch

Luna is busy helping Rah with his cultivation issues

da Finnci

Kinda funny that her "useless" stubbornness concept is really similar to an Ascender's

SunStar

nah, alice is way too old. the empire won't use it's Luna trigger on a non pather

Rexosaur

Please tell me luna has a new trainee in alice

Corac

Oh that was so freaking fun to read from this pov. Such a good chapter and minor story.

Zack

Well, Alice is definitely gonna get her wish of meeting the ascenders now 😎

fruit dragon

Job offer from them?

Louise

Yeah! Go on, Alice! I hope she gets all the things.

StarWolf

Matt and Co better do something nice for Alice sounds like she emptied her pockets to pull the win.

Esch

Matt must have felt some nostalgia watching Alice make a last stand like that, It was almost the same thing a very young Matt did way back in the Vassal War.

Ryan Berends

Go ALICE!!!!!!!!

Evan Ross

Tftc!!

Bunny Waffles

Go Alice! She is gonna get way more than just getting to *see* the Ascenders after a performance like that!

MinE

MVP, Alice

PikaAndrew

Tftc

nolan saylor

Thanks Mantis! Thanks Dae! I wonder what would've happened if there was a future possible Ascender present. At T5 MAL was a contender for top team. At T10 MAL & Susanne were undeniably first. At T15 what would a loose Ascender be like, able to run through without outside support? Or would the be stopped by Michelle Skoren? Recent Pathers now without restrictions of outside help. MAL was at least challenged by Long Zhiyun in Minkala when he wasn't helped. And here MAL would've been surrounded and possibly overwhelmed. -Just curious. I do like the offensive style of healing magic being used to bypass defenses. Reminds me of a book I read as a teen. So it is possible to dig and alter the reinforced earth. Collapsing a floor or ceiling is probably doable. -If the room is split which side is the boss room? Probably just counted as the same room, so the original defenders still technically have the room. Oh, utilizing the Ruin is rather clever! My compliments to (I assume) Mantis, and whatever Empire mind thought of that... or they just got lucky and capitalized on it. -What happens if the boss room is fully sealed off? Does it move locations and stay the boss room? Or does it move locations and a new place is declared the boss room? Both have strategic options, just depends who is holding the boss room. -How quickly does the Ruin change room locations? The immortal time frame, a half year game. I always fall a bit into the trap of criticizing coincidence of "wow, the first person we saw is the last person alive"... then realize I am dumb as we saw them in the first place as they would be the last. Excluding math Mantis is omniscient in PoA. So did they have Alice wait that last one minute 12 seconds after the deadline to give that extra assurance that the Guilds couldn't claim the challenge wasn't over yet and start the next 7-day timer?


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