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Chapter 420

🕑 Added 2025-05-09 18:59:02 +0000 UTC

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Julie Smith

The dark underbelly of Dwarven society. Yuck.

Steph

Am I the only one who wanted that dwarf to make a move against our boy? IDK I just want to see him struggle and grow further because of it

MinE

Honestly, no idea how taxes for something you make yourself in yourself would work. I mean taxing the training methods kinda makes sense, but how would taxing self created skills even work. How would they even enforce it; I doubt scanning someones spirit to tell how many skills they have is cheap.

MinE

Every bloodline decays at I assume roughly the same rate by default; the dwarfs just utilize the bonus of their bloodline form being properly humanoid to use methods most other bloodlines don't want to do.

Apep

That’s basically all they had before Aiden. A name and a tier. Besides descenders, it is safe to assume that you need something for the next bottleneck.

Presten

Cool, I desperately hope to see the entirety of the pseudo "Dwarven" mutation's hegemony be annihilated and their entire way of life and culture ripped out of the realm. What a bunch of Proud useless shits pretending to be more than human while being entirely artificial and unable to continue indefinitely without constant mantinance. They keep humans as second class fodder citizens. From the chapter I assume every "dwarf" is awakened while in this chapter we were told only 5% of the unaffiliated humans were awakened. And that was a forced percentage. No more than that. The other beast bloodlines are naturally occurring right? And investments into their bloodline core strengthen them enough to be beneficial and a valid choice for an ascender. But the "dwarves" require "substantial cultivation dedicated to the bloodline cores which would weaken their overall combat power" if they don't quaff elixirs. I was pretty indifferent about the clans before this chapter. Now they are my in my top 3 hated empires, with the federation (or whatever the Hyper authoritarian brain washing state is with their evil mother ruler) being my clear number 1 most hated empire. Mantis did great work this chapter. I'm gonna go have fun by not thinking about this and making myself angry because of a story.

Darral Cate

Enjoyed the chapter. I'm wondering how they know you need an authority to get to tier 75. I thought they only had a very limited amount of information about the higher realm.

A Flashy BR

Wow tyftc that was captivating

alex bozdog

Loved the chapter, I always like the expansion of the world with seeing new perspectives like this that are only tangential to the main characters for now. I do however see it as a failure that we had drugs mentioned in chapter 420 and no joint was lit.

Sam

Chapter 332

TwoMoreYears

Really enjoyed the chapter and this storyline as a whole. I believe this is actually the first confirmation that dwarves are a bloodline form as well. I know that it was mentioned that it was the prevailing theory awhile back but its fun to have line drops like this that make it a known fact.

C_Mantis

Its not like there is a lot. Just a few people who had valid points I'm happy to address that I really don't think are all that major. Im happy for such feedback because it keeps me and the story honest.

Josh Bullock

Just wanted to chime in and agree with many other commenters. I love all the chapters that show off more of the great powers and the rest of the universe. It's rare I feel that way about any story but this is one of *very* few that's achieved that and I genuinely look forward to chapters like this where we get to see the characters interact and see the bigger political picture. Having said that, nothing will ever top Aiden's chapter where he casually flexed on basically every other person in existence (btw does anyone have a chapter number for that? I would love to re-read it).

Alex

Bloodlines have what are known as 'Bloodline Talents'; if a child is born in the correct form with a pure enough Bloodline they're guaranteed to get a predefined set for their Tier 1 and Tier 3 Talents. For most Bloodline beasts this is typically an Innate [Elemental Manipulation] for their Tier 1 and Better Elemental Magic for their Tier 3. If we assume that Matt could create a "Matthew Alexander" Bloodline, and if we also assume that inheritors of his Bloodline are guaranteed to get his Tier 1 and Tier 3 Talents, then the default choice for a Bloodline power is something that fixes his concentration issue. -> Rank 1 Power: Essence allocated to your Bloodline core increases your mana concentration. -> Rank 2 Power: You have greater mana control. This is another one of Matt's big problems that's just going to keep getting worse as he gets into the higher Tiers. Having a Bloodline power that gives greater mana control would be a huge win for someone with his Talents. -> Rank 3 Power: You can alter your mana concentration at cast. The Rank 3 power would be really handy for when the person starts getting into the higher Tiers. There's going to be a point where a person with Matt's Talents will run into the "mana = yes" problem, because they'll have WAY more mana than they can actually use. With this Rank 3 power a person could convert their excess mana into greater mana concentration, so they'd ALWAYS be able to use 100% of their available mana instead having ungodly amounts of mana just sitting in their pool doing nothing.

Kyle Coe

Hate to see all these criticisms of the chapter! It was great! Appreciate the work you do to get us chapters every week!

T

I’m guessing someone will make that mistake at one point and we see all accenders plus there great power cluster fuck them maybe an assassination of the group after matts

Harley Shockley

If Matt were to try and make a bloodline for his descendants, what would he want his bloodline to be?

T

That is kinda the point no Show them only what they want to see and you can control the narrative to influence them in the way you want

C_Mantis

There is only so much narrative space I can really give to another GP like this but I dont want people thinking all of the other Great Powers are all perfect places where their leaders have perfect control. This was really just meant to be a glimps into greater workings.

CottonMod

That's a weird development. I wonder what could prompt Tier 46 to throw away their life for literally no reason. There is no war. The clans remain number 1. The status quo is still there. What even happened to get him so riled up? I get that the realm is changing and your ruler seems weak, but suicide by Tier 50? "He miscalculated" would be such an unsatisfying answer. It is one thing when a clueless clown on a newly integrated planet gets a reality check. It is another one completely when a Tier 46 clan leader takes a gamble with a 0.01% chance of dying on the spot and the best case scenario of "a minuscule increase in power and a new enemy who can squash you like a lemon." Unfortunately, I did not notice any hints about deeper reasons, at least in this chapter. Blackmail? Afraid that someone could use him to harm the clans/his clan? Mind-control? I just can't see it

DicedOnions

So this was the second time someone in the clans suggested fucking with ascenders, what are the odds that we get a hat trick? The third time I bet it's a lower clan that was a branch member of the headless wonder's clan. Maybe a tier 30 or group of them try and harrass MLA?

C_Mantis

good catch ty. fixed

JJB4345_80_815

Thank you for the chappy! Friendly possible edit: Quote: When Allie took a swing of the drink, she shrugged. /Quote took a swing ==> took a swig of the drink (???)

C_Mantis

Pateron has been shitting itself all day sorry about that.

Evernap

I got 410 in my email. Not this updated 420. Did this happen for anyone else?

nolan saylor

Thanks Mantis! Thanks Dae! Ah, so their potions are made out of Brawndo. A fun debate on flavor vs effect. Yeah, enjoy the pain of feeling mana poor. -and teleport poor? Really fun to see them complain about the convenience. It's nice to see Matt's skill being acknowledged. DW: the Ascender's Ascender Tax self created skills? -I did expect it to be from companies losing revenues, but still annoying. I like Jaxon, being a release valve while also a beacon. Making both sides happy and unhappy. 1v7, they wouldn't dare -I mean what leader would be so stupid as to piss off their allies and the rest of the realm? "Historical precedence and therefore correctness" Rewriting history, classic -I wonder if the actions are known and recorded in other GPs? Spies specifically in the Republic and Sects. I guess they replaced people during this past war. Which makes sense. Easy to replace people in the midst of a war where everyone dies and some people are prone to changing habits that could be a giveaway. -probably spies in the Guilds and Empire but their choice of increasing the odds is already known. Brutal. Declaring yourself worthy of being a new T47. Brutal to have that denied. I wonder how typical it is to tier up without prior discussion. Aofie would be grateful that she made herself such a great target, good for showing Aofie hadn't gone soft, and a good means to satisfy the others for her actions to give out a bribe of a clan's resources. -I am curious how much is meant by the clan cast down. Just no longer a top clan, right? Not killing any dwarves after saying more dwarves are needed? Well, an interesting end to the week.

Joshua Jernigan

No Duke Water's authority let's him be assured to make it to tier 75 without another bottleneck for his domain

Jordan

"Something a Tier 74 needs to break through to Tier 75. " Wrong tier numbers?

Bob Bryan

Just because you are old or powerful doesn't make you smart. It can just make you very arrogant.

Chioke Nelson

Tyftc

Alex

It's ironic that dwarves and dragons are identical in that regard.

JoshCalmick

I adore finding out more about the other great powers. Great chapter, Mantis!

C_Mantis

Cant call it tripping too many times.

Alex

The whole thing about Manny having Georgios' Tier 50 Talent is kind of hilarious to me. The other Tier 50s hate that Manny has that ability because they think it's the key to his grand plan to control the future of the Realm. If you ask Manny about it, he'll tell you that Talent is hot garbage. The problem is that it's basically useless when it comes to predicting the actions of people who really matter - whenever Manny tries to use his father's Talent to predict the future of Ascenders or Tier 45+ cultivators it spits out a bunch of nonsense that ends up being completely wrong. If Manny actually used Georgios' Talent like the other Tier 50s think he does, he'd completely fuck himself over because his predictions would nearly always be wrong.

seth4bucks

You'd think a tier 46 who was who knows how old would be a little bit smarter in how he operated. Blatantly advancing like that while verbally lambasting the clans' leader and indisputably much more powerful clan leader right to her face is the height of stupidity. Do we know that ,as a prank, Allie didn't slip him something while out looking for psychedelics? All kidding aside thanks for the chapter.

Kelfu

Never once, in my entire life, have I reffered to tripping as imbibed...

Xavier Belmont

420 Nice!

Leander

Oh look the dwarves are proud as peacocks and racist as balls. There is no way that will end badly for them.

Ves

Really love these inter power breaks they're having, great chapter overall since I'm a complete sucker for the downtimes

Tom C

Nice!

DKM

Blaze it (I'm so sorry, I had to)

Kasamuri

Thanks for the chapter

Luna_1001

Ty


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