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Chapter 424

🕑 Added 2025-05-23 18:59:03 +0000 UTC

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Chimera80

I think there’s a fundamental difference, in that Seasaidh is crumbling under *external* pressure and expectations, while Susanne has always been the one applying that pressure to herself.

Tyler Blanchette-Witiuk

Hell yeah!

Julie Smith

Yummy! I like this twist. If Susanne can predict the future of a sword, she'll see a path to winning every battle. Ascenders, here we come!

Alex

I think Madam Renaissance got retconned to Tier 46; each Great Power is only allowed to have two Tier 48s, so the Empire’s hit its limit with Mara and Leon.

just.in.case

Is Madam Renaissance going to be one who could modify Matts sword? is the odd tier 48 crafter making an appearance?

Jonathan Jelsma

I would love a POV chapter from Suzanne. I really want to learn more about how she is dealing with the group, and perhaps see more of her relationship with Zach.

Corvid

Good stuff as always, tftc. Are there character sheets for all of the current ascenders in the group chat? Would be cool to see it laid out.

Dillon lay

Aayo Susanne and dwarf lady have an all out battle in the final war?

Matt H

Would you actually, though? Achieving immortality is not a trivial matter even if you're not interested in fighting. You need to have a modicum of self preservation combined with enough ambition and talent to earn the necessary resources to be carried to peak T14 if you're not a combatant. And even if you manage that you either need further resources to finally make a Concept (e.g. a Shard of Reality), or you need sufficient understanding of your place in the Realm to create a Concept on your own. For those who cross that line I can imagine the vast majority fall into one of two groups: those who are content with achieving immortality and those who are driven to advance. The former have no real need to take the oath as they aren't really concerned with advancing while the latter would, likely, want to advance faster than they could by taking the oath. The way I see it is that those who would really benefit from the oath are those who want to advance but are content for it to take a LONG time to do so. However, the functional requirements to reach T15 make me believe that the number of people who are driven enough to reach immortality and then are willing to languish for tens or hundreds of thousands of years is relatively small. After all, immortals aren't being conscripted to fight (in the Empire, at least), so it's not a one or the other decision between the military and the oath.

Mat

From time to time, Aster is proving to be always considered and aware of the big picture. I thinks of the current ascenders she might be the best at ruling

Alexis Cassaigne

Mind=blown.

Addie

Wait. Matthew Moore doubles his mana every level. Real-life Moore's Law doubles transistor density every 18 months. I JUST got that.

Alex

The problem isn't that Zack, Allie, Matt, Aster, and Liz completed the Path when Susanne couldn't, it's that they keep getting better while she falls further behind. It's one thing for someone to achieve something you can't, because you can tell yourself that with enough time and effort you'll catch up to them. It's another thing entirely to be surrounded by people who are better than you, that just keep getting better faster than you can catch up to them. At first it's frustrating. They're SO FAR ahead of you - but you KNOW you have what it takes to be the best, so you keep pushing forwards because you're sure that with enough effort and commitment you'll catch up - no, you'll get AHEAD of them, and won't that be something! But you've been working SO HARD for SO LONG now, and the gap isn't closing at all - if anything it just keeps getting bigger. How? It doesn't even look like they're TRYING, but they just keep pulling ahead of you. Every time you take a step they've taken two. Every time you reach their old benchmark they've already raised the bar again. Are you doing something wrong? You're working so much harder than they are, and it isn't making any difference. This isn't just frustrating anymore, it's suffocating - why can't you catch up to them? How do they make this look so fucking easy? This is IMPOSSIBLE. One day, it all sort of hits you... they're just better than you are. You can see it all so clearly now; they're like a comet, sailing off towards infinity - for a little while you were close enough that you could play around in the light they gave off and imagine what it'd be like to fly like they do, but they're too far away now, and it's time for you to come back down to earth. You wish you could be like they are... but you can't, because you just aren't good enough.

C_Mantis

While possibly fun its just not possible as all TIer 50s can feel themselves regardless of the distance. They are 100% sure there isnt another t50 in the realm besides themselves.

Moaz Khan

Thanks for the chapter. I think you should introduce an arc where a new series of tier 50 powers drift into the same orbit as the current great powers. Like powers consisting of elves, a theocracy, nomadic beastman, and a great power that is ruled by a hyper powerful AI where the tier 50 serves as their interface. Also just my regular plug for Matt to get a void aspect lightsaber and Aster to get royal guard style knights built from her domain and tiara

kaylam wilson

I think a fun little chapter would be Matt pulling a Lila worldwalker like Harper gets a tip on a planet that is vital to a trade route or something and say the sects want it for a specific affinity and Manny just goes sit your ass on that planet and don’t let anyone take it 😂

James Faulkner

Tftc!

C_Mantis

there are a few in consideration. If we don't have one this book well def have one next book

Kazith

Tyftc!

Apep

I really like the world building and enjoy seeing the wake the ascenders leave. As much I enjoy the main story I hope there will be another side story. It has been ages since the echos.

Burgismik

Exactly what I've been needing, strange and interesting upgrades to the team's abilities!

Jason Hatter

I... Don't remember the eye. Hmm. Must reread the last few chapters!

Alex

If I lived in the PoA world I’d 100% take the oath of the independents. The Great Powers use war as a tool to cull their immortal populations and seize resources through war reparations. Who in the actual fuck would want to be a part of that? Being in a position like Seasaidh’s where you were forced to fight in the political wars would be fucking horrendous.

MikeL

I liked it a lot that they helped Seasaidh. I was expecting Susanne to also help, she seems the closest to her situation. But I guess Sue is very stressed also, maybe that could have helped each other.

outlaw

Tftc!

Havokk

okay first I loved the Seaside sneak in lol. Seriously though I can see how Susanne would be feeling the way she is, she is literally surrounded by people who did the impossible while she fell at the final hurdle and it's not far off from the feelings of Seasaidh in not measuring up. I have no doubt that the team earned some definite good will by in parts of the Clans by talking to and working with Seasaidh.

C_Mantis

That initial timeline got bumped slightly after someone else pointed that out. Shes not actually older than them.

C_Mantis

The earlier book starting pov who pulled out a mace from the dwarven super special armory.

NetWon

I can't remember who Seasaidh is. Can someone remind me?

Kasamuri

Thanks for the chapter

Axel

Wait a second.. Seasaidh was awakened when MAL was tier 10, she managed to get to tier 19 when MAL was 20 (and was told she was older than MAL? Through rift time dilation?). At that point, she could have tiered up to win the fight, in her angry mind, but now she's still only tier 20?

A Flashy BR

Tyftc

nolan saylor

Thanks Mantis! Thanks Dae! I do love the continual teasing. Making Ellen a valley girl, in my mind that is the voice. Still brash. I do appreciate some acknowledgement of mental health. Feeling such expectations must suck. -It's nice to give Liz a chance to shine as the one who can relate. Matt's trauma has been more a focus of the series. I appreciate all the names tossed into the story. I am debating if I wish that some names the readers don't know were also tossed in. It might show that there is more depth, but it could also feel cheap. We focused on the highlights of the Path, and if we missed being introduced to a person then it feels hard to believe they had an impact, they weren't mentioned as going to the wedding or Ascension after all. I wonder if MAL may help spark an Intent. We got the italics after all. Seaside is not able to enjoy the pursuit of growth, just seeing the failure. I wonder if a group of people can share a domain. Not as the method of the Justice league, but as closer to you can have a shared growth item. It is a mental agreement, and unity of purpose. Munching on snacks in skeleton form... Not sure to laugh or be annoyed at the mess. I do enjoy Matt baffling people with kindness. I still hold out curiosity if he will gain allies, or at least remove enemies, from the true war by his philanthropic personality. I am happy Suzanne is included. Same with Rah kindles and friendship is important. It is good to not feel like a burden, but let friends care. Caring is what it means to be a friend and it's not always easy to know how to help, so sometimes that is gifts. This wasn't even fully a gift as she put in effort and Zack is her boyfriend so she has extra claim. Add in how MAL got the ingot.


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