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Chapter 457

🕑 Added 2025-10-03 18:59:01 +0000 UTC

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Chimera80

“Sharing Chosen Legion’s message with his husband, Gervásio watched as Felipe smiled, paled, then fully blanched.” Skipping the positives he privately asked, “What's wrong?” I think the names are flipped there. Felipe, the second in command, is watching his husband Gervasio (the Seeker) pale and then blanch as he works through what his Talent is telling him.

Julie Smith

Gervasio is definitely going to meet MLA. That's what his talent is telling him. Remi and Tessa are also going there, to kill them. Everyone will be surprised.

Julie Smith

A great kick-off chapter: two new POVs, one from the Corporation, one from the Clans, and an enemy of MLA. The Ascenders are stirring the pot vigorously, giving out key information as a distraction, and reaping ridiculous rewards (presumably). All I can think of is that a Real War(TM) might kick off as a result of this machination. No, that's not all. I also thought of the bubble collapsing and killing everyone, except our Ascenders, who teleport out--with Gervasio.

DeAndrea H

Tessa reminds me of the girl from Minkalla who could rig results to get better rewards. She was eventually was too clever for her own good bc the system ranked her as the biggest threat and the General targeted and killed her to protect his court.

Nayee

Wow. I feel like just now we came out of War arc. I need to re-read. Since you like this very much, let me suggest you one of the stories i follow - He who fights with monsters. These 2 are my favorite stories. The only 2 i have subscription for in this app.

Endgame

Edit suggestion - - Only passable herself with enchanting and even less so in formations, Tessa could only watch on as even the higher Tier teams dedicated enchanters (else) struggled to learn the new style of formation.  Take else out

Matthew Smith

Alright so I say this first because I really enjoy this book but shit if these people fuck with the ascenders again and they let any of them live im going to be pissed. These people are trying to kill them so they should massacre them all in return. It's the same shit during the war when they for some strange as fuck reason let people live. Kill them all, be like Aiden and Lila.

Austin Gillespie

Not specifically related to this chapter but: I’ve been spending the last 2 weeks on a hardcore reread of the series. It’s crazy that the war ends in the early 300s, and we’re past chapter 450 already. Almost a full third of the story (so far) is after the war arc, and half past the end of the Path itself. It’s beautiful what the story has grown into, so excited for the rest of this arc and to see what the next one is. It also makes me sad that I don’t know a single person who loves reading enough to stick with such a behemoth of a story. My coworkers couldn’t believe I was reading a SINGLE book over 400 pages, let alone the equivalent of 20 of them. More people need to be able to appreciate this

SCDarkSoul

Guess we'll be getting that rematch after all. If our guys have managed to use that headstart to improve themselves even further, beyond what they've already done, while Remi and company have just been sitting on their for even longer, then this should be good.

Olof Karlsson

Thanks for the chapter!

Michael Ferguson

🤤 mmmm delicious.

Nathaniel France

Fun chapter. First PoV seems like someone they might end up working with, which could be an interesting dynamic where you’ve got a “normal” person whose high enough tier to still be able to fight alongside the Ascenders, something we’ve never really gotten to see before. Second PoV I find interesting in that the idea of “killing” Ascenders is so foreign for this person to have any relative confidence speaks volumes about what or who they may actually be.

Alex

If I've got everything straight here, Tessa is a Clans assassin who specializes in body possession. She's currently puppeting a Corpie named Patricia and is leading a mercenary group called Patricia's Pincushions that has formed an alliance with a Pinnacle Elite from the Republic named Remi. The Clans and the Republic were at war when the Rasdale Tidal Breach occurred. The Ascenders speculated that the two Great Powers would call off their war in favor of focusing their manpower on the Breach. It looks like the Clans are splitting the difference by sending their operatives into the Breach with orders to cause mayhem among the Republic teams and any other targets of opportunity they come across along the way. Tessa seems determined to kill Remi and make an attempt on the Ascenders while she's in the Breach, and she's confident that her possession ability will let her pass off the blame onto the Corpies (who are probably already dead anyway). EDIT: Ian made a comment below that got me to re-read Tessa's part of the chapter - she's not puppeting Patricia, she's puppeting some unknown cultivator from the Sects.

Michael Ferguson

I thought everyone knows ascenders are good at avoiding death? Who is Tessa?

nolan saylor

Thanks for the chapter! Fun to see the chaos from a more normal person’s perspective A talent portrayed as a fire is nice. I’m reminded of aPGtE where the ‘talents’ are portrayed as a living beast or the cogs of a machine. -Though I don’t really recall others have portrayed their Talents as any sort of active -I am curious if you could use that mental image in forming a Concept, it seems probable. But what about using that image as an anchor? I think it’s possible once it exists as a Domain I am amused by the take on business Aster. “I have a bad feeling about this” Lore on Remi and Tessa. Always fun to see a bit beyond the curtain. “This body” fun. A created body or a stolen body? -dang, answered so soon Huh “foment” is an actual word. Only two PoVs. But different ones. Is the first guy going to meet the gang? Or is his opportunity something else?

C_Mantis

That IS what rah predicted and I edited the chapter to make it more inline with what that so if you read in the email it went fron 1.5 months to 4.

Alex

Seems to me like the possession ability is designed to work on corpses, not living hosts.

Sable

Thought it was supposed to be a six month advantage for our guys??

C_Mantis

I dont try to give political commentary. I simply didn't want to have a "spy who hates what they do" and so went with something more chipper. If that comes off as anythings its incidental.

C_Mantis

Edit made to fix the time advantage the gang got to better bring it in line with past comments. Sorry editing after a break.

Maakolo

Why do I get the same vibes from the Clans as Israel, lol

Anthony Vena

TFTC!

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SqrlyGrly

Good thing that special realm gave them protection against possession

Burgismik

Fun set up, feels like actual danger with risk for the team. With the tier difference fights are going to be so good 🤤

Kevin DD

Fun intro to the new book. As always other perspectives are great.

Jesse Nickerson

Finally ive been fiending!

Kasamuri

Thanks for the chapter!


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