llMiXll
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Thoughts on the comic
🕑 Added 2021-12-16 00:55:49 +0000 UTCWell, it has been a long ride to finish the short comic or at least to me. I still struggle a bit with the whole comic thing, specially on the consistency department where I feel I'm lacking off.
Even tho, I think the whole thing came out pretty decent for being the very first serious comic project I work on, still have a lot to learn, polish and work, that's why I wanted to keep it small and short. I know some of you maybe disappointed there was no more "action" but that was pretty much the reason, I didn't want to bite more than I can chew.
In any case as I said before this is not the final comic project you'll see from me, I hope to make more in the future and I'll take my time to think and write the script, maybe for the next part of this one? maybe for a complete new one, who knows!
In any case my friends I wanna thank you all for your support, I hope you liked the whole thing. I'll be sending you the comic tomorrow via PM in case you missed some pages or don't want to look around patreon to get it.
Cheers!
Comments
Holo Wolf
I really enjoyed the comic. It was veryfun to see how Kat turned from aloof into a horny, sloppy mess the second a juicy cock was waved in front of her. The different shots/angles during the "action" were also really great!
Nickname
Overall i thought it was a good set, similar to your Alphabet series. I enjoy comics over unrelated pics and this turned out great.
Leprekubek
Well, I think that everything what could be said, was above. From me, I can only add, that as your first comic, came out incredible and amazing. Expressions, action, plot (modest, but is!), and pace: all this you did in perfectly balance- or at least I think so. Congratulations and chapeau bas MIX, you did great, you can be proud of yourself! Can't wait another comic production from you!
Silvador
I really enjoyed this comic. I loved her expressions, they were always so... expressive! XD I also loved the angles, like the upskirt shot at the beginning, and the view under her when she erupted. The downward angle when it was all over. I also liked the smaller details, like her finger pulling down her top, and the focus on her sucking him, and fingering herself, etc. The angel & devil were cute and I'd love to see more of them. Overall, I loved this comic. The shortness isn't an issue. I don't feel like it ended too soon; I think it wrapped up nicely. For future comics, I hope to see some exhibution stuff, perhaps her sneakily masturbating/playing with herself in a crowded place. Or blatantly showing for someone, like previous pictures. (the escalator pic was SMOKING) As a follow-up to this, possibly her masturbating while driving down the empty road, or pulling over to "work out her heat". Maybe even while she waits for the truck to arrive. TL;DR Comic was great. Look forward to more.
Ninjablade1337
I think you're selling yourself short! That comic was well drawn and written. Pacing could have been the issue, perhaps one page a month would have been ok so you can focus on other art or animations (which you are also really good at in my opinion). Either way I support your decision and would want to see you do more long comics in the future.
Waves
Oh, well I was expecting action but it's fine. I liked it!
llMiXll
Thank you so much :') !! Sometimes I get too focused on the small mistakes and can't get my head off those haha
Azalean ladder
As the artist, of course you're going to see more than we do. That being said, I did not see the inconsistencies that you mentioned. I enjoy it alot!
