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Idea for a comic
🕑 Added 2021-05-13 12:59:37 +0000 UTCI had an idea for a comic while doing the drawing for Mother's Day, it is a really rough idea but I think it can lead to something interesting some day. I apologize for grammatical errors.
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Normal day, Mrs Wilde minding her own business in her house, when there is a sudden knock on the door, she opens up and there you have a young vixen with a fox cub
-Are you Mrs. Wilde? Nick's Mother?
Confused she answers: yes? and who are you?
-I'm... not important, I used to date your son
- I don't talk with him anymore, he left this house a long time ago
- I know... he used to mention that a lot, one night he... mentioned you lived near here
- I still dont know what do you want
-Kinda obvious isnt it?
Mrs. Wilde looks at the cub and she noted the... green eyes
-I told you he doesnt live here...
-You said that but I'm sure you know where he is
-Every fox in this city knows where he is, I'm pretty sure you saw the news
The young vixen gets quiet for a moment, like if she wants to say something but holds herself of crying
-I... know... but i think it would be a little more easy to contact him, through you?
Mrs Wilde stays quiet while looking at them both when the young vixen says:
-C-Can we come in? I would like to have this conversation... more privately
As she said that, Mrs Wilde looks around and see her nosy neighbor peeking through the window.
-Ok, come in
As they reach the living room Mrs. Wilde says:
-A glass of water, a cup of tea?
-N-no, thanks
The cub pulls her mother's skirt
-Mom, I'm thirsty
-Uhm, sorry sweetie, later
Mrs Wilde says promptly:
-I'll get a plastic cup, meanwhile, why dont you get more comfortable, I... want to hear about... this, I think
-Th-thank you, uhm, can I use your bathroom first?
Mrs Wilde stares at her, quietly points and says: the second door to the left. The vixen says "Thank you" as she puts her paw on the cub's head:
-Stay quiet and don't touch anything, okay sweetie?
-Yes mom
Mrs Wilde waited there watching the vixen going to the bathroom and listening to the door opening and closing. She then walked to the kitchen, grabbed a cup and filled with water, she glanced to the side and remember she had bought a new pack of cookies. She then grabs another cup and fill it up with milk, opened up the cookie package and poured some on a plastic plate. Then she returned to the living room.
-You said you were thirsty but would you like some cookies and a glass of milk?
The kid stayed quiet looking at her
-It is ok, you mom wont mind
The kid turned around to look at where her mom went, then looked back and after a few seconds he grabbed a cookie and the glass of milk
-So, what is your name?
The kid stayed quiet, giving little bites to the cookie and shyly taking lil sips of milk, looking at her once in a while
-Where do you and your mom live?
still quiet... After a few more minutes of silence, Mrs Wilde starts to worry
-Your mom is taking too long, is she sick?
the kid quietly moves his head side to side. Mrs Wilde goes to the bathroom and knocks on the door:
-Excuse me, is everything ok?
No reply, and no sound coming from inside. She opens her eyes wide and opens the door quickly. No vixen to be seen. She quickly looks at the front door, and runs towards it. Opens the door violently and gets out, looking desperately around for the vixen, but nowhere to be found then a quiet little voice came from inside the house:
-My name is Nicholas, mom said i had to stay quiet until she left, she said i was going to live here now
-Oh... no
END OF CHAPTER 1!
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Name of the cub will change, just a placeholder for now, I apologize if this seems a little rushed or weird, I'm not a writer XD, it all came to my head suddenly and needed to write it as fast as possible so I didnt forget it. What do you think? Would this be a good comic, or a fanfic would be ok? Should I use the Visual Novel Maker I just bought a few days ago? What name would you think the cub should have?
Thank you for taking your time to read all this, and thank you for all your support <3
