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Population Problems

🕑 Added 2023-04-30 04:39:26 +0000 UTC

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Blake Brown

Very nice character. Is there anyway we could see more different perspectives in latter chapters? I think that it would give an easier time with writing the chapters, and it would help with building the world around what is happening in the North.

Omgitsbakon

same was gonna say that recent chapters have been heavy on the monologue

Kevin Thunder

Excellent story. Since Harry needs gold, he should consider the alcoholic beverage industry. Almost everybody drinks in Westeros, because what else are they gonna do? The glass industry would also be a massive money maker. I know it has been done many times before, but it would churn ungodly amounts of gold. I can't remember, has he introduced the printing press? If not, that would be a good way to undercut the Maesters, bring education to the small folk, and earn a tidy profit at the same time. As for the population, plenty of poor people he might be able to lure there. They may convert out of gratitude once they find a better life. It isn't like the Seven and the South ever did anything for em. Of course, he needs skilled laborers, as well. River gates and chains to block access to the inner North would also be a smart plan. The rivers are how the Ironborn did so much damage in canon. Fishing villages along the coasts would also be useful.

Clephne

Loved it, it's a great story so far, the only critic I would have is that you tell rather than show, perhaps a bit too much. For example, when Harry is reflecting on a subject like slavery, it would be good if he did it while discussing with someone else, so that he could teach them something or he could even receive some valuable advice. I think it would make your fic flow a little bit smoother. Otherwise keep up the great work!


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