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June SS Reward #2 - Forming Desires

🕑 Added 2020-06-30 03:29:10 +0000 UTC

Comments

Gio

fantastic !!! good to see imagination !! hummmm now she makes a ???? second sculpture of who ...

Daniel Lee

This definitely deserves a sequel

B.E. Grove

Thanks! ^_^

MDKang

Oh man the ending is so wholesome T_T Good job!

GooPop

With your explanation I see your view point but without it I was lost. This new one is lovely all there same considering girls with big boobs. Shame is only pg13

B.E. Grove

I can see where you're coming from, and the story probably could've been longer or more direct in building their relationship. I actually had a different panel 36-37 originally that didn't have the line about "private time" and instead just said 'hmmm' (I couldn't resist the implied visual of Brooke masturbating to the statute though, so went with that direction later on). The holding of hands at the end, while implying the relationship was more about the journey they were both about to take together and how the power imbalance had been resolved (it started with Jo at a disadvantage to the more 'worldly' Brooke but then flipped Brooke finding herself infatuated and unable to stop herself). I'll keep your view in mind though in future about being a bit clearer with those beats throughout.

B.E. Grove

It'll definitely be on the list for the next Re-Boobening, though I'm only planning to do one of those a quarter.

B.E. Grove

Yeah I liked Jo's in particular for this one. Also her general look I felt went quite well.

Fun little story. Love the relationship between them. Please tell me there are plans for a sequel.

GooPop

Not that there is anything wrong with them being a couple but story wise that is such a huge leap. One minute shes telling her to do her private buisness in private next minute she is interested in her enough to hold her hand and be suggestive... hmmm