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43. Change

🕑 Added 2023-11-23 14:10:46 +0000 UTC

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BrGustl

It should be okay? Not sure. Normally when you feature theory I concentrate more on how that might be deployed. And I understood it decently, though its a big more concise than normally and has the potential to feature more questiond than answers than it normally does. If thats bad? Not sure, its fine I'd say. Only a small question? Bountiful harvest? That sounds awfully versatile is it a combined infusion combining taste and ability to carry many fruits or develope faster depending on the plant with maybe some resistances and durability mixed i to it? I mean if they double or tripletheir vitality... Thats a lot. Also doed some infusion go down the drain after a while? I mean if the vitality makes the plant more bountiful you would expect to drain that infusion over time, espacially after a harnest, UNLESS the plant has the ability to refill the once given vitality, even against time. Depending on that answer it might be humongous on world building. It can lead to future with "druids" blessing the fields or it can lead to prowling citys since its hard to come up to a food shortage. Also shouldn't aloe consider slowly what she need to do before she gets dragged into Sadinha again? I mean shes already about a week there and has just four of them and she knows that the Emir isn't taking no for an answer and also how short her mothers pause was. She might want to think about if she even wants to sell those drugs since shes earning money as a scribe anyway and if she wants to take ternar leafs with her to come up with solutions, which won't cost her her head

Thatagui

Moral of the story: If you are stuck on a problem, the solution is doing drugs.

Epsilon Twilight

I normally do a rewrite of every chapter because I am, unfortunately, a perfectionist, but I haven't done so in this one. Please do tell if you feel this chapter is of a lower quality than others.


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