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💥 Bulma - Heatwave Unleashed (COMICS) 🔷 [VIP Exclusive]

🕑 Added 2025-03-28 21:23:32 +0000 UTC

Comments

Jason LaRue

Loved 98 and 99 with the full cheeks.

JTastic

I’m just glad you’re doing it!

Jared

This is great!

NaughtyPuff

Thanks for your feedback hahaha! I'll think about Gravity Falls 🌚

NaughtyPuff

I wrote a script beforehand by myself and pasted the lines into the images. Next time I will take more time to do it, try to bring a more immersive story

JP

Do you write the speech bubbles yourself or are they AI generated too?

JP

I think it’s good start. Having some actual two way dialogue with the male speaking too instead of just the female monologuing would be a fun way to expand on things. If there’s a case where it makes sense for the male to be a specific character (Dipper and Mabel Pines perhaps…😈) instead of just a random dude, I think that could be pretty great.

NaughtyPuff

Perfect! The next one I'll do more carefully to avoid these mistakes, and I'll also add dialogue for the reader. Thank you for the feedback! 😊🩷🩷

Vern

Not necessarily. But I noticed copied dialogue on different panels. Maybe a better story as to what is going on. It seems Bulma is talking to herself for the most part