Bullzer
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Chapter 15 is Finished
🕑 Added 2023-12-22 08:03:19 +0000 UTCI just added about 7,145 words to the end of my chapter fifteen post, which is normally what I aim for in a regular chapter. I considered making it chapter sixteen all on its own, but there just wasn't enough progress to justify that, in my opinion. I look back to shorter chapters I've written, one of which was like three thousand words, and I regret not putting more into those. So now, we're getting some bulky fuckers. With the new addition, chapter fifteen comes out to 18,326 words. Go check it out. Should only be a few posts down. :)
Chapter 16 will be one for the ages. I think I might start working on that right now.
Comments
Bullzer
I won't say that their relationship will be a romantic one, but there will be more of that than with previous duos. The tension that you're mentioning will increase in Ch. 16. Miz won't be the oblivious partner that past ones have been. There will be standoffs. Can't wait to finish & release this one.
sparseslayer
This was a great chapter; Emiru and Josh's chemistry was really well done. Really dig the fact that they hit it off right away! Personally, Can't speak for everyone but I wouldn't mind Josh and Emi having more passionate sex or Josh making her feel sexually and possibly romantically satisfied. I also like the idea of Miz thinking he better treat her right or he'll lose her. Really adds a lot tension and build-up to when both Josh and Emi have sex. Besides that, there is solid direction to where chapter 16 is going!
TheFan
Became a member after reading chapter 15, cant wait for chapter 16
