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🕑 Added 2018-06-27 03:22:35 +0000 UTC

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Michelle Fus

thats a tough one

Nico

Question: whose taller, tuls or pedri?

epimythia

Today's update isn't technically a cliffhanger, but it's so weirdly ominous and I am dying of curiosity for next week's update.

Kadaashi

that third pedri panel is making me think of the dos equis meme ggggfjhg god these panels are SOO good.

Emily Bielski

Ava: "oh is that what your ring is for?" Odin: "SHIT NO NO H-HOLD ON"

Alex R

Pedri saying "Oh the grave you have dug for yourself!" while cackling like that is the best panel in the whole comic

xmiki

I cannot describe in words how much I am living for this. I'm laughing so much. I like the change you made from 'Wrathia' to 'wife' - makes it so much more amusing.

No One In Particular

The dialogue is fine, as you said he does not know Pedri's wife is involved with Ava. So as a reader it looks like he is about to connect some dots that will cause stress and possibly hilarity to ensue. It works fine.

No One In Particular

The second to last image is hilarious, Pedri looks like he is about to lean over and give a disappointed dad lecture with those squinty eyes.

Erin Jacquot

PUT THE GLASSES ON AVAAAAA xD This scene is gold xD

George Simpson

Or maybe the way she had her warriors' souls randomly disperse out into the universe? Maybe he favored more direct resistance?

Kat-o

I'm guessing that 'death slime' refers to the potions Wrathia made? From the sound of it, I'm guessing it didn't taste very good (poor Pedri)

Magenta T. Squircle

Honestly, I was confused at first with death slime and lamprey. At first I thought he was talking about Nevy and somehow knew what happened. But then I read the comments and everything makes sense to me now. I guess he meant Ava like she was some parasite or something. I feel so dumb. :P Thanks everyone.

Shae

both pedri and wrathia are absolute fucking treasures, and i can only imagine their child ascending time and space with their facial expression capabilities.

Shae

Oh Ava, you sweet, sweet lamprey. Honestly Odin i feel like if you kept feeding Ava cookies she'll forget she ever brought it up. Also what would be the lesser part of Wrathia's death slime? Her terrible planning? The lamprey likeness?

Madison R

Glad to finally get a glimpse of the chemistry between Odin and Pedri, love it. Also the line “my wife’s death slime...” gold 👌🏻 Can’t wait to see this update finished

Cephalon Ghost

lol, no worries!

Quinn

PEDRI HAS ALWAYS COME THROUGH FOR ME I'm dying over here omf

Coldau

I'm cackling at this entire situation

Cam

This is great xD

Michelle Fus

cool yeah i didnt mean to sound like i was jumping down your throat LOL i just was lookin to make sure you got the dialogue or if i would have to tweak it ^^;;;