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🕑 Added 2018-08-10 20:41:17 +0000 UTC
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Lady of Monsters

Gil: "What in titans name is this shit?"

Doodles

Ah I see. Tricky.

Michelle Fus

I'm not sure I can do that because it might confuse people as to why they are boxes in the first place since I've never used them before :S People like to run away with small details and create whole theories around them, which I would like to avoid. PLUS Titan is the only character I would like to keep to square speech bubbles for story purposes, but if you have any other ideas I am open to them~

Doodles

Make sure the text is in narration boxes, not speech bubbles. Separates the speech from the scene.

Michelle Fus

That sounds good, thanks I will try something like that

Cephalon Ghost

Im on mobile and cant fogure out how to reply on it: but i think maybe if Gil maybe had his eyes shut and face kinda scrunched since be’s still dwelling on what happened, right?

Michelle Fus

no, i guess i should make that clearer some how? its just supposed to be a cut to what these two are doing while dialog is going

Cephalon Ghost

Oooo, is Gil overhearing?


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