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Kelri's Gain Part 33: An Unwanted Ally
🕑 Added 2019-03-21 04:01:01 +0000 UTC
The latest part to Kelri's story. A week early for your benefit!
Find the first part of Kelri's gain is here if you haven't read it yet: https://www.deviantart.com/dohavocom/art/Kelri-s-Gain-Part-1-Get-Stuffed-775161541
Want to ask something of me? Want to ask something of the characters and have them answer in character? Stop by the discord!
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Juxtaterrestrial
We actually get quite a bit of traffic on Weightgaming. Individual threads might be quiet but overall the site is doing well.
Meade
Those are some good points. I think before diving into writing a story I should definitely be outlining a beginning middle and end before starting. As opposed to just winging it as you go. Thanks for the tips. As for the FM mod I personally am okay with that as Im getting more enjoyment out of the stories you're making. Just figured id inquire as I do visit WeightGaming every now and then only so see the site doesn't get much traffic. But that's just the way of it unfortunately. Hope this stuff gets more popular in the future :)
Juxtaterrestrial
Yeah I've been getting a few pictures a month done by KB for the stories. I probably should announce here when I've gotten more done. i probably will do that. Thanks for the praise! =) If i was going to offer advice for writing, i would say that you should try to make sure that every interaction serves something of the greater plot. That might just be illustrating a characters opinion on something, or it could be some kind of revelation, but it should all have a purpose. Having a bigger idea of a larger plot also helps for that. But as with everything, it's going to take practice! Don't be afraid of your stuff not feeling right to you. You can always go back and revise your work to make it better. As for the FM mod: it's coming. Eventually. I've not been very productive on it to be honest. Lack of motivation. I've got like 3 writing projects I'm working on: my novel, the story series, another mod project. they have me pretty busy so i haven't had much time/energy to work on FM.
Meade
I have to check the DA page more often. This whole time I had no clue you had Olympic Dames doing art for this. Great stuff. I may have to up my donations : ) Story is great so far by the way. Love the attention to detail and the fact that its not just pure fan service. Im just starting out writing some of my own and that aspect is hard to resist to say the least. But keep it up! These stories make the Sunday nights that much more enjoyable. PS: If you dont mind me asking. Whats the status of your FM mod?
