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Bellflower Part 17

🕑 Added 2019-09-05 12:38:10 +0000 UTC

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Jennifer

Nah it’s fine, no need to apologize. Just like most of my comments it’s more something I feel like bringing to your attention for you to decide.

BNevis

Yeah, keeping up a schedule like this, I'm becoming painfully aware of a lot of my ticks. Sorry. I should look to articulate those bits a little nicer, I just feel obligated to keep mentioning the progress, even if its in the form of a brief hit. The next one starts with Rachel noticing some of her own changes & I'm liking it, at least from the writing perspective.

Jennifer

Rachel stays mindful and gutfull, as usual. Also idk if her imagination but there’s been a lot of talk of the girls “looking bigger” over the past couple chapters as well. Just the, er, little things you notice


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