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The Bellflower Part 10

🕑 Added 2019-07-29 04:20:27 +0000 UTC

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BNevis

While I enjoy the nesting doll image of three large women feebly trying to push each other through doors, it's very optimistic that you think Courtney's going to be up & around for that much longer. lol

BNevis

Honestly, doing nightmares felt a little like cheating & maybe a little too trope-y but after her encounter, if there was ever a good time...? I might institute a few more here & there in the future. Very sparingly! But they could be interesting as things progress & evolve over time. Getting oddly more specific & such maybe. And maybe they're not always Rachel, & maybe not all of them are even nightmares...? Don't know yet. As far as Courtney, I think she's a sweet, kind-hearted girl who is aware enough to understand that the company she works for does a few bad things here & there. Like she's a little less flaky & naive than Holly, but I wouldn't say that necessarily makes her willfully evil or greedy (in that sense) or anything. Like their roles in the HR department, they're kind of removed from any of the ominous stuff. Ultimately I feel like Courtney would like to think (& I do too) she wouldn't betray her morals if she was ever put up to doing something she personally objected to. But it weighs on her mind every so often too. So from that perspective, I think she can see both sister's sides in that fight. But beyond that, yeah, it's also kind of an extension to other aspects of her personality too. Like "Oh, they might be kind of gross & evil, but they pay good" doesn't seem too far removed from "Oh, this waffle sundae is probably loaded with calories & a bad idea, but zomg delicious!" She can be aware, but is often maybe a little selective... about it sometimes...? I think that was more what I was attempting to go for than have her go complete "Oh, we're totally the baddies!" More caught up in the benefits she's reaping than anything willfully negative.

Chumlee99

@Sickstar who in turn will be outgrowing doorways and buses and some other woman will have to help her through because Holly will be too busy trying to help an even fatter Courtney get through the door in the first place. Like image an 800 Courtney wedges in a door so a 500 Holly is pushing on her giant ass only she’s stuck in her own way so there’s a 400 lb coworker pushing on Holly’s ass and all three are helpless stuck

BNevis

Only it's just poor Holly...

Jennifer

Woah, looks like the stress is really getting to Rachel. I wonder if she’ll be having nightmares like these reoccuringly. It definitely was a fun chapter right out the bat because of it. Even Rachel’s brain is feeling she’s hitting an inevitable spiral. I wonder if the nightmare would change in the future as she gains. If she’s a sleepwalker, so much more weight might just turn her to sleepeating Lol. I honestly thought it was interesting Courtney was fully aware of what the company does, but works there anyway for the excess she gets back. Kind of telling of what her character is?

Chumlee99

Reading Courtney’s struggle getting on the bus reminded me of that scene from Dumbo where the elephant got stuck in the doorway and it took like 20 people to push it in.


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