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Bellflower Part 44

🕑 Added 2021-05-31 01:13:41 +0000 UTC

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Jennifer

aaaAAAAAHHH This is so overwhelmingly sweet, I’d think it was prepared by Penny! 😱 The interactions between all the characters flowed really well this chapter, despite the tension it is somewhat sweet that the sisters’ weights have become normal enough for them to fling sarcasm at each other. So obviously I personally had been anticipating a Rachel/Cami moment like this happening for awhile, and I gotta say, fantastic job! If I must be perfectly honest, I find this kind of romance much more enjoyable and satisfying than a lot of mainstream media romance. And I mean that in opposition to the “huge sudden burst declaration of love” not the WG part LOL. I think it comes across as very natural because I’d say the biggest element in play here is “comfort.” Cami and Rachel simply… get along! The casual cuddling and butt bumps were of course extremely cute, but it really is those moments like Cami shutting off Penny for Rachel… without even knowing fully why she’s uncomfortable for her? Its considerate, it shows Camille doesn’t need to know about Penny to care and make adjustments for Rachel. And I like that a lot! A lot a lot! The casualness of it all too, so much so to the fact they’re still not quite sure on their relationship. It’s just sweet and more realistically depicts a romance where it’s two people slowly letting themselves be more and more vulnerable for the other. …Which is obviously being exploited by Penny to get Rachel back hard on the gainey train LOL. Time to find out why wives get “mom bods” and how far the dimensions of one can be pushed, Rachel But, seriously though, I know we’re having our haha heehee wg story fun, but this was a very adult, maturely written chapter and I can tell you put a lot of effort and time into this. Great job! I’ve been overgushing of course, but I guess you can say it was… Worth the Weight! 😱

Josh Gibson

Great to have another chapter of this story and one of your best I think.


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